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Theodore (Kaelthos)
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Member Since 12/05/2007 05:19:01
Last Online 12/05/2007 08:56:32
Last Updated 12/05/2007 09:02:30
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Website/Blog: gredsauceda.angelfire.com
About Myself: I am 15, in the 10th grade in highschool, I live in Jackson Michigan. I write my own books and I love to read other peoples work for inspiration for my own. I have started writting 6 books, 4 are going to made into a series, 1 I have started and I hope to make it into at least a trilogy, and the other is all one of itself. No book I have ever started to write has been finished, mainly it is because ending a book is the hardest thing I find to do. Writting a book is easy, but ending it to where someone will want to read the next book in the series is the hardest part of all, but its a work in progress and hopefully I will have them finished by the time I'm out of highschool.

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Total number of comments: 4

Title article: The Chat from Hell
Date: 2007-12-05 11:29:18

Wow, thats very interesting and freaky, one of my friends actually had something like this happen to her once, very freaky, execpt it wasnt ofver the internet or anything, they have alarms on everydoor and everytime a door opens it sets off the alarm and someone went threw her entire house exept for her room and set off all the alarms so that she wouldnt know where he was, luckily her door started barking and she had a phone in her room. She called the cops but they never found the guy.

Title article: The Water Heater
Date: 2007-12-05 11:14:29

It was ok, if I were you instead of tentacles attacking her in the shower I might possably have placed her ex-husband somewhere and he gets her in some way, but the ending is perfectly up to you, good job anyway, good storyline ^_^

Title article: .just a bad dream. thats all it is.
Date: 2007-12-05 11:08:45

A nice story, I like the ending a bit, it allows the reader to make up for him/herself what he did at the end. I enjoyed it, nice work ^_^

Title article: Its behind me
Date: 2007-12-05 11:05:22

It's a great start, I would say that you could probubly write much more just from this start, all the detail is quite gripping. I would suggest you go forward with this and make it more than a short story

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