The Highwayman (Based on a poem by A. Noyes.)

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Daniel (thickblueline)
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About Myself: I'm a new writer, looking for feedback. I enjoy writing short stories, but novel writing is my passion. Now if I can just stick with one long enough to finish it. I'm a police officer, if you couldn't tell by my username, so I write about what I know. Thanks for reading

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Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
Jan 7, 2009Rookie, Chapter 29Miscellaneous Stories 40
Jan 5, 2009Rookie, Chapter 28Miscellaneous Stories 62
Jan 5, 2009Rookie, Chapter 27Miscellaneous Stories 55
Jan 2, 2009Rookie, Chapter 26Miscellaneous Stories 64
Dec 31, 2008Rookie, Chapter 25Miscellaneous Stories 51
Dec 30, 2008Be Good for Goodnes SakeMiscellaneous Stories 57
Dec 29, 2008Rookie, Chapter 24Miscellaneous Stories 60
Dec 27, 2008Rookie, Chapter 23Miscellaneous Stories 63
Dec 24, 2008Rookie, Chapter 22Miscellaneous Stories 79
Dec 23, 2008Rookie, Chapter 21Miscellaneous Stories 72
Dec 15, 2008Rookie, Chapter 20Miscellaneous Stories 80
Nov 27, 2008Snapshot, Chapter 1Miscellaneous Stories 102
Nov 23, 2008Rookie, Chapter 19Miscellaneous Stories 86
Nov 22, 2008Rookie, Chapter 18Miscellaneous Stories 83
Nov 22, 2008Rookie, Chapter 17Miscellaneous Stories 70
Nov 21, 2008Rookie, Chapter 16Miscellaneous Stories 90
Nov 17, 2008Santa's Little Helper, Chapter 1Miscellaneous Stories 119
Nov 9, 2008Rookie, Chapter 15Miscellaneous Stories 102
Nov 8, 2008ChosenMiscellaneous Stories 224
Nov 8, 2008Rookie, Chapter 14Miscellaneous Stories 105
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Title article: The Ugly Man
Date: 2009-01-02 23:13:26
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I sruggled a little with this one. It seemed like the message you wanted to convey got lost a little in the words. Still, good use of imagery and description

Title article: TRUE LOVE
Date: 2009-01-02 23:11:59
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It may feel this way when you lose out on true love. But remember that it took feeling something so great, to make you feel something so bad. Very moving piece

Title article: Vagabond
Date: 2008-12-31 13:58:47
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Wow. This is so very accurate in a lot of ways of simply desribing how life is. When you see it as an adventure, you truly live. Only those who see it as a burden are depressed

Title article: How Many Ways
Date: 2008-12-31 13:57:33
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This was great. It was clear, simple and concise while at the same time exuding a lot of powerful emotions that sucked the reader in. You have a real talent for this

Title article: Gal Friday NYC
Date: 2008-12-31 13:56:24
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I liked this bit of writing. It was a little bit confusing at first, but after I reread it for a second time I got what you were saying. Cute and depressing all at the same time

Title article: Echoes of the previous Life.
Date: 2008-12-30 13:26:09
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Wow. This converys such a rich mixture of emotion that's it hard to single just one out. I felt several things touch me while reading this. If this is your earlier stuff, I can't wait to read some of your recent works. Bravo

Title article: Seconds
Date: 2008-12-29 14:52:10
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Nicely done. This is a dark story with a dark character. I was so happy at the end when he got his comeuppance. This should be published if it hasn't already.

Title article: The Highwayman (Based on a poem by A. Noyes.)
Date: 2008-12-29 10:06:55
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I loved the original poem. I read it in high school. This story certainly does it justice and you use creative imaging to really draw the reader in. Well done

Title article: When They Were One
Date: 2008-12-29 10:03:45
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Beautiful. A gentle reminder of what this season is really all about even in the darkest and most hellish places on earth, the middle of a war. Well done

Title article: Ugly Innocence, Chapter 9
Date: 2008-12-24 16:45:19
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Beautiful. A wonderful story and one that I thoroughly enjoyed reading. Once again you deliver a great piece of writing to your reader. I look forward to your next works. Merry Christmas

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Philip Neale (philneale1952)

Derbyshire, England
 Created On: 01/01/2009 17:58:44
Can't believe I didn't do this already either.

Happy Easter!!!

Phil
Nathan Weaver (onyxdragon)

Missouri
 Created On: 11/17/2008 12:23:55
FYI, I uploaded the second chapter to "Going Nowhere." The 3rd coming soon.
Max Booth III (Chainsaw Enema)

 Created On: 11/10/2008 12:12:22
Edited By Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) On: 11/10/2008 12:12:34
To be the first to sign, I shall say you are a great writer with loads of talent. Keep working on Rookie, cause in all truth, it's really good.

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