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Cassandra's House, Chapter 1

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Daniel (thickblueline)
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About Myself: I'm a new writer, looking for feedback. I enjoy writing short stories, but novel writing is my passion. Now if I can just stick with one long enough to finish it. I'm a police officer, if you couldn't tell by my username, so I write about what I know. Thanks for reading

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Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
Jan 7, 2009Rookie, Chapter 29Miscellaneous Stories 40
Jan 5, 2009Rookie, Chapter 28Miscellaneous Stories 62
Jan 5, 2009Rookie, Chapter 27Miscellaneous Stories 55
Jan 2, 2009Rookie, Chapter 26Miscellaneous Stories 64
Dec 31, 2008Rookie, Chapter 25Miscellaneous Stories 52
Dec 30, 2008Be Good for Goodnes SakeMiscellaneous Stories 57
Dec 29, 2008Rookie, Chapter 24Miscellaneous Stories 60
Dec 27, 2008Rookie, Chapter 23Miscellaneous Stories 63
Dec 24, 2008Rookie, Chapter 22Miscellaneous Stories 79
Dec 23, 2008Rookie, Chapter 21Miscellaneous Stories 72
Dec 15, 2008Rookie, Chapter 20Miscellaneous Stories 80
Nov 27, 2008Snapshot, Chapter 1Miscellaneous Stories 102
Nov 23, 2008Rookie, Chapter 19Miscellaneous Stories 86
Nov 22, 2008Rookie, Chapter 18Miscellaneous Stories 83
Nov 22, 2008Rookie, Chapter 17Miscellaneous Stories 70
Nov 21, 2008Rookie, Chapter 16Miscellaneous Stories 90
Nov 17, 2008Santa's Little Helper, Chapter 1Miscellaneous Stories 120
Nov 9, 2008Rookie, Chapter 15Miscellaneous Stories 102
Nov 8, 2008ChosenMiscellaneous Stories 224
Nov 8, 2008Rookie, Chapter 14Miscellaneous Stories 105
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Comments

Title article: Come Get Your Trailer
Date: 2008-10-02 20:16:50
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I found this so humorous because that is exactly the kind of thing to happen where I live. You captured the heart of the moment and gave a mundane object some humorous qualities

Title article: The Diary of the unknown Whore, Chapter 2
Date: 2008-09-28 16:34:46
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I have to concur with the above comment. I don't really know where you are going with this story. There isn't much in the way of plot and we don't know much about the main character. On the other hand, what you have written you have written well.

Title article: You Want What?
Date: 2008-09-28 16:32:35
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This was great. I loved the carefree attitude of the clerk and how the guy didn't even know what he wanted. Once again, I thoroughly enjoyed the ending.

Title article: Love Crawls Down the Drain
Date: 2008-09-28 00:53:52
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This was a rollercoaster. At first I felt sorry for the guy. Then I thought it might be a dream when all the spiders started crawling around. Then I just felt sorry for him again. Nice bit of writing

Title article: Acorns Don't Fall Far
Date: 2008-09-28 00:47:02
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I liked this. It brought a smile to my face. You described the characters without a bit of dialogue and brought them to life masterfully. The ending was priceless.

Title article: Gone
Date: 2008-09-28 00:42:27
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Sad. Enrapturing. Everything I belive you intended for it to be. Good writing. It started on a sad note, rose up and then plunged the reader back down with the character

Title article: ELIZA AND BETH.
Date: 2008-09-27 18:12:38
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I liked this. You really got a lot done with the characterization and the way the characters interacted with each other. Nice job on foreshadowing too.

Title article: What Goes Around. . . Well, You Know The Rest
Date: 2008-09-27 18:07:37
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I couldn't help but kinda laugh at this story. As a police officer I always feel good when I see people get their just comeuppance. The way you tied everything together was well done

Title article: Existentialist mime story
Date: 2008-09-27 17:46:30
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I really liked this. It held me in a way that I really didn't think that it would. You brought your characters to life with just a few short sentences. That's something that only a good writer has the ability to do.

Title article: Run Katy Run
Date: 2008-09-26 18:26:28
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Disturbing. Violent. Sadistic. All the things that you were apparently shooting for. The last paragraph alone was a real shocker and left me with a sick feeling in my gut

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Philip Neale (philneale1952)

Derbyshire, England
 Created On: 01/01/2009 17:58:44
Can't believe I didn't do this already either.

Happy Easter!!!

Phil
Nathan Weaver (onyxdragon)

Missouri
 Created On: 11/17/2008 12:23:55
FYI, I uploaded the second chapter to "Going Nowhere." The 3rd coming soon.
Max Booth III (Chainsaw Enema)

 Created On: 11/10/2008 12:12:22
Edited By Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) On: 11/10/2008 12:12:34
To be the first to sign, I shall say you are a great writer with loads of talent. Keep working on Rookie, cause in all truth, it's really good.

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