Echoes of the previous Life.

(my old writing, I wonder if there are visible...

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Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom)
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About Myself: My writings began as short little stories. But then I began to experiment my writing style into the world of poems. And ever since then I haven't been able to stop writing poems. For me, poems are more fun to write and they are alot more challenging.

I basically write about anything that seems relevant to me at the time. Most of my poetry is about me in a way. Every thought that I include in my poems is usually a thought I personally feel or have felt in the past. What I write basically is me trying to get incomplete or unfocused thoughts out into the open, a weird way for me to mend. Music is a huge love of mine. Most of my writing comes into existance when i'm listening to it.

"No matter what happens now, you shouldn't be afraid. Because I know today has been the most perfect day I've ever seen." -Radiohead


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Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
Jan 6, 2009Meet AgainPoetry 59
Dec 31, 2008Her Words Are FlowersPoetry 197
Dec 30, 2008White PretendPoetry 60
Dec 27, 2008Took Us AwayPoetry 79
Dec 24, 2008ShotgunPoetry 101
Dec 21, 2008Light of DayPoetry 75
Dec 14, 2008On the Shore of Lost CausePoetry 359
Nov 23, 2008Black LipsPoetry 190
Nov 11, 2008PlasticPoetry 306
Nov 5, 2008Heartaches On PaperPoetry 153
Nov 1, 2008Behind The SunPoetry 426
Oct 26, 2008MetamorphosisHorror 733
Oct 19, 2008Kiss of DeparturePoetry 485
Oct 16, 2008Lonely NightPoetry 178
Oct 14, 2008Cold DecemberPoetry 537
Oct 13, 2008One DayPoetry 345
Oct 9, 2008Please KnowPoetry 159
Oct 7, 2008What Ever Is To ComePoetry 169
Oct 5, 2008Through This MirrorPoetry 262
Oct 4, 2008RipplesPoetry 264
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Comments

Title article: Euphony
Date: 2008-12-27 08:36:36

absolutely loved this!! it read poetically the whole way through and had some nice descriptors....and like others have mentioned, the ending was great..."under a sky now red" beautiful.

Title article: Lust is Blind
Date: 2008-12-27 08:30:19

i liked this....gave an overall feeling of truth and clarity. but some of the lines were weird for me and the end rhymes were repeated...but i still liked it.

Title article: How Many Ways
Date: 2008-12-27 08:21:30

i understood the message you were getting out and i liked it...but i just didn't think it was as connecting and strong as some of your other works. 
there are indeed many ways to tell somoene you love them...but which of them are truly real??

Title article: Always
Date: 2008-12-27 08:17:15

very good poem. i think this might be my favorite out of what you've done so far...it felt different. and i liked the construction of it.

Title article: MASS.
Date: 2008-12-27 08:13:58

the format of your work has never bothered me because i just get so wrapped up in the piece that i forget i'm reading a huge block of text! anyway, i loved the language and the real feel the character had as they always do.

Title article: Erotic Tranquility
Date: 2008-12-26 22:16:01

hmm this was weird. what would posess you to write this? well the way you told the story was done well but the rhyming wasn't consistent.

Title article: Shotgun
Date: 2008-12-26 21:39:03

pain is the only thing real that i can begin to understand. pain is what turns us all into who we really are. pain is the only thing that has been unchanging in my life.  
disorganization is a very acute way to describe my brain...its become something that i can't even understand. but please do not be concerned, there is nothing you can do for me. 
nothing you can do at all. these poems are good for me....they suppress the voices inside.

Title article: Shotgun
Date: 2008-12-24 22:11:53

well the whole point of this is to be disorganized....i mean i would think that to be quite obvious. i took my thoughts and turned them into this...a very accurate depiction of how i'm feeling right now...so critisize it all you want...but i won't change a thing. organization defeats the purpose here....again, i would think that to be a no brainer.

Title article: Vagabond
Date: 2008-12-24 22:05:24

i enjoyed this. while reading i felt like i was walking with the vagabond, all the landscapes you described integrated perfectly throughout.

Title article: On the Shore of Lost Cause
Date: 2008-12-20 18:15:58

haha it's no big deal Nina...you can leave as many comments as you wish..your latest comment was very insightful indeed and i took pleasure in reading it so thanks!

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Max Booth III (Chainsaw Enema)

Indiana
Created On: 09/04/2008 20:41:18

Hey, man. What's up?

You got some more kickass poems up in that strange noggin of yours? Cough 'em up, I need my fix. Hurry ... I'm ... jonesing ... like ... a ... smiley face
Feedback from Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom): yea i know....i haven't been able to write anything recently...my mind is kinda bogged down at the moment. but i am trying to put some more pieces together. right now they are all incomplete, but i'll finish them up. i keep wanting to post things but then end up deleting them because i think they're shit.

Amie Kerlin (lemon)

Created On: 07/23/2008 18:10:47

Sooooooooooooo...

just stopping by to give you a friendly poke.

Amie Kerlin (lemon)

Created On: 07/12/2008 23:35:53

Of course we get along A couple of those last poems were from awhile ago, but yeah, I definitely have the darker side in me that I don't let come out and play that often. I've got a few more up my sleeve that I'm debating whether or not to post. I LOVE your stuff though. You have no problem just putting your emotions out there.

Max Booth III (Chainsaw Enema)

Created On: 07/09/2008 10:20:51

good news. bubble and her personalties got deleted! it will be a cold day in hell for those cruel bastards.

cheers!
Feedback from Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom): really?? well that's great news. i was getting very irritated with the many annoying personalities she had.

Max Booth III (Chainsaw Enema)

tied up a gagged in some bloke's basement
Created On: 07/06/2008 17:49:18

You better, or I'll have to create a second profile and bash all of your existing poems because I'm cool and not a loser. Ha!
Feedback from Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom): haha yea i know i feel left out on the whole multiple profile thing. but i guess i'll just be lame and stay with one.

Max Booth III (Chainsaw Enema)

a wasteland
Created On: 06/06/2008 12:34:56

a zombie was here


(keep on writing awesome poems!)
Feedback from Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom): well i think this is the first zombie to sign my book haha. but i'll try to keep giving you good poems to read.

Jutta Motrin (CELL)
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Created On: 05/23/2008 09:50:25

Ai Shite Imasu.

Billy (Vango)

Created On: 04/23/2008 10:46:57

Your poems are probably the only poems I can tolerate.
Feedback from Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom): Haha well i guess that's a good thing, right?

Jutta Motrin (CELL)
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Created On: 04/21/2008 16:28:51
Edited By Jutta Motrin (CELL) On: 04/21/2008 16:29:39


You are too kind (heh).

I like your poetry, now that I've delved into it a little bit more; it's so thought-provoking; it's excellent, really!

Cell... I like it because of how intricate all of the words used to describe a cell's composition are... if that makes any sense, at all (???). And your screen name (resistanceisfreedom) tells me you have idealistic views, and are in many senses a liberal... that is very cool.

Many happinesses!

Yo.
Feedback from Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom): hmmm interesting. i never thought of cell that way. thank you for your appreciation for my poems! i'm glad you enjoy them. yes, i do have idealistic views for sure. i'm glad you can accept me for that. Much happiness right back!

Jutta Motrin (CELL)
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Created On: 04/18/2008 09:37:04

CELL WAS HERE.



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