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Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom)
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About Myself: My writings began as short little stories. But then I began to experiment my writing style into the world of poems. And ever since then I haven't been able to stop writing poems. For me, poems are more fun to write and they are alot more challenging.

I basically write about anything that seems relevant to me at the time. Most of my poetry is about me in a way. Every thought that I include in my poems is usually a thought I personally feel or have felt in the past. What I write basically is me trying to get incomplete or unfocused thoughts out into the open, a weird way for me to mend. Music is a huge love of mine. Most of my writing comes into existance when i'm listening to it.

"No matter what happens now, you shouldn't be afraid. Because I know today has been the most perfect day I've ever seen." -Radiohead

Stories


Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
Jan 6, 2009Meet AgainPoetry 59
Dec 31, 2008Her Words Are FlowersPoetry 196
Dec 30, 2008White PretendPoetry 60
Dec 27, 2008Took Us AwayPoetry 79
Dec 24, 2008ShotgunPoetry 101
Dec 21, 2008Light of DayPoetry 75
Dec 14, 2008On the Shore of Lost CausePoetry 359
Nov 23, 2008Black LipsPoetry 190
Nov 11, 2008PlasticPoetry 306
Nov 5, 2008Heartaches On PaperPoetry 153
Nov 1, 2008Behind The SunPoetry 426
Oct 26, 2008MetamorphosisHorror 733
Oct 19, 2008Kiss of DeparturePoetry 483
Oct 16, 2008Lonely NightPoetry 178
Oct 14, 2008Cold DecemberPoetry 537
Oct 13, 2008One DayPoetry 345
Oct 9, 2008Please KnowPoetry 159
Oct 7, 2008What Ever Is To ComePoetry 169
Oct 5, 2008Through This MirrorPoetry 262
Oct 4, 2008RipplesPoetry 264
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Comments

Total number of comments: 1443

Title article: Ashes to Ashes
Date: 2009-01-07 19:33:03

it definitely conveyed its meaning without confusion....but i didn't care for the same ending rhyme, as well as the repitition of some lines.

Title article: JULIA'S NIGHT OUT.
Date: 2009-01-07 19:26:26

to be honest i actually didn't notice this was part two until about halfway down...i guess the bar scene threw me off...but again you have made Julia a very interesting character. i hope you continue onward...and hopefully Greg won't discriminate her like her father.

Title article: Angel of Music
Date: 2009-01-06 14:24:11

well i love the title...but as for the poem, it didn't have a distinct rhyming scheme but it still flowed along a very nice pace. i can easily see how this could be a simple love poem...but i also thought this could be simply one's love for music itself..."he" could be the metaphor for music.

Title article: To Whom It May Concern
Date: 2009-01-05 17:19:27

i thought this was pretty good....easily understood and pulled at the heart in so little words.

Title article: A Dance in the Rain
Date: 2009-01-05 17:12:49

i just read a story similiar to this one...but i must say this one felt more tangible. i love the way you implemented the rain in this story...really gave it a damp, cold effect. and i also thought it was great how you made the lost love talk to her...because even though someone has passed you can still see them and hear them talk in your mind...you don't just forget those things. overall, i thought you did a nice job. and i really hope you contine to write.

Title article: Life needs just a bit of Joy...
Date: 2009-01-05 17:05:46

haha well it appears as though ziggy got a bit comment happy. but that's okay we all get like that from time to time....and now a better story to comment! usually these kinds of stories bore me but this one did not. you wrote effectively enough to consume me the whole way. and i did like how joy meant his wife, not as in joy=happiness.

Title article: HOW DARE YOU
Date: 2009-01-05 16:42:48

this had a nice comedic tone to it...gave you a nice feeling unlike so many other poems on here. but yea i liked it. makes you think what a dog is really thinking when you are giving it a command. and manonuts...yea i think he should be removed...you should see the obscene comment he left on my newest poem.

Title article: Her Words Are Flowers
Date: 2009-01-05 16:38:03

To Allmine, well i appreciate your honesty but really the poems i write really aren't to or about a specific "her"  
they are more directed at an effigy of love or an effigy of myself...so sometimes when it sounds like i'm referencing to a "her" i could be talking to myself...yea it's hard for me to describe. 
but to manonuts....i will not send you any message whatsoever...and don't call me dawg...do not act as if you are know me and we are friends. i would never go that low as to engage in conversation with you. from what you have said, you sound like a filthy pig. and don't ever comment my poems again.

Title article: End of Days
Date: 2009-01-03 16:47:16

the flow was good and some of the lines i enjoyed but overall i didn't care for it...the presentation and the language...my kind of subject. just not my kind of presentation.

Title article: Riot in the moonlight
Date: 2009-01-03 16:36:16

i hate to regurgitate, but this plot was very similiar to that of Twilight....how the girl wants to be transformed while the vampire tries to withdraw from the request....but i thought this was decent....maybe you can continue onwards? and yes, you write very well considering english is not your mother language....i barely noticed the words missing here or there. oh and very nice picture you chose as well :]

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Anna DeVine (Sad Sara)

Somewhere in the sense of time
 Created On: 03/08/2008 14:54:58
Hi yer Cody,

I juss realized I hadn't signed yer guestbook yet, so that's what's goin' on right now.

Nice book, love what yer've done with the place.

It's Sorrowful sure, but it rhymes.

'Anna
R.E.Potter (R.E.Potter)
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You have a unique way of telling a poem...I envy you.
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