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THE BEGINNING The year of reflecting...

When the train doors opened, a blast of sticky air...

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Member Since	12/12/2007
Last Online	09/04/2008
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About Myself:

I'm just like the rest of you....I like to write..it also helps to kill time while at work. I finally decided to start working on a story, a novel I guess, that I have had in my mind for some time now. I've labeled it "the Processor" and I will be posting pages and/or chapters from it on here in hopes that many will read and comment. I may post a few poems and other stories on here as well... So please take a gander at them and let me know what you think....good or bad...what you liked, what you didn't like..your input would be much appreciated..Thank you

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Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Jun 11, 2008	Tuck's Luck	Humor	275
Dec 24, 2007	The Bathroom Bandit	Humor	410
Dec 14, 2007	the Processor-Chapter 1	Humor	635
May 13, 2008	the Processor (in order)	Miscellaneous Stories	143
May 12, 2008	the Processor- the interview	Miscellaneous Stories	112
Dec 28, 2007	the Processor-Continued	Miscellaneous Stories	396
Sep 4, 2008	No Admittance	Poetry	43
Jan 30, 2008	Spell	Poetry	213
Jan 30, 2008	Advice	Poetry	198
Jan 25, 2008	Holding on	Poetry	240
Jan 25, 2008	Selfish	Poetry	265
Jan 11, 2008	Awake Now	Poetry	268
Jan 8, 2008	Ashes	Poetry	313
Jan 7, 2008	Jimmy Mirabel	Poetry	342
Dec 28, 2007	This after	Poetry	351

Comments

Total number of comments: 164

Title article: IT'S HARD
Date: 2008-09-04 14:42:30

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haha..I know! Bad Circumcision!! I kid, I kid, I feel gay (no offense to anyone) that I even posted that comment...sorry all!

Title article: IT'S HARD
Date: 2008-09-04 14:26:32

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Eh, not bad...think it's funny that a poem titled "It's Hard" is written in a form that almost looks like a....um..nevermind

Title article: Holding on
Date: 2008-09-04 13:55:24

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thanks again ..corrected the "off"

Title article: No Admittance
Date: 2008-09-04 13:51:35

thanks
Howdy Pilgrim...thanks for your reviews of some of my poems..I appreciate the advise...I'm not much of a poet as you can see

Title article: ever hear that good things come in threes?
Date: 2008-09-04 13:00:45

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I hear ya...hey, nothing wrong with that...look at Hunter S. Thompson

Title article: Black and White, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-09-04 12:53:58

Me, the newbie
Yep, I feel like a newbie again...just noticed that Storiesville got some rules now..well, not quite rules, but that you have to "earn credits" to post stories..and that you do not get any credits if your comments are less than 150 characters or something....just realized I probably haven't reached that on my comments let alone my previous comment...sorry to use your story to rant...just rambling..am I over 150 characters yet?

Title article: Black and White, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-09-04 12:50:13

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Not bad...had my attention...almost had a "Momento" type feel to it..could be the start of something here..I'll read more

Title article: No Admittance
Date: 2008-09-04 10:59:08

Oh no!!..
I wrote a love poem!! What's happened to me....haha...anyways, been a while since I posted on good ole storiesville...I've been around though...been a "ghost reader" you could say...what I've read by some of you,..the Max Booth, the Allmine, the Zombie Punk, the Dockyard, the Philip Neale, the Behind the Mask (sorry if I forgot to mention some or got the names wrong) but anyways, I have to admit,,I been a little timid about posting lately...cause all of your stuff is just so good!!..well, I'm gonna be writing more...and it will probably suck...but hey, does it matter

Title article: ever hear that good things come in threes?
Date: 2008-09-04 10:35:14

You're good!....
damn good...all 3 of these...well written i'd say,..each sentence carries so much depth...Sometimes when I read your material it takes my back to my "acid days"..unsure if that is a good thing or a bad thing..but I am sure of your work..it's a good thing..I may not make sense...but I am sure people may accuse you of the same

Title article: Dance With The Devil
Date: 2008-09-04 10:27:02

Nice Work...
Enjoyed this piece throughout...well written and thought out..the dialogue and characters really put you in the moment...nicely done..I'll be reading more of your material for sure

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