The Highwayman (Based on a poem by A. Noyes.)

The echo of a galloping stallion thundered through the...

An unexpected gift, Chapter 1

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Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom)
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About Myself: My writings began as short little stories. But then I began to experiment my writing style into the world of poems. And ever since then I haven't been able to stop writing poems. For me, poems are more fun to write and they are alot more challenging.

I basically write about anything that seems relevant to me at the time. Most of my poetry is about me in a way. Every thought that I include in my poems is usually a thought I personally feel or have felt in the past. What I write basically is me trying to get incomplete or unfocused thoughts out into the open, a weird way for me to mend. Music is a huge love of mine. Most of my writing comes into existance when i'm listening to it.

"No matter what happens now, you shouldn't be afraid. Because I know today has been the most perfect day I've ever seen." -Radiohead


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Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
Jan 6, 2009Meet AgainPoetry 59
Dec 31, 2008Her Words Are FlowersPoetry 196
Dec 30, 2008White PretendPoetry 60
Dec 27, 2008Took Us AwayPoetry 79
Dec 24, 2008ShotgunPoetry 101
Dec 21, 2008Light of DayPoetry 75
Dec 14, 2008On the Shore of Lost CausePoetry 359
Nov 23, 2008Black LipsPoetry 190
Nov 11, 2008PlasticPoetry 306
Nov 5, 2008Heartaches On PaperPoetry 153
Nov 1, 2008Behind The SunPoetry 426
Oct 26, 2008MetamorphosisHorror 733
Oct 19, 2008Kiss of DeparturePoetry 483
Oct 16, 2008Lonely NightPoetry 178
Oct 14, 2008Cold DecemberPoetry 537
Oct 13, 2008One DayPoetry 345
Oct 9, 2008Please KnowPoetry 159
Oct 7, 2008What Ever Is To ComePoetry 169
Oct 5, 2008Through This MirrorPoetry 262
Oct 4, 2008RipplesPoetry 264
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Title article: Ashes
Date: 2008-02-10 15:27:30
lol
yeah to tarhead i think i accidentally picked humor for the category to this. Yeah i mean i definetily didn't intend to make this story funny at all. 
 
And to raddcore. Of course you don't sound stupid. Why would you sound stupid? Sometimes the things i write I don't even understand lol 
so don't feel stupid. 
 
but this was about the world ending but at the same time this guy met the supposed girl of his dreams. But because the world was on fire the girl and him started to burn. and eventually they burned to death but he hoped after their deathe he would meet her again somewhere maybe in an afterlife. i hoped that cleared it up for you.

Title article: Nunquam vereor fortis animus
Date: 2008-02-10 15:08:23

i really like the picture you included with this poem

Title article: Light
Date: 2008-02-10 15:06:04
Nice
wow i found myself really thinking when i read this. 
 
i think you did such a great job writing it. 
keep writing. loved it!

Title article: Avoid Transgression
Date: 2008-02-10 10:51:34
interesting
i liked this. 
 
"getting thicker after every session" 
i really liked that line.

Title article: She Loved Him
Date: 2008-02-10 10:40:07
Amazing
very sad indeed. but beautifully done. i love the repitition of the line "she loved him, would do anything for him"

Title article: Invisible Soldier
Date: 2008-01-29 07:33:17
very sad
i enjoyed reading this story. Very good job on the conflict. It was an exciting read. Although the ending is very sad. But war is not a happy thing as i'm sure you already know. It's just a big hurricane with bullets and dead bodies and corrupt leaders. 
That's all. Very good story though.

Title article: The Beginning of an End
Date: 2008-01-28 04:47:58

There is nothing wrong with being inspired by another work, and doing your own take on it. You might even say its fanfiction.

Title article: Blue
Date: 2008-01-27 18:44:01
Blue
This personally is one of my favorites that i have written so far. This is about an individual who has lost a person very close to them simply because of their stupid decisions. The individual realizes his decision to wait was wrong and then he seeks deep into a dark depression. Although i'm interested that this poem is exactly like a movie. I'll have to take a look at this movie "open water." But this wasn't about someone getting attacked by sharks. This was something that came out of my own thoughts.

Title article: A Failed Resistance
Date: 2008-01-27 18:34:10
A Failed Resistance
Yes i wrote this a long time ago. And now going back and rereading it i see corrections and wordings that i missed. But yes i tried to display this as a raw piece of like u said someone who has cracked. I appreciate your comments and it really means alot to me for rating it so high. Thank you.

Title article: The Beginning of an End
Date: 2008-01-27 18:23:57
Children of Men
The reason it sounds alot like children of men is simply because i wrote this after i saw the movie. 
i was just so blown away by the movie that i decided to write my own version. And yes i must have made a mistake with the execution parts because they did not shoot a body just for fun. Sorry for the confusion. I appreciate the comments though.

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Max Booth III (Chainsaw Enema)

Indiana
Created On: 09/04/2008 20:41:18

Hey, man. What's up?

You got some more kickass poems up in that strange noggin of yours? Cough 'em up, I need my fix. Hurry ... I'm ... jonesing ... like ... a ... smiley face
Feedback from Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom): yea i know....i haven't been able to write anything recently...my mind is kinda bogged down at the moment. but i am trying to put some more pieces together. right now they are all incomplete, but i'll finish them up. i keep wanting to post things but then end up deleting them because i think they're shit.

Amie Kerlin (lemon)

Created On: 07/23/2008 18:10:47

Sooooooooooooo...

just stopping by to give you a friendly poke.

Amie Kerlin (lemon)

Created On: 07/12/2008 23:35:53

Of course we get along A couple of those last poems were from awhile ago, but yeah, I definitely have the darker side in me that I don't let come out and play that often. I've got a few more up my sleeve that I'm debating whether or not to post. I LOVE your stuff though. You have no problem just putting your emotions out there.

Max Booth III (Chainsaw Enema)

Created On: 07/09/2008 10:20:51

good news. bubble and her personalties got deleted! it will be a cold day in hell for those cruel bastards.

cheers!
Feedback from Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom): really?? well that's great news. i was getting very irritated with the many annoying personalities she had.

Max Booth III (Chainsaw Enema)

tied up a gagged in some bloke's basement
Created On: 07/06/2008 17:49:18

You better, or I'll have to create a second profile and bash all of your existing poems because I'm cool and not a loser. Ha!
Feedback from Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom): haha yea i know i feel left out on the whole multiple profile thing. but i guess i'll just be lame and stay with one.

Max Booth III (Chainsaw Enema)

a wasteland
Created On: 06/06/2008 12:34:56

a zombie was here


(keep on writing awesome poems!)
Feedback from Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom): well i think this is the first zombie to sign my book haha. but i'll try to keep giving you good poems to read.

Jutta Motrin (CELL)
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Created On: 05/23/2008 09:50:25

Ai Shite Imasu.

Billy (Vango)

Created On: 04/23/2008 10:46:57

Your poems are probably the only poems I can tolerate.
Feedback from Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom): Haha well i guess that's a good thing, right?

Jutta Motrin (CELL)
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Created On: 04/21/2008 16:28:51
Edited By Jutta Motrin (CELL) On: 04/21/2008 16:29:39


You are too kind (heh).

I like your poetry, now that I've delved into it a little bit more; it's so thought-provoking; it's excellent, really!

Cell... I like it because of how intricate all of the words used to describe a cell's composition are... if that makes any sense, at all (???). And your screen name (resistanceisfreedom) tells me you have idealistic views, and are in many senses a liberal... that is very cool.

Many happinesses!

Yo.
Feedback from Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom): hmmm interesting. i never thought of cell that way. thank you for your appreciation for my poems! i'm glad you enjoy them. yes, i do have idealistic views for sure. i'm glad you can accept me for that. Much happiness right back!

Jutta Motrin (CELL)
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Created On: 04/18/2008 09:37:04

CELL WAS HERE.



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