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Jessica S,A. (Forsaken)
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Member Since 12/20/2007
Last Online 10/11/2008
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About Myself: I love writing, I love reading aswell. My favourite books are Pride & Predudice, Cathy's boook, Cathy's Key, and the twilight series. I live in England. I'm studying Art at college. I'm 16 years old. I love Slipknot more than any other band. I like dogs more than cats.I write stories for my college's magazine.

Stories


Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
Oct 3, 2008Darkening shorePoetry 87
Sep 26, 2008To the love of my lifePoetry 156
Sep 18, 2008InMePoetry 151
Sep 17, 2008The Lady and the MaidRomance 198
Sep 15, 2008Stalker, Chapter 2Horror 112
Sep 8, 2008Stalker, Chapter 1Horror 151
Aug 30, 2008SkinHorror 194
Aug 26, 2008Paranoid/ForgetMiscellaneous Stories 143
Aug 23, 2008The coastPoetry 171
Aug 20, 2008in your eyes *short*Poetry 134
Aug 17, 2008Heaven Sent, chapter 4/4Romance 146
Aug 16, 2008Goodbye, my loverPoetry 178
Jul 26, 2008I am alone - the storyHorror 321
Jul 25, 2008I am alone - the poem, read this before the storyPoetry 412
Jul 23, 2008Heavan Sent, chapter 3/4Horror 126
Jul 22, 2008Heavan Sent, chapter 2/4Romance 148
Jul 17, 2008Until we meet again...Poetry 283
Jul 9, 2008A cruel passionHorror 226
Jul 8, 2008In the heart, Chapter 2Horror 113
Jul 1, 2008Question of LovePoetry 187
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Comments

Total number of comments: 68

Title article: Ashes (Reconstructed)
Date: 2008-09-27 12:34:10
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This is brilliant, and so beautiful too! It is heartbreakingly touching and really quite sad, although it also has a bittersweet edge too. This is one of the better poems I've read here. 
 
Well done!

Title article: MY DAUGHTER. (Healer of the world . 2008)
Date: 2008-09-27 12:28:44
Really good.
I really like this because it flows so well and the words fit perfectly into the stanzas; this can be hard but you did it well. It's a really well written poem. 
Great poem!

Title article: But Did He?
Date: 2008-09-27 12:17:45
Good.
This is an intresting poem. It hits you right from the start, which is key for making a good poem. I liked how you used the same question through out the poem, this really added to the appeal.  
 
Good work!

Title article: Tell Me That You Love Me
Date: 2008-09-20 10:36:27
Love it!
it's great how you made the layout, using the paragraph-like verses with the more common layout, of this poem! I found it easy to read and also I enjoyed reading it. Your use of language in this piece makes it that much more better, I think.  
 
This was brilliant!

Title article: My Present
Date: 2008-09-20 10:30:17
Great!
This is a brilliant poem, it hit me like a ton of bricks, except it didnt hurt. I like the style in which you wrote this: the pain and love that you have portrayed hear really hits home. 
Love it!

Title article: Survival, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-09-20 10:24:36
+?
*apart from that it's good 
 
:P

Title article: Survival, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-09-20 10:23:12
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I don't get this at all. Especially sinse it's the first chapter. If I were you, I'd add a little more to intrigue readers into reading chapter 2...otherwise it's good :)

Title article: Hallowed Be Thy Name
Date: 2008-09-18 11:27:01
Brilliant!!
This was fantastic! 
 
Well done!

Title article: Density
Date: 2008-09-18 04:09:49
Loved it
I really liked this poem because it the feeling I guess you were trying to create was very clear to me. I think the short lines really add to the bittersweet quality. 
 
Good work!

Title article: The Truth Shouldn't Have To Hurt
Date: 2008-09-18 02:48:41
good
I loved the overall theme of this, the almost petulant tone really worked well :) I think this poem is good but I think you might have to work on the flow a little more is all. Maybe you could shorten the lines to help? 
 
This is a good poem. 
 
Jess

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Hey Jessica, I just wanted to stop by and be the first to sign your Profile Book.

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