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Last Online	07/05/2008
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Website/Blog:

stoneread.blogspot.com/

About Myself:

I have a lifelong love of reading and a secret desire to be an author, that my chronic bouts of procrastination have always managed to stall. I read The Lord of The Rings when I was nine, and from that most excellent starting point have always felt my favourite genre to be fantasy, although I consider the definition of fantasy to be as broad as the mind can wander. I would like to recommend the following authors: Brian Lumley, Katherine Kerr, Raymond E Feist, Robert Jordan, Jean M Auel, Anne Rice, Frank Herbert, Isaac Asimov and of course good ol' Tolkein. Wikipedia them or something, they're all excellent storytellers!

Stories

Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Jun 30, 2008	Tired Avenue Dirkin/Anna Devine	Poetry	205
Jun 28, 2008	Jigsaw Poem	Miscellaneous Stories	103
Jun 12, 2008	For you	Poetry	125
May 18, 2008	Money: A life's worth	Miscellaneous Stories	349
May 3, 2008	New Topic # 5	Humor	171
Apr 20, 2008	Procrastinator	Poetry	254
Mar 17, 2008	Your Life	Poetry	246
Mar 11, 2008	End of Minds (part five)	Science Fiction	293
Feb 10, 2008	Magnets	Poetry	320
Feb 7, 2008	So there I was 5...	Humor	860
Feb 5, 2008	House of Minds (part four)	Science Fiction	414
Jan 31, 2008	Strength	Poetry	293
Jan 27, 2008	Deja vu	Humor	591
Jan 21, 2008	Battle of Minds (part three)	Science Fiction	428
Jan 16, 2008	Frogs in Slow Boiling Water	Poetry	409
Jan 14, 2008	Alliance of Minds (part two)	Science Fiction	448
Jan 6, 2008	The Adventures of Literal Man!	Humor	689
Jan 3, 2008	A moment shared and lost	Poetry	403
Jan 1, 2008	Lessons	Science Fiction	829
Jan 1, 2008	The Draught	Poetry	471

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Mugen (Dirkin)'s connections

jesse (jesse2008)

Anna DeVine (Sad Sara)

CARMEN WRIGHT (20CARMEN_NiCOLE11)

Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)

Alamo St-Jean (The_Gimp)

JS Brown (Crazy Scott)

Patrick O. (Roadkill315)

Christopher Chadwyck (Chadwyck45)

Billy (Vango)

Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom)

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Guestbook

Name	Entry
jesse (jesse2008) Blog	Created On: 07/05/2008 19:02:38 Very nice work Dirkin. You should update that blog, I'll would be glad to link up. But, that's beside the point. You keep on writing, you're doing a hell of a job.
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) a wasteland	Created On: 07/02/2008 22:33:51 A zombie says hurry the hell up with new literal man story
Lori Branson (lorislittlesecret) right now...not sure...	Created On: 05/04/2008 08:54:51 Nope..not me, you!
Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)	Created On: 05/02/2008 07:08:16 Edited By Jutta Motrin (CELL) On: 05/25/2008 19:59:19 Okay, here's a better one: Why don't Monsters eat Clowns? Because they taste funny. Heh... Feedback from Mugen (Dirkin): Hmm i don't know any mexican jokes... (aussie), try this: why did the boy fall off the swingset? he had no arms.
Michelle Huff (allmine) hmmm	Created On: 05/02/2008 06:48:11 Nice you pain in the ass. You're it
R.E.Potter (R.E.Potter) This e-mail address is being protected from spam bots, you need JavaScript enabled to view it	Created On: 04/19/2008 06:39:34 The lone man on his private island ...according to storiesville map(4/19/08...whats it like to be way down under...by the way,,do toilets really flush in the opposite direction then ours do in the states?
Lori Branson (lorislittlesecret) Texas	Created On: 04/11/2008 10:25:49 Yeah I am sure that you want a massage cause your back hurts...NOT!!!
Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^) Behind you.	Created On: 04/10/2008 06:57:14 Edited By Yahaira Nunez (Pez) On: 04/10/2008 07:00:10 Ahh, Megumi... pretty. Megumi = Blessing Hee. 'Mugen(Dirkin)' I'm so happy! I'll change mine too
Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)	Created On: 03/31/2008 13:13:50 Mugen.
Christian Wright (The 13th) Moodyville	Created On: 03/19/2008 12:29:21 Just thought and say hi, now I know youre a fan of Home and away we will be buddys to the end. Great stories,the mind series and so there I was were fab.

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Comments

Total number of comments: 822

Title article: Cloud In The Water
Date: 2008-07-05 19:45:09

A lot of people seem to think they know the 'rules' of poetry. I think that people who demand instant understanding of a poems story and its point don't look deep enough, or arent willing to be creative and try to imagine what the point might be without being told first. I would give the example of the Doors, some of our most celebrated songs written by a poetic master, with lyrics that are often vague and random, no literal meaning.
When I read this poem I thought of a word association games played by psychiatrists and patients, with memories flashing to the surface. It didnt flow when read out loud which could be fixed with some slight changes

Title article: Tired Avenue Dirkin/Anna Devine
Date: 2008-07-03 23:17:43

I see the poem being as about enjoying the moment to forget your troubles, elnalda. Mr Potter, I wrote the first and third stanzas!

Title article: Driving Ms. Daisy
Date: 2008-07-03 20:16:46

She was 77? ewww! Hey man I gave this a chance because I'm not bothered by sexual content, so here's my review: The story was a little lacking for the most part, at first it seemed more like a penthouse letter. As it went on I appreciated the backstory and motivation of the character, although to me he comes off as a creepy wierdo, getting aroused by a granny. The keywords at the bottom made me laugh, because when he was fifteen and she molested him I thought: gross child molester, If it was an old man and a fifteen year old girl it would be just as gross. Anyway I found this disturbing, but I think there was some ok writing alongside the sexual content

Title article: Lack of Closure
Date: 2008-07-03 20:05:45

I liked the straight forward nature of this; often poetry gets so vague and abstract it can be hard to understand. This was an outpouring of raw emotions.

Title article: The Beginning
Date: 2008-07-03 20:02:40

This was nice, short and sweet. I dont get the title though?

Title article: Test + Torture = Testure
Date: 2008-07-03 20:00:59

This gave me shudders when I imagined (quite rightly) that it was a human on the table, as his eye was being popped out. Animal rights are one of those areas of life in shades of grey and brown, like the doctors, where noone will ever conceed the argument of ends justifying the means. Thought provoking story, well done

Title article: ThE sToRm
Date: 2008-07-03 19:51:08

That was very interesting! I got what you were aiming for I think. Five for experimentation, and also for showing something I have always believed; that font, layout and formatting can have a subconscious effect on the mood of what you are reading.

Title article: Corruption
Date: 2008-07-03 19:48:36

Wow man, you are an extremely stylish and talented writer! I find your narration addictive, I cant think of a better way of saying that once I start reading I cant stop until its over. As for the story, well it was interesting but maybe a little confusing, I wondered who the 'couple of morons' were? Also, it doesnt really say why he was in the cell, unlesz its implied that he has anger issues and violence towards his wife? Anyway, great job man

Title article: Building Steam with a Grain of God
Date: 2008-07-02 21:06:32

Wow! That was absoultely mesmerising I felt like I was listening to Jim morrison narrate this. I completely agree with the message, its depressing when you realize exactly how much society shapes our destiny, that whatever we end up doing its where we were pushed to go. Kudos 5 stars

Title article: The Exorcism of Oprah Winfrey
Date: 2008-07-02 20:55:00

Ahahahaha. I love an episode of south park where oprah's vagina takes people hostage. For some reason that woman is ripe for the parodyin'. Good stuff