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Joseph Galea (darknstormy)
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Member Since 12/01/2007
Last Online 11/27/2008
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Stories


Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
Oct 9, 2008Mystery AvengerMiscellaneous Stories 101
Mar 25, 2008Santa SmithMiscellaneous Stories 169
Feb 18, 2008Sin of OmissionMiscellaneous Stories 236
Feb 8, 2008Chance EncounterRomance 341
Feb 8, 2008The Crows of Kille ManjaroMystery 323
Feb 7, 2008PigeonsMiscellaneous Stories 269
Feb 5, 2008Presents from the PastMiscellaneous Stories 200
Feb 3, 2008BirthdayMiscellaneous Stories 298
Jan 22, 2008Christmas HealingRomance 279
Jan 13, 2008ChinookMiscellaneous Stories 316
Dec 1, 2007Oleander EveningsRomance 513
Dec 1, 2007The Rebirth of Monty PrikleworthHumor 419

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Title article: Chinook
Date: 2008-04-14 01:30:38
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'Crazy Scott.' Thanks for your kind comment.

Title article: Neighbourhood Watch
Date: 2008-03-26 07:07:00

Liked the ending.

Title article: The stolen car
Date: 2008-03-25 07:28:04

On the whole OK but as the others said, the relationship between the characters was pretty obvious. I too kept on reading and the final paragraphs were worth it but could have done with some editing. I think leaving out the last sentence makes the former two more powerful.

Title article: Chinook
Date: 2008-03-17 05:54:52
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Tarhead, Bomber - thanks for the positive comments.

Title article: Sin of Omission
Date: 2008-02-26 07:36:21
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Thanks for the comments. I like endings which leave the reader thinking. In reality, nobody killed anyone. Just that somebody did nothing - hence the title of the story.

Title article: THE SHOWDOWN
Date: 2008-02-11 04:07:39
Nice
Although I knew half way through who the other gunman was, I still enjoyed it. Well written. Nice last sentence.

Title article: Memoirs of a Broken Heart
Date: 2008-02-09 06:35:47

Nice twist in the end. Good and funny.

Title article: Chance Encounter
Date: 2008-02-09 05:37:21
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Thanks for your comment. Very helpful.

Title article: Chance Encounter
Date: 2008-02-09 05:35:11
Thanks
Thanks for your comment. I liked that ending too but I've been told my endings are often morbid - but I like a nice twist.

Title article: Chance Encounter
Date: 2008-02-08 09:34:07
Comments appreciated
I could not decide on an ending for this. Your comments on which you prefer will be appreciated. 
Thanks.

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