Broken Glass

The first thing Pamela noticed when she opened her...

Triple the Trouble, Chapter 1

Triple the Trouble A Cynical Chick Flick...
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Last Online 04/14/2008
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Total number of comments: 10

Title article: End of Minds (part five)
Date: 2008-03-20 20:37:36

Wya and beyond what I expected. Dirk, email to follow

Title article: Avery McCoy- Chapter 1: The Hunt
Date: 2008-03-15 20:22:21

Good start, you have my attention. I seldom read multi-episode stories as some never get finished, or some deteriorate, all the effort being put into the 1st page, or after all the reading, the ending is weak or disappointing. 
 
I'm giving you th benefit of the doubt - don't let me down.

Title article: So there I was 5...
Date: 2008-02-12 20:50:14

This was good at several levels. It was original thought is the most immediate and obvious. You write coherently, something which cannot be claimed by everyone (just look at th gawd-awful poetry if you want any examples), Your style was relaxed and flowing, which agreed with e personally. Some stuff on here I just wish would end - you got the length exactly right. It was filed correctly - not everyting in Humor is even remotely funny - in my opinion a lot is juvenile. You are an exception to this rather negative comment. 
 
Many little things, but all together, made for a really decent read. On ya mate!

Title article: Nathan Weaver and the First Impression
Date: 2008-02-12 20:30:16

Didn't work for me - sorry. Yet I don't dislike it. I would prefer to have read it - than not. I'd score it at 50%.

Title article: Sell Your Soul and be Saved
Date: 2008-02-12 20:22:00

Original. Unique style - nothing negative. It brought a smile to my face. I'm a fussy reader, but don't regret reading this.

Title article: The Dream
Date: 2008-02-12 20:04:46

If there was a point to this story (especially the ending), it completely eluded me. 
 
I get that he was from a foreign land. It isn't exactly a story. It annoyed me that wht started so well, looked so promising, turned to nothing.

Title article: Be with you soon
Date: 2008-02-12 19:59:14

Not at all bad - above aveage

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