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Luckily the bus stop is near where she lives and is...

She's not very attractive. No, that isn't quite...

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Member Since	12/13/2007
Last Online	10/02/2008
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Date	Title	Category	Hits
Apr 22, 2008	Demens	Horror	302
Dec 14, 2007	7:30	Miscellaneous Stories	422

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Total number of comments: 4

Title article: Demens
Date: 2008-04-25 13:37:46

hey
thanks for the comment, and the criticism. I usualy don't like shots at my work but the positive note at the end was really nice. I know how you feel about that mid point, It's still a very rough story that needs work but I'm glad you liked it anyways, that inspires me.

Title article: Demens
Date: 2008-04-24 06:49:15

Well to each his own. Maybe you'll get it later, but I must admit the story wasn't meant to end there. Infact there was no planned ending, I used my daily life to write this and at one point I just kind of ran out of steam and direction. If you're looking for happy endings though, I'm not your author. Even if I had an ending all planned out for this and had written it, it still would have turned out dark. Read my other story, tell me if you like it any better.

Title article: 7:30
Date: 2008-03-17 16:06:00

Hey
Thanks for the comment, I hope you enjoy the next story I put up which should be sometime this Sunday.

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Jessie Masoner (Behind_the_Mask) The Universe	Created On: 07/01/2008 14:02:54 At first I thought that was you the next thought that ran though my head was oh my goodness he looked into her eyes I warned him about the woman with the snakes on her head, but I soon realized it wasn’t and we all learned a lesson from that.

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