Her Words Are Flowers

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The Highwayman (Based on a poem by A. Noyes.)

The echo of a galloping stallion thundered through the...
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Daniel (thickblueline)
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About Myself: I'm a new writer, looking for feedback. I enjoy writing short stories, but novel writing is my passion. Now if I can just stick with one long enough to finish it. I'm a police officer, if you couldn't tell by my username, so I write about what I know. Thanks for reading

Stories


Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
Jan 7, 2009Rookie, Chapter 29Miscellaneous Stories 40
Jan 5, 2009Rookie, Chapter 28Miscellaneous Stories 62
Jan 5, 2009Rookie, Chapter 27Miscellaneous Stories 55
Jan 2, 2009Rookie, Chapter 26Miscellaneous Stories 64
Dec 31, 2008Rookie, Chapter 25Miscellaneous Stories 52
Dec 30, 2008Be Good for Goodnes SakeMiscellaneous Stories 57
Dec 29, 2008Rookie, Chapter 24Miscellaneous Stories 60
Dec 27, 2008Rookie, Chapter 23Miscellaneous Stories 63
Dec 24, 2008Rookie, Chapter 22Miscellaneous Stories 79
Dec 23, 2008Rookie, Chapter 21Miscellaneous Stories 72
Dec 15, 2008Rookie, Chapter 20Miscellaneous Stories 80
Nov 27, 2008Snapshot, Chapter 1Miscellaneous Stories 102
Nov 23, 2008Rookie, Chapter 19Miscellaneous Stories 86
Nov 22, 2008Rookie, Chapter 18Miscellaneous Stories 83
Nov 22, 2008Rookie, Chapter 17Miscellaneous Stories 70
Nov 21, 2008Rookie, Chapter 16Miscellaneous Stories 90
Nov 17, 2008Santa's Little Helper, Chapter 1Miscellaneous Stories 120
Nov 9, 2008Rookie, Chapter 15Miscellaneous Stories 102
Nov 8, 2008ChosenMiscellaneous Stories 224
Nov 8, 2008Rookie, Chapter 14Miscellaneous Stories 105
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Comments

Title article: Mind Over Matter
Date: 2008-11-04 01:27:49
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Very moving story. You made Duke out to be a very hated, if a little unrealistic, bastard. As I read I couldn't help but imagine that it was my child who had fallen out the window. I barely made it through this one

Title article: A Crack in the Human Condition
Date: 2008-11-04 01:20:27
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Wow. I don't really know what to say except that there was no part of this story that wasn't disturbing. As far as the writing goes, good usual of visualization, good character development. There was one time in the middle where you reminded the reader that it was a flashback, which served to destroy the illusion for a moment. But nothing big. Nice bit

Title article: Funeral Passing
Date: 2008-11-03 20:43:11
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I agree. I think the last line of the story really made it funny. All in all, I was pretty horrified and confused, but when the guy finally had enough and told the family what he thought, I couldn't help but laugh.

Title article: Palin Fever
Date: 2008-10-16 00:13:24
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Hahah. Good stuff. This sounds exactly like what I would expect some people to be talking about. I shudder to think that people like actually decide the future of this nation

Title article: The Last Three
Date: 2008-10-16 00:10:45
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Very touching. In the span of just a few paragraphs you conveyed a lifetime of wisdom and heartfelt love. I'm impressed. I wish it were longer though.

Title article: Travelogue
Date: 2008-10-16 00:09:01
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What? This story was so random that it kept me occuppied, simply hoping that at the end everything would be pulled together. That didn't happen. But good job on keeping the reader hooked anyways. One of the most unusual stories I have ever read here. And as a fan of the unusual, I give you kudos

Title article: Falling
Date: 2008-10-14 10:45:22
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Wow, you could hear the anguish in every syllable. You have a talen for sharing your feelings that few others writers possess. It's easy to write fiction. We make up a story, add some characters and a little dialogue and it's done. But to write about yourself and your own experiences, that takes courage

Title article: Faithless
Date: 2008-10-14 10:42:32
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Not bad. You really built up the suspense when she remembered here email was open. I kinda felt my heart stick in my throat too, although I was kinda hoping she would kick her jerk of a husband off to the side. A few spelling errors, but nothing that can't be corrected. Nice writing

Title article: Internet Love
Date: 2008-10-07 02:43:32
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Good poem. I don't know much about poetry. But I know that this one touched me in a way that few others have. The internet has opened up a world to us. We should be careful how we use it

Title article: But Did He?
Date: 2008-10-02 20:18:14
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I don't usually comment on poetry, because it's not really my thing. But this one hit home. You used such simple words to make such a hard impact. Good job

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Philip Neale (philneale1952)

Derbyshire, England
 Created On: 01/01/2009 17:58:44
Can't believe I didn't do this already either.

Happy Easter!!!

Phil
Nathan Weaver (onyxdragon)

Missouri
 Created On: 11/17/2008 12:23:55
FYI, I uploaded the second chapter to "Going Nowhere." The 3rd coming soon.
Max Booth III (Chainsaw Enema)

 Created On: 11/10/2008 12:12:22
Edited By Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) On: 11/10/2008 12:12:34
To be the first to sign, I shall say you are a great writer with loads of talent. Keep working on Rookie, cause in all truth, it's really good.

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