But Did He?

He said that he wanted her But did he?...

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This is the story about Jack and Neal Who shook...
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Jessica S,A. (Forsaken)
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About Myself: I love writing, I love reading aswell. My favourite books are Pride & Predudice, Cathy's boook, Cathy's Key, and the twilight series. I live in England. I'm studying Art at college. I'm 16 years old. I love Slipknot more than any other band. I like dogs more than cats.

Stories


Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
Jun 21, 2008Blood Price, Chapter 2Horror 151
Jun 14, 2008Blood Price, Chapter 1Horror 305
Jun 9, 2008In the heart - chapter 1, Chapter 1Romance 205
Jun 8, 2008At The End there is NothingMiscellaneous Stories 210
Jun 8, 2008In The Heart - Preface, Chapter 0Romance 133
Jun 6, 2008Ice, Chapter 2Adventure 103
Jun 4, 2008Ice, Chapter 1Adventure 131
Jun 1, 2008Heaven Sent, chapter 1/4Romance 236
May 30, 2008Not to die... Is to be tortured, Chapter 2Horror 154
May 27, 2008I'm sorryPoetry 217
May 20, 2008To die... Is not to die, Chapter 1Horror 349
May 19, 2008HatePoetry 272
May 19, 2008A Violent PassionHorror 364
May 11, 2008The ForSaken TrilogyHorror 185
May 9, 2008ForSaken 3Romance 224
May 4, 2008TrappedHorror 442
Apr 30, 2008The Special Spoon :-PHumor 519
Apr 29, 2008ForSakenRomance 270
Apr 15, 2008Forsaken 2Romance 597
Apr 8, 2008NightmareMiscellaneous Stories 278
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Comments

Total number of comments: 68

Title article: Ashes (Reconstructed)
Date: 2008-09-27 12:34:10
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This is brilliant, and so beautiful too! It is heartbreakingly touching and really quite sad, although it also has a bittersweet edge too. This is one of the better poems I've read here. 
 
Well done!

Title article: MY DAUGHTER. (Healer of the world . 2008)
Date: 2008-09-27 12:28:44
Really good.
I really like this because it flows so well and the words fit perfectly into the stanzas; this can be hard but you did it well. It's a really well written poem. 
Great poem!

Title article: But Did He?
Date: 2008-09-27 12:17:45
Good.
This is an intresting poem. It hits you right from the start, which is key for making a good poem. I liked how you used the same question through out the poem, this really added to the appeal.  
 
Good work!

Title article: Tell Me That You Love Me
Date: 2008-09-20 10:36:27
Love it!
it's great how you made the layout, using the paragraph-like verses with the more common layout, of this poem! I found it easy to read and also I enjoyed reading it. Your use of language in this piece makes it that much more better, I think.  
 
This was brilliant!

Title article: My Present
Date: 2008-09-20 10:30:17
Great!
This is a brilliant poem, it hit me like a ton of bricks, except it didnt hurt. I like the style in which you wrote this: the pain and love that you have portrayed hear really hits home. 
Love it!

Title article: Survival, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-09-20 10:24:36
+?
*apart from that it's good 
 
:P

Title article: Survival, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-09-20 10:23:12
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I don't get this at all. Especially sinse it's the first chapter. If I were you, I'd add a little more to intrigue readers into reading chapter 2...otherwise it's good :)

Title article: Hallowed Be Thy Name
Date: 2008-09-18 11:27:01
Brilliant!!
This was fantastic! 
 
Well done!

Title article: Density
Date: 2008-09-18 04:09:49
Loved it
I really liked this poem because it the feeling I guess you were trying to create was very clear to me. I think the short lines really add to the bittersweet quality. 
 
Good work!

Title article: The Truth Shouldn't Have To Hurt
Date: 2008-09-18 02:48:41
good
I loved the overall theme of this, the almost petulant tone really worked well :) I think this poem is good but I think you might have to work on the flow a little more is all. Maybe you could shorten the lines to help? 
 
This is a good poem. 
 
Jess

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Hey Jessica, I just wanted to stop by and be the first to sign your Profile Book.

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