Cassandra's House, Chapter 1

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Daniel (thickblueline)
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About Myself: I'm a new writer, looking for feedback. I enjoy writing short stories, but novel writing is my passion. Now if I can just stick with one long enough to finish it. I'm a police officer, if you couldn't tell by my username, so I write about what I know. Thanks for reading

Stories


Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
Jan 7, 2009Rookie, Chapter 29Miscellaneous Stories 40
Jan 5, 2009Rookie, Chapter 28Miscellaneous Stories 62
Jan 5, 2009Rookie, Chapter 27Miscellaneous Stories 55
Jan 2, 2009Rookie, Chapter 26Miscellaneous Stories 64
Dec 31, 2008Rookie, Chapter 25Miscellaneous Stories 51
Dec 30, 2008Be Good for Goodnes SakeMiscellaneous Stories 57
Dec 29, 2008Rookie, Chapter 24Miscellaneous Stories 60
Dec 27, 2008Rookie, Chapter 23Miscellaneous Stories 63
Dec 24, 2008Rookie, Chapter 22Miscellaneous Stories 79
Dec 23, 2008Rookie, Chapter 21Miscellaneous Stories 72
Dec 15, 2008Rookie, Chapter 20Miscellaneous Stories 80
Nov 27, 2008Snapshot, Chapter 1Miscellaneous Stories 102
Nov 23, 2008Rookie, Chapter 19Miscellaneous Stories 85
Nov 22, 2008Rookie, Chapter 18Miscellaneous Stories 83
Nov 22, 2008Rookie, Chapter 17Miscellaneous Stories 70
Nov 21, 2008Rookie, Chapter 16Miscellaneous Stories 90
Nov 17, 2008Santa's Little Helper, Chapter 1Miscellaneous Stories 119
Nov 9, 2008Rookie, Chapter 15Miscellaneous Stories 102
Nov 8, 2008ChosenMiscellaneous Stories 224
Nov 8, 2008Rookie, Chapter 14Miscellaneous Stories 105
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Comments

Title article: Excuse Me, I Believe You Have...
Date: 2008-11-27 22:21:25
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This was cute. You used clever imagery and believable characters in a very short story to both entertain and hold the readers attention. A good piece of writing

Title article: Thirteen
Date: 2008-11-27 22:16:51
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Wow. This says so much in so few words, it's kind of hard to wrap my pea brain mind around it. There was one error in the first sentence that I caught, but other than that this is an excellent piece of writing. good job

Title article: Black Lips
Date: 2008-11-23 19:47:45
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I agree. This poem flowed very well and you used vivid imagry to convey your feelings and your message to the reader. It was almost scary how you described the hopelessness

Title article: Rookie, Chapter 18
Date: 2008-11-22 21:01:52
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Glad you liked it. My eyes were beginning to cross by the time I typed up the last paragraph. I'm gonna go throw up now.

Title article: Going Nowhere, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-11-12 20:41:07
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I liked this. The dialogue between the characters is very realistic and I enjoyed it. I will definetly be looking forward to the rest of the chapters

Title article: Rookie, Chapter 14
Date: 2008-11-09 15:41:12
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I'm typing it up on microsoft word, double spaced and I'm up to about 110 pages so far and 32 k words. Still a long ways to go, but we're getting there. Thanks to everyone who continues to read and post comments

Title article: MOLLY'S FINAL DAWN.
Date: 2008-11-07 20:37:23
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Very deep story. I felt moved and infatuated with the main character all at the same time. I will definetly be on the lookout for your future works.

Title article: The Wine Wins Again
Date: 2008-11-07 20:35:11
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I liked this. It chronicles the struggle between an obvious alcoholic and his addiction. He knows he has a problem. BUt he doesn't care. All he cares about his next drink. Good job

Title article: Freedom's Final Fight
Date: 2008-11-05 01:27:52
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Nice job. The heat of the battle really came at me and I found myself rooting for the main character, which is something every good writer hopes to happen.

Title article: Her Guardian Angel, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-11-05 01:24:00
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I'm interested to see where this story is going because of two things. The main character is a unique individual, and the last part of the story raises the question of what is and isn't real. With that being said, I have to say that the diaologue almost killed it for me. People don't talk that way, at least no body that I know. I look forward to reading your future works

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11/03/2008 15:32:59Re:I guess we all need a break sometimeOff-Topic168
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Philip Neale (philneale1952)

Derbyshire, England
 Created On: 01/01/2009 17:58:44
Can't believe I didn't do this already either.

Happy Easter!!!

Phil
Nathan Weaver (onyxdragon)

Missouri
 Created On: 11/17/2008 12:23:55
FYI, I uploaded the second chapter to "Going Nowhere." The 3rd coming soon.
Max Booth III (Chainsaw Enema)

 Created On: 11/10/2008 12:12:22
Edited By Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) On: 11/10/2008 12:12:34
To be the first to sign, I shall say you are a great writer with loads of talent. Keep working on Rookie, cause in all truth, it's really good.

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