Layers of Innocence

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Broken Glass

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About Myself: Well lets see. Obviously i like writing i get writers block alot. I also like reading but i hardly have time for either cuz of school. I generally am a really friendly person. Most of the time i have alot of grammer mistakes in my stories and stuff mostly cuz im typing it up here and my hands get tired so yeah- sorry about that. What else? Ummm.. my most fave book is Catcher in The Rye. It cracks me up everytime i read it, also A Seperate Peace. Besides that i like the sappy romances with some suspense mixed in.

I also love getting comments and hearing (well more like reading) what you guys have to say about my stuff so speak ur mind :) good or bad it doesnt matter :)

Wanna know more? Hit me up. :D i promise i dont bite. :D

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Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
Dec 31, 2008ChoicesPoetry 58
Dec 31, 2008HopePoetry 56
Apr 9, 2008No title. part 2Miscellaneous Stories 195
Apr 1, 2008Dead Roses and Fresh TulipsRomance 232
Mar 26, 2008All that glitters is not goldRomance 412
Mar 24, 2008No Title.. yetMiscellaneous Stories 329

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Total number of comments: 65

Title article: To The Young Unknown
Date: 2009-01-05 11:15:41

tell me about it. Ive felt or am feeling at least half of these.  
 
It was really nice and had a good rhythum.. Good job :D

Title article: HOW DARE YOU
Date: 2009-01-05 10:07:08

Lol that was a really cute poem. I wonder if the animals really think like that. I know i would if i was a dog.  
 
It was cute and had a nice flow. great job :D

Title article: Palestine and other
Date: 2009-01-04 08:08:24

I really liked the flow. I think the mirror mirror lines added a really nice touch. I also liked "we talked of love and practice greed" and "we plant our soil with a poison greed" It speaks true of the events going on there

Title article: Can't Take The Pressure
Date: 2009-01-02 12:12:25

lol that was really funny. I love the way you wrote exactly what came into your head. atleast thats what i think you did. It was just sooo random. specially the eye popping out thing.

Title article: On Call
Date: 2009-01-02 12:00:19

I agree with Phil. I have never ever read anything like this before. I feel that its good that you didnt put that much detail in it and the ending was just like woah...  
 
I can sorta imagine how shocked he must have felt at hearing something like that. Hes the one whose actually dead.

Title article: Train on the water
Date: 2009-01-02 11:48:33

This was really interesting. It reminded me of something that i wrote on a sudden impulse. Kinda left me hanging thuogh but nonetheless it was quite an intersting read :D

Title article: The Highwayman (Based on a poem by A. Noyes.)
Date: 2009-01-02 10:25:26
Wonderful!
This story was simply beautiful.. I totally agree with Villa. I could feel it also from the beginning to the end. 
 
It was heartwrenching. Great job.

Title article: Broken Glass
Date: 2009-01-02 10:16:03
left me hanging..
Really hope this is part of a series. Gave me the chills.

Title article: DysFUNctional
Date: 2009-01-02 10:11:17
great story
It was really very entertaining.  
And i agree with the member that 
said its not very far off. My most favorite part was when she is complaning to her brother in law about how he just randomly came up with the idea of going to Iraq because his mother in law is coming over. Haha Good stuff :D

Title article: My love, Chapter 1
Date: 2009-01-01 11:51:13
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haha really cute story.. reminded me of myself in high school.  
 
I agree with the other members who stated that there is not much of an introduction/setting

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