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Jessica S.A. (Forsaken)
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About Myself: I love writing, I love reading aswell. My favourite books are Pride & Predudice, Cathy's boook, Cathy's Key, and the twilight series. I live in England. I'm studying Art at college. I'm 16 years old. I love Slipknot more than any other band. I like dogs more than cats.I write stories for my college's magazine.

Stories


Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
Apr 15, 2008Forsaken 2Romance 601
Apr 30, 2008The Special Spoon :-PHumor 524
May 4, 2008TrappedHorror 448
Jul 25, 2008I am alone - the poem, read this before the storyPoetry 420
May 19, 2008A Violent PassionHorror 367
May 20, 2008To die... Is not to die, Chapter 1Horror 349
Jul 26, 2008I am alone - the storyHorror 326
Jun 14, 2008Blood Price, Chapter 1Horror 314
Jul 17, 2008Until we meet again...Poetry 285
Apr 8, 2008NightmareMiscellaneous Stories 282
May 19, 2008HatePoetry 275
Apr 29, 2008ForSakenRomance 273
Jun 1, 2008Heaven Sent, chapter 1/4Romance 237
Jul 9, 2008A cruel passionHorror 228
May 9, 2008ForSaken 3Romance 228
May 27, 2008I'm sorryPoetry 225
Jun 8, 2008At The End there is NothingMiscellaneous Stories 214
Sep 17, 2008The Lady and the MaidRomance 207
Jun 9, 2008In the heart - chapter 1, Chapter 1Romance 207
Aug 30, 2008SkinHorror 197
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Total number of comments: 69

Title article: Palin Fever
Date: 2008-10-13 08:42:20
Excellant
This was really nice work, sometimes these coversation style writing isn't that good at all, but your peice here is really good! 
 
Well done :-D 
 
Jessica

Title article: Ashes (Reconstructed)
Date: 2008-09-27 12:34:10
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This is brilliant, and so beautiful too! It is heartbreakingly touching and really quite sad, although it also has a bittersweet edge too. This is one of the better poems I've read here. 
 
Well done!

Title article: MY DAUGHTER. (Healer of the world . 2008)
Date: 2008-09-27 12:28:44
Really good.
I really like this because it flows so well and the words fit perfectly into the stanzas; this can be hard but you did it well. It's a really well written poem. 
Great poem!

Title article: But Did He?
Date: 2008-09-27 12:17:45
Good.
This is an intresting poem. It hits you right from the start, which is key for making a good poem. I liked how you used the same question through out the poem, this really added to the appeal.  
 
Good work!

Title article: Tell Me That You Love Me
Date: 2008-09-20 10:36:27
Love it!
it's great how you made the layout, using the paragraph-like verses with the more common layout, of this poem! I found it easy to read and also I enjoyed reading it. Your use of language in this piece makes it that much more better, I think.  
 
This was brilliant!

Title article: My Present
Date: 2008-09-20 10:30:17
Great!
This is a brilliant poem, it hit me like a ton of bricks, except it didnt hurt. I like the style in which you wrote this: the pain and love that you have portrayed hear really hits home. 
Love it!

Title article: Survival, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-09-20 10:24:36
+?
*apart from that it's good 
 
:P

Title article: Survival, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-09-20 10:23:12
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I don't get this at all. Especially sinse it's the first chapter. If I were you, I'd add a little more to intrigue readers into reading chapter 2...otherwise it's good :)

Title article: Hallowed Be Thy Name
Date: 2008-09-18 11:27:01
Brilliant!!
This was fantastic! 
 
Well done!

Title article: Density
Date: 2008-09-18 04:09:49
Loved it
I really liked this poem because it the feeling I guess you were trying to create was very clear to me. I think the short lines really add to the bittersweet quality. 
 
Good work!

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Hey Jessica, I just wanted to stop by and be the first to sign your Profile Book.

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