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Andrew Handley (psYchic_spOnge)
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Member Since 12/23/2007
Last Online 08/08/2008
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About Myself: I enjoy using my thinking talents to squeeze my sustenance out of the system with little of actually anything done on my part. Mind expansion and alkaloid extraction are my two hobbies besides writing. I guess I'd consider myself a recreational chemist and botanist. As the great late Dr. Hunter S. Thompson once said, "He who makes a beast out of himself gets rid of the pain of being a man."

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Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
Jun 27, 2008Still thinking of youPoetry 90
Feb 2, 2008Do you ever feel like you're dying?Poetry 267
Jan 19, 2008Corrosive GreenPoetry 202
Jan 16, 2008Death by ImaginationAdventure 449
Jan 14, 2008Darkfire Ch.2- RevelationsScience Fiction 236
Jan 5, 2008highway 109Horror 354
Dec 23, 2007Darkfire Ch.1Science Fiction 324

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Title article: Corrosive Green
Date: 2008-01-21 02:35:44
correct
yea just my personal thoughts on a popular plant

Title article: Space Assassin
Date: 2008-01-12 22:35:40

this is the first short story thats given me a boner... 
jk but seriously....this was pretty good. It flowed really well and held my interest til the end. I feel like alot of the action was too condensed though, especially in the first paragraph.  
 
one other thing that bothered me a little was that Alliel took the shape of the kids because "He let his defenses drop at the sight of small boys.” but earlier you made it apparent that vladmir knew it was alliel he was fighting. "He hated Alliel." i would try to avoid inconsistencies like that in future stories (which I would be very interested in reading btw). 
 
the ending was totally unexpected and very good. I was wondering how he managed to escape the nuclear pulse rocket though. 
the technology was all very original and imaginative. keep it up

Title article: Darkfire Ch.1
Date: 2008-01-12 15:06:19

thanks vard. i think thatl make it a little more engaging. maybe thats just cuz i wrote it though. tear me down guys anywhere you can. i want to get better at writing.

Title article: Darkfire Ch.1
Date: 2008-01-11 15:12:19
question
some of the stuff is supposed to be italics, to emphasize when the main character is kinda talking to himself. it didnt copy that way though and i was wondering how to edit the post.

Title article: Darkfire Ch.1
Date: 2008-01-05 22:38:17

thanks guys im glad you like it. its my first short story. im working on the next but its hard to find time. it should be up soon

Title article: Dark Balance
Date: 2007-12-24 15:50:39
crazy
some of the sentences could use some reworking. 
 
"The assailants almost laughing at the spectacle of the strange kid wanting to take on four armed men with a ninja sword took a pot shot with the weapon one of them had and hit him in the lower torso grazing his side, he fell to the floor." 
i had to reread that one a few times. 
 
awesome story tho. im about to head over to part 2

Title article: Computer ILM
Date: 2007-12-24 15:41:05

clever and original

Title article: On the Origin of Life on Earth
Date: 2007-12-23 17:46:09
thought provoking
chris iv been reading your stuff. its really good. youv got a crazy imagination

Title article: Home
Date: 2007-12-23 17:33:10
like it
puts a nice spin on your average "shoot zombies in the head" 
theres like another layer of depth that adds so much

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