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DateTitleCategoryHits
Mar 25, 2008Santa SmithMiscellaneous Stories 119
Feb 18, 2008Sin of OmissionMiscellaneous Stories 196
Feb 8, 2008Chance EncounterRomance 293
Feb 8, 2008The Crows of Kille ManjaroMystery 266
Feb 7, 2008PigeonsMiscellaneous Stories 226
Feb 5, 2008Presents from the PastMiscellaneous Stories 164
Feb 3, 2008BirthdayMiscellaneous Stories 232
Jan 22, 2008Christmas HealingRomance 222
Jan 13, 2008ChinookMiscellaneous Stories 270
Dec 1, 2007Oleander EveningsRomance 464
Dec 1, 2007The Rebirth of Monty PrikleworthHumor 381

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Title article: Chance Encounter
Date: 2008-02-09 05:37:21
Thanks
Thanks for your comment. Very helpful.

Title article: Chance Encounter
Date: 2008-02-09 05:35:11
Thanks
Thanks for your comment. I liked that ending too but I've been told my endings are often morbid - but I like a nice twist.

Title article: Chance Encounter
Date: 2008-02-08 09:34:07
Comments appreciated
I could not decide on an ending for this. Your comments on which you prefer will be appreciated. 
Thanks.

Title article: Pigeons
Date: 2008-02-08 06:47:33
Thanks
Many thanks for the feedback guys. Always appreciated. 
Cheers.

Title article: Help me.
Date: 2008-02-07 06:06:24
Two cents worth!
One should be constructive in giving criticism - not rude. Constructive criticism is important if one is to improve one's writing skills. I also see no harm in being a 'grammar policeman' - or a 'spelling policeman' for that matter. There is nothing worse than sloppy grammar and poor spelling to spoil (at least for me) what could be a good story. 
Having said that, I'm glad that most agree that the original posting does not really qualify as a 'short story.'

Title article: Metamorphosis
Date: 2008-02-06 06:02:19

Short and sweet.

Title article: The Gift
Date: 2008-02-06 05:52:01

Why is this a story?

Title article: Aņo Viejo
Date: 2008-01-23 08:09:42

I agree. This is a short story waiting to grow up into a novel.

Title article: Oblivian
Date: 2008-01-23 08:03:30

"Mary her husband Phile and their two daughters Megan and Meg are five years old." 
 
Everyone is five years old? 
 
The whole thing would have benefited greatly from a 'spellcheck.'

Title article: Hammer and Nail
Date: 2008-01-23 07:57:46

Good twist although one somehow saw it coming ..... but maybe it's just me because it's the sort of thing I enjoy in a short story.

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