There Is Only One Star, Chapter 5

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Darkening, Chapter 1

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About Myself: I love writing, I love reading aswell. My favourite books are Pride & Predudice, Cathy's boook, Cathy's Key, and the twilight series. I live in England. I'm 16 years old. I love Slipknot. I like dogs more than cats.

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Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
Aug 26, 2008Paranoid/ForgetMiscellaneous Stories 79
Aug 23, 2008The coastPoetry 112
Aug 20, 2008in your eyes *short*Poetry 92
Aug 17, 2008Heaven Sent, chapter 4/4Romance 83
Aug 16, 2008Goodbye, my loverPoetry 132
Jul 26, 2008I am alone - the storyHorror 261
Jul 25, 2008I am alone - the poem, read this before the storyPoetry 299
Jul 23, 2008Heavan Sent, chapter 3/4Horror 78
Jul 22, 2008Heavan Sent, chapter 2/4Romance 116
Jul 17, 2008Until we meet again...Poetry 242
Jul 9, 2008A cruel passionHorror 184
Jul 8, 2008In the heart, Chapter 2Horror 80
Jul 1, 2008Question of LovePoetry 144
Jun 30, 2008DeceptionMiscellaneous Stories 111
Jun 21, 2008Blood Price, Chapter 2Horror 128
Jun 14, 2008Blood Price, Chapter 1Horror 275
Jun 9, 2008In the heart - chapter 1, Chapter 1Romance 180
Jun 8, 2008At The End there is NothingMiscellaneous Stories 192
Jun 8, 2008In The Heart - Preface, Chapter 0Romance 112
Jun 6, 2008Ice, Chapter 2Adventure 84
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Title article: The Smell of Fear
Date: 2008-08-17 07:05:14
cute
This was really cute, it's nice n' light hearted which makes for a pleasant read :) I found myself laughing, which I really liked because it's such good quality writing. 
 
Good one! 
 
Jess

Title article: A Love Poem
Date: 2008-08-17 04:52:24
Beautiful
Beautiful poem, I don't know what girl wouldn't love this, I know I do. This poem is really well written, the rythem is the same throughout and the words are passionate. 
 
Love it 
 
Jess

Title article: WHY must I write
Date: 2008-08-16 13:25:46
Nice.
ooo I like this one. It's simple, yet I am left thinking about after I've finished reading it. I'm sure this poem puts into words how most of us writers feel; that we simply WANT to write because it's what we enjoy. It's clever to make it short because then people remember it  
 
Really nice work  
 
Jessica

Title article: The Most Epic Story Ever Heard
Date: 2008-08-16 09:49:15
Hmmm
Well, I'm a bit confused here. I doesn't really flow and some of the rhyming seems a bit forced (for the sake of rhyming) but I think your very nearly there to making this a good poem. Maybe you could rephrase some of the lines?  
I liked how the narrator seemed to be confessing some secret unwillingly. 
It's like he is under interigation.  
Keep trying! 
 
Jess

Title article: Painful Words
Date: 2008-08-16 09:42:04
Nice
I really liked this, I read this and I was like, 'the narrator must really feel sore about whoever he is telling this too because the wording makes me sympathise with him, in that it tells of heartbreak. The whole poem is really well written. 
 
Good work! 
 
Jessica

Title article: THIS MODERN LOVE, Chapter 5
Date: 2008-07-28 14:39:49
Nice
This was really nice to read, reading this gets me interested in the story. I think this is a really good quality piece of writing because you built the tension.  
 
Nice work! I love it! 
 
Jess

Title article: Bodies of Evidence - Chapter 1
Date: 2008-07-27 12:15:39
Nice
Good description, I liked it because you wrote this from 3rd person and that way you were able to expand on the charactors alittle 
 
Good 
 
Jess

Title article: Just Wait...
Date: 2008-07-27 12:12:20
Nice
This is a really touching poem. You can almost picture the scene in your head: a grandmother comforting a small child maybe? This was a good poem and I think you should write more like this. 
 
Jess

Title article: Thirteen Years Of Gray, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-07-27 12:03:40
ok
This was ok, I liked the story your are telling, but it got to the point where I was asking myself when it was going to finish. But I did like it and I think that it is good; maybe you could break this up into smaller chapters? 
 
Carry on with this, in smaller chapters. :-) 
 
Jess

Title article: War On Earth
Date: 2008-07-26 04:31:35
Epic
This poem is good, I love the way that you used four line stanza's to create a pace that is well suited to the subject of this poem. It is rather long, but I think that's a good thing for this one. Maybe you could write short verses along these lines because I think that you are spot on with the theme. 
 
It's a good one. 
 
Jess

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