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DateTitleCategoryHits
Mar 25, 2008Santa SmithMiscellaneous Stories 102
Feb 18, 2008Sin of OmissionMiscellaneous Stories 178
Feb 8, 2008Chance EncounterRomance 272
Feb 8, 2008The Crows of Kille ManjaroMystery 230
Feb 7, 2008PigeonsMiscellaneous Stories 208
Feb 5, 2008Presents from the PastMiscellaneous Stories 142
Feb 3, 2008BirthdayMiscellaneous Stories 202
Jan 22, 2008Christmas HealingRomance 203
Jan 13, 2008ChinookMiscellaneous Stories 250
Dec 1, 2007Oleander EveningsRomance 446
Dec 1, 2007The Rebirth of Monty PrikleworthHumor 350

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Total number of comments: 48

Title article: The Fall of Tone & The Beast of Vag
Date: 2008-07-04 06:34:10

Alfred had it down pat - pathetic. no other word for it. I could not even go beyond the first paragraph!

Title article: The Lock
Date: 2008-05-21 06:07:36
I'm sure.....
I'm sure it's quite good. If only I could read it......

Title article: Together in Death
Date: 2008-05-21 05:55:01
Sad and bitter
A sad and bitter tale but it's mainly bitterness that comes through. Bitterness and a sense of revenge for what basically is one's own stupid mistakes. 
 
Not too bad as a story but it would have benefited from careful proofreading to avoid confusion in tenses, spelling mistakes and other typos, which together make a piece of writing feel sloppy.

Title article: Chinook
Date: 2008-04-14 01:30:38
Thanks
'Crazy Scott.' Thanks for your kind comment.

Title article: Neighbourhood Watch
Date: 2008-03-26 07:07:00

Liked the ending.

Title article: The stolen car
Date: 2008-03-25 07:28:04

On the whole OK but as the others said, the relationship between the characters was pretty obvious. I too kept on reading and the final paragraphs were worth it but could have done with some editing. I think leaving out the last sentence makes the former two more powerful.

Title article: Chinook
Date: 2008-03-17 05:54:52
Thanks
Tarhead, Bomber - thanks for the positive comments.

Title article: Sin of Omission
Date: 2008-02-26 07:36:21
Thanks
Thanks for the comments. I like endings which leave the reader thinking. In reality, nobody killed anyone. Just that somebody did nothing - hence the title of the story.

Title article: THE SHOWDOWN
Date: 2008-02-11 04:07:39
Nice
Although I knew half way through who the other gunman was, I still enjoyed it. Well written. Nice last sentence.

Title article: Memoirs of a Broken Heart
Date: 2008-02-09 06:35:47

Nice twist in the end. Good and funny.

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