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Joseph Galea (darknstormy)
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Member Since 12/01/2007
Last Online 09/07/2008
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DateTitleCategoryHits
Dec 1, 2007Oleander EveningsRomance 484
Dec 1, 2007The Rebirth of Monty PrikleworthHumor 398
Feb 8, 2008Chance EncounterRomance 310
Jan 13, 2008ChinookMiscellaneous Stories 286
Feb 8, 2008The Crows of Kille ManjaroMystery 281
Feb 3, 2008BirthdayMiscellaneous Stories 249
Feb 7, 2008PigeonsMiscellaneous Stories 244
Jan 22, 2008Christmas HealingRomance 234
Feb 18, 2008Sin of OmissionMiscellaneous Stories 204
Feb 5, 2008Presents from the PastMiscellaneous Stories 174
Mar 25, 2008Santa SmithMiscellaneous Stories 137

Comments

Total number of comments: 50

Title article: The Visitor
Date: 2008-09-07 05:00:17

I enjoyed this. True there wasn't too much to it but it dealt with a difficult subject. Show promise and I would like to read more by this author.

Title article: A NIGHT IN PARIS.
Date: 2008-09-07 04:54:06

I found this difficult to read. Maybe it's because of the type of font used and the fact that there were no paragraphs. Also, it would have benefited from a spell check. Is this perhaps because it is an 'experimental' story?

Title article: The Fall of Tone & The Beast of Vag
Date: 2008-07-04 06:34:10

Alfred had it down pat - pathetic. no other word for it. I could not even go beyond the first paragraph!

Title article: The Lock
Date: 2008-05-21 06:07:36
I'm sure.....
I'm sure it's quite good. If only I could read it......

Title article: Together in Death
Date: 2008-05-21 05:55:01
Sad and bitter
A sad and bitter tale but it's mainly bitterness that comes through. Bitterness and a sense of revenge for what basically is one's own stupid mistakes. 
 
Not too bad as a story but it would have benefited from careful proofreading to avoid confusion in tenses, spelling mistakes and other typos, which together make a piece of writing feel sloppy.

Title article: Chinook
Date: 2008-04-14 01:30:38
Thanks
'Crazy Scott.' Thanks for your kind comment.

Title article: Neighbourhood Watch
Date: 2008-03-26 07:07:00

Liked the ending.

Title article: The stolen car
Date: 2008-03-25 07:28:04

On the whole OK but as the others said, the relationship between the characters was pretty obvious. I too kept on reading and the final paragraphs were worth it but could have done with some editing. I think leaving out the last sentence makes the former two more powerful.

Title article: Chinook
Date: 2008-03-17 05:54:52
Thanks
Tarhead, Bomber - thanks for the positive comments.

Title article: Sin of Omission
Date: 2008-02-26 07:36:21
Thanks
Thanks for the comments. I like endings which leave the reader thinking. In reality, nobody killed anyone. Just that somebody did nothing - hence the title of the story.

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