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Member Since	12/20/2007
Last Online	09/03/2008
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Website/Blog:

stoneread.blogspot.com/

About Myself:

I have a lifelong love of reading and a secret desire to be an author, that my chronic bouts of procrastination have always managed to stall. I read The Lord of The Rings when I was nine, and from that most excellent starting point have always felt my favourite genre to be fantasy, although I consider the definition of fantasy to be as broad as the mind can wander. I would like to recommend the following authors: Brian Lumley, Katherine Kerr, Raymond E Feist, Robert Jordan, Jean M Auel, Anne Rice, Frank Herbert, Isaac Asimov and of course good ol' Tolkein. Wikipedia them or something, they're all excellent storytellers!

Stories

Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Aug 25, 2008	Ode to Chaabuk	Poetry	276
Aug 24, 2008	Omniboredom	Poetry	80
Aug 17, 2008	Some Haiku's	Poetry	118
Jul 9, 2008	Death (thought I'd have a go)	Poetry	140
Jul 8, 2008	Wiggedy Wack	Poetry	263
Jun 30, 2008	Tired Avenue Dirkin/Anna Devine	Poetry	343
Jun 28, 2008	Jigsaw Poem	Miscellaneous Stories	194
Jun 12, 2008	For you	Poetry	178
May 18, 2008	Money: A life's worth	Miscellaneous Stories	397
May 3, 2008	New Topic # 5	Humor	239
Apr 20, 2008	Procrastinator	Poetry	326
Mar 17, 2008	Your Life	Poetry	296
Mar 11, 2008	End of Minds (part five)	Science Fiction	363
Feb 10, 2008	Magnets	Poetry	383
Feb 7, 2008	So there I was 5...	Humor	940
Feb 5, 2008	House of Minds (part four)	Science Fiction	493
Jan 31, 2008	Strength	Poetry	352
Jan 27, 2008	Deja vu	Humor	652
Jan 21, 2008	Battle of Minds (part three)	Science Fiction	491
Jan 16, 2008	Frogs in Slow Boiling Water	Poetry	474

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Comments

Title article: POETRY: MY SUICIDAL KISSES
Date: 2008-08-22 00:48:37

Kind of simple, but nice

Title article: Project 30, Chapter 19
Date: 2008-08-22 00:46:18

where in the hell was the girl with the champagne tray (a bit thirsty). Maybe with Dirkin I assumed...

Oh man, your whole story made me laugh from start to end. I loved the figjam, the reference to the crown game that most wont even get. Well done Mr Potter, for a laugh like that I barely noticed that the admin wasnt poisoned in this version of events

Title article: Parapraxis
Date: 2008-08-22 00:37:05

She ran through the ditch and followed the path Rob and his car had taken, she stopped as she reached the fence and looked at it. It had been thrown from the car during the rolls, and it seemed almost intact. She reached down and picked it up, holding it in her two arms

This needs to be rewritten to establish this is where she picks up the gun, its not very clear. I think the story was very intense and the dialogue was interesting. I like the line "mustof" as one word. I am unsure why she would behave as she did at the end, I guess revenge for him trying to kill her? Still it didnt seem right for her to go to that extreme when Rob was trapped and no longer a danger. Or maybe it was instinct ;)

Title article: Walking Along the Shore
Date: 2008-08-22 00:22:12

I think that standing on the ocean and listening to the waves speaks to the same spot in each of us, of universal peace. Simple and beautiful message in this poem

Title article: SECOND SEX.
Date: 2008-08-22 00:18:40

The title caught my attention, but it was another excellent and worthy poem that I found. Good to see you at your best Terry. I think this showed the desperate nature of sex sometimes, hurried, awkward and intense

Title article: The Demented Quiet One
Date: 2008-08-22 00:02:49

A very disturbing tale told well through prose. Enjoyable to read hannah

Title article: WHY must I write
Date: 2008-08-21 06:05:41

I agree with the message, but you left out one good reason: for fun!

Title article: WHY must I write
Date: 2008-08-21 06:05:40

I agree with the message, but you left out one good reason: for fun!

Title article: Project 30, Chapter 17
Date: 2008-08-20 22:58:09

Ahah! Now we know who it was (or do we?) I'm going to have to google the lemon dance...

Title article: The Book Cellar
Date: 2008-08-18 23:37:55

Dude this is a really cool concept. I would like to see more explanation on how frank managed to stalk her so intimately over the years without detection, maybe he has hidden cameras in her house? maybe he was the janitor at her school? I found this story captivating and twisted, one of your finest max

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Forum

Last 10 Forum Posts

Date	Subject	Category	Hits
09/01/2008 06:24:40	HBO Def Poetry	Off-Topic	73
08/25/2008 23:04:03	Re:How Do You?	Off-Topic	1315
08/25/2008 09:42:14	Re:Ahahaha	Off-Topic	10925
08/24/2008 21:00:20	Re:pinky and the brain	Off-Topic	398
08/24/2008 20:57:49	Re:Ahahaha	Off-Topic	10925
08/22/2008 00:08:53	Re:THATS IT!! I CALL Shenanigans	Off-Topic	4035
08/22/2008 00:07:17	Re:pinky and the brain	Off-Topic	398
07/13/2008 07:50:29	Re:Ahahaha	Off-Topic	10925
07/09/2008 19:41:07	Re:Let's clear the air	Off-Topic	1321
07/09/2008 19:01:04	Re:Let's clear the air	Off-Topic	1321

Connection

Mugen (Dirkin)'s connections

Ashutosh Ghildiyal (Ashutosh)

Project 30 (Project 30)

Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

fabian villegas (fevilleg)

jesse (jesse2008)

Anna DeVine (Sad Sara)

CARMEN WRIGHT (20CARMEN_NiCOLE11)

Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)

Alamo St-Jean (The_Gimp)

JS Brown (Crazy Scott)

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Guestbook

Name	Entry
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 08/11/2008 15:14:41 Yeah, it's gonna have a lot more of a fantasy plot. I'm about to start the prologue in a little bit, and work out the plot some more.
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 08/10/2008 19:08:36 Hehe enjoy! I think it turned out great. There is a sequel in the talks. You think you'd be interested in doing another chapter?
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 08/09/2008 19:16:19 Hey, man, what's going on? You havent posted any stories (other then Project 30) in a really long time. I miss your writing.
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 07/26/2008 05:31:34 Lets see, you got me addicted to Cracked as if it was really Crack...now you're tellin me about a free game online...damn you.
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 07/14/2008 16:34:05 Dude, this has been bugging me forever. What game is your picture from?
C.D.Walker (indianaman130)	Created On: 07/09/2008 16:24:48 The only authors i haven't read from your list are Kerr and Auel. Shame about Jordan, started reading the Wheel in 98.
jesse (jesse2008) Blog	Created On: 07/05/2008 19:02:38 Very nice work Dirkin. You should update that blog, I'll would be glad to link up. But, that's beside the point. You keep on writing, you're doing a hell of a job.
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) a wasteland	Created On: 07/02/2008 22:33:51 A zombie says hurry the hell up with new literal man story
Lori Branson (lorislittlesecret) right now...not sure...	Created On: 05/04/2008 08:54:51 Nope..not me, you!
Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)	Created On: 05/02/2008 07:08:16 Edited By Jutta Motrin (CELL) On: 05/25/2008 19:59:19 Okay, here's a better one: Why don't Monsters eat Clowns? Because they taste funny. Heh... Feedback from Mugen (Dirkin): Hmm i don't know any mexican jokes... (aussie), try this: why did the boy fall off the swingset? he had no arms.