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DateTitleCategoryHits
Dec 1, 2007The Rebirth of Monty PrikleworthHumor 419
Feb 8, 2008Chance EncounterRomance 341
Jan 22, 2008Christmas HealingRomance 279
Dec 1, 2007Oleander EveningsRomance 513
Feb 8, 2008The Crows of Kille ManjaroMystery 323
Oct 9, 2008Mystery AvengerMiscellaneous Stories 101
Mar 25, 2008Santa SmithMiscellaneous Stories 169
Feb 18, 2008Sin of OmissionMiscellaneous Stories 236
Feb 7, 2008PigeonsMiscellaneous Stories 269
Feb 5, 2008Presents from the PastMiscellaneous Stories 200
Feb 3, 2008BirthdayMiscellaneous Stories 298
Jan 13, 2008ChinookMiscellaneous Stories 316

Comments

Total number of comments: 56

Title article: Excuse Me, I Believe You Have...
Date: 2008-11-27 02:09:59
Good
A good description of a situation when logic is thrown out of the window. It happens more often than we think. I did not find it hilarious but it's well written and amusing. A good piece of writing. Incidentally I also understand the situation perfectly. I still have a stuffed rabbit that my parents said they bought me before I was even born - and I'm over 60 now for crying out loud!

Title article: First Kiss
Date: 2008-11-27 01:27:19
Excellent
A brief but important moment in time between two friends vividly described. Good job.

Title article: Red River
Date: 2008-11-27 01:12:14
Intriguing
Despite the occasional spelling errors and the somewhat inconsistencies in the main charcter's behaviour the writing style of this story grips you and keeps you wanting to read more. I think there is a lot of promise in this if the author works at it. Good.

Title article: Dank Pasta
Date: 2008-10-09 07:55:16

The idea of a story about such a simple thing as a craving for pasta is intriguing and shows that inspiration can develop from anything. I felt that the story would have worked better without the obvious 'over the top' exaggerated descriptions and/or adjectives. Nevertheless, there was an interesting, underlying sense of mystery in it. What went on the night before? Why is the main character so seemingly 'broke?' Where does he live to have immediate neighbours, yet be seven miles away from the nearest store selling basic groceries? Is the dreaded 'mould' a symbol for something more sinister? And finally, why 'pasta' of all things?

Title article: Winning The Frog Lottery
Date: 2008-10-09 07:39:40

This left me unimpressed. I guess one can call it experimental. Still not much in it for me. Sorry.

Title article: The Visitor
Date: 2008-09-07 05:00:17

I enjoyed this. True there wasn't too much to it but it dealt with a difficult subject. Show promise and I would like to read more by this author.

Title article: A NIGHT IN PARIS.
Date: 2008-09-07 04:54:06

I found this difficult to read. Maybe it's because of the type of font used and the fact that there were no paragraphs. Also, it would have benefited from a spell check. Is this perhaps because it is an 'experimental' story?

Title article: The Fall of Tone & The Beast of Vag
Date: 2008-07-04 06:34:10

Alfred had it down pat - pathetic. no other word for it. I could not even go beyond the first paragraph!

Title article: The Lock
Date: 2008-05-21 06:07:36
I'm sure.....
I'm sure it's quite good. If only I could read it......

Title article: Together in Death
Date: 2008-05-21 05:55:01
Sad and bitter
A sad and bitter tale but it's mainly bitterness that comes through. Bitterness and a sense of revenge for what basically is one's own stupid mistakes. 
 
Not too bad as a story but it would have benefited from careful proofreading to avoid confusion in tenses, spelling mistakes and other typos, which together make a piece of writing feel sloppy.

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