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Frances Laughter (Frananna)
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Website/Blog: www.charter.net
About Myself: I am a retired sixth-grade teacher, an avid reader, and have a deep love for writing. I am married to a minister and have a daughter, Renee. I also have my late son, Ken's dog. Her name is Benji.
I enjoy all genres. Much of my poetry deals with the brevity of life. I have work published, including monologues, poems, and short stories. My fiction is highly interpretive, comes from real-life experiences and my knowledge of the subject about which I write. My husband is my best critic.

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Jan 23, 2008The VisionMiscellaneous Stories 314

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Total number of comments: 4

Title article: The Vision
Date: 2008-01-25 14:05:59
The Vision
"...of not much value," I suppose I was simply trying to relate that Jenna hadn't much (anything) of any value. You should have read my first draft. It implied her diary was in the suitcase. Later, I said she warmed her hands by artifical logs. Imagine that! Thank you for you 
positive comments. 
Frananna

Title article: The Vision
Date: 2008-01-25 14:02:27
The Vision
Thank you for your encouragement. 
Have a good day. 
Frananna

Title article: The Vision
Date: 2008-01-25 13:59:12
Too Many Commas
Thanks for proofreading this short story. I know there were too many commas and I tried to remove them when I edited. It looks like my salt shaker was full of commas and I just sprinkled them in. I promise not to use type so small I can't see it when I write, nearing the final proofing of copy. 
You are indeed alert. Thank you again. 
Frananna

Title article: The Vision
Date: 2008-01-24 18:15:07
The Vision
My wife is meticulous in the use of imagery and 
literary devices. I am her biggest fan! She derives much pleasure from writing. 
Jerry

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