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Member Since	01/23/2008
Last Online	08/27/2008
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About Myself:

My writings began as short little stories. But then I began to experiment my writing style into the world of poems. And ever since then I haven't been able to stop writing poems. For me poems are more fun to write and they are alot more challenging.

I basically write about anything that seems relevant to me at the time. Most of my poetry is about me in a way. Every thought that I include in my poems is usually a thought I personally feel or have felt in the past.

Lastly, I really do not write anything on the mellow or happy side. Almost everything I write could be associated with depression or sadness. So, if you're a person who likes things to be upbeat and sugarcoated....then nothing I write is for you. And if you don't like what I write just save me the time and don't comment. Because most importantly, I don't write these poems to later see who thinks I did a good job or who thinks I fucked up. I write them for myself.

Also if you're like me in any way as far as disliking the world we live in as of now then take a look at some of these websites......

www.greenpeace.org
www.crisis.org
www.planetsave.com
www.worldvision.org
www.maketradefair.com

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Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Aug 26, 2008	Will We Meet Again?	Poetry	74
Aug 23, 2008	It All Seems A Million Miles Away	Poetry	53
Aug 19, 2008	A Poem Only For You	Poetry	88
Aug 18, 2008	Hoping The Sun Doesn't Rise	Poetry	213
Aug 16, 2008	Losing Everything	Poetry	75
Aug 13, 2008	Ignorance You Have Chosen	Poetry	86
Aug 11, 2008	Painful Words	Poetry	109
Aug 5, 2008	The Flowers Have Died	Poetry	91
Aug 2, 2008	Never Again	Poetry	127
Jul 29, 2008	From My Shadow, You Are Free	Poetry	153
Jul 26, 2008	My Empty Castle	Poetry	121
Jul 24, 2008	Ghosts of Ruin	Poetry	108
Jul 23, 2008	Fading From Sight	Poetry	174
Jul 21, 2008	Wall of Hate	Poetry	108
Jul 16, 2008	I'm Only Locked In Place	Poetry	108
Jul 14, 2008	Sailing Away	Poetry	122
Jul 12, 2008	Sun and the Moon	Poetry	116
Jul 10, 2008	Bullet Proof Vest	Poetry	137
Jul 8, 2008	Pulled Apart	Poetry	189
Jul 7, 2008	To Get Back To The Start	Poetry	123

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Comments

Title article: REFLECTIONS
Date: 2008-08-21 20:08:33

How about me.....well some of my past i wish not to recall. but this story was a unique one. i liked your idea. it kinda reminded me of a salute to "home"

Title article: The Sunset
Date: 2008-08-21 20:02:48

this was very good and i liked the poem that was in here as well. my favorite part had to be the description of the sunset....i have never read anything quite like that before. and the ending was perfect.

Title article: i could have loved no more!
Date: 2008-08-21 18:25:42

i thought it was a good read. it is a shame though how much she had to suffer. but i really think it would have been alot wiser to talk to him like her friend said....what she did instead was absurd to me. but good story nonetheless.

Title article: To Bleed, Chapter 10
Date: 2008-08-21 17:08:18

yes, i completely agree with Lemon....the mother seems to be ignorant and just downright selfish.
but i'm happy to see you've started writing again and i'm looking forward to the rest as always.

Title article: the disquiet fall
Date: 2008-08-21 17:03:37

i'm really not sure why people had a difficult time understanding this....i really had no problem and i thought you presented this so accurately because you painted a picture in my mind with it. i think this might be my favorite piece out of all you have done.

Title article: A Reccuring Past
Date: 2008-08-21 16:59:12

i enjoyed this and thought it was a good story with a nice assortment of characters...the only thing that i could complain about would be the ending...because i thought it came a bit too soon. but other than that, i thought this was good.

Title article: downward spiral
Date: 2008-08-20 20:14:56

oh yea most fans of NIN don't like the fact that Johnny Cash covered Hurt. but honestly, i think Cash took the song and made it his own. even though he was singing the same lyrics he took it and morphed it into his own personna. but of course, reznor's the original singer and no one can sing it better!

Title article: Nights Journey
Date: 2008-08-20 20:03:42

interesting story......some people really do think freedom exists in their death. i like how you presented this.

Title article: A Second Chance
Date: 2008-08-20 19:46:39

i thought this was a great story. it was very appealing and it held my attention from first line to last. and i had to say, i didn't see the twist coming at the end. it was a beautiful yet haunting story.

Title article: I want to wait for you, but should I
Date: 2008-08-20 19:37:29

i also think this was very good for your first poem! i thought it told a story well and there was a small bit of rhythm throughout the piece. but this seems like it's coming strait from experience, which obviously makes the peace a whole lot more meaningful and i'm happy to see you take your thoughts to poetry. it's a good thing to be able to do.

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Name	Entry
Amie Kerlin (lemon)	Created On: 07/23/2008 16:10:47 Sooooooooooooo... just stopping by to give you a friendly poke.
Amie Kerlin (lemon)	Created On: 07/12/2008 21:35:53 Of course we get along A couple of those last poems were from awhile ago, but yeah, I definitely have the darker side in me that I don't let come out and play that often. I've got a few more up my sleeve that I'm debating whether or not to post. I LOVE your stuff though. You have no problem just putting your emotions out there.
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 07/09/2008 08:20:51 good news. bubble and her personalties got deleted! it will be a cold day in hell for those cruel bastards. cheers! Feedback from Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom): really?? well that's great news. i was getting very irritated with the many annoying personalities she had.
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) tied up a gagged in some bloke's basement	Created On: 07/06/2008 15:49:18 You better, or I'll have to create a second profile and bash all of your existing poems because I'm cool and not a loser. Ha! Feedback from Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom): haha yea i know i feel left out on the whole multiple profile thing. but i guess i'll just be lame and stay with one.
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) a wasteland	Created On: 06/06/2008 10:34:56 a zombie was here (keep on writing awesome poems!) Feedback from Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom): well i think this is the first zombie to sign my book haha. but i'll try to keep giving you good poems to read.
Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)	Created On: 05/23/2008 07:50:25 Ai Shite Imasu.
Billy (Vango)	Created On: 04/23/2008 08:46:57 Your poems are probably the only poems I can tolerate. Feedback from Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom): Haha well i guess that's a good thing, right?
Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)	Created On: 04/21/2008 14:28:51 Edited By Jutta Motrin (CELL) On: 04/21/2008 14:29:39 You are too kind (heh). I like your poetry, now that I've delved into it a little bit more; it's so thought-provoking; it's excellent, really! Cell... I like it because of how intricate all of the words used to describe a cell's composition are... if that makes any sense, at all (???). And your screen name (resistanceisfreedom) tells me you have idealistic views, and are in many senses a liberal... that is very cool. Many happinesses! Yo. Feedback from Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom): hmmm interesting. i never thought of cell that way. thank you for your appreciation for my poems! i'm glad you enjoy them. yes, i do have idealistic views for sure. i'm glad you can accept me for that. Much happiness right back!
Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)	Created On: 04/18/2008 07:37:04 CELL WAS HERE.
Anna DeVine (Sad Sara) Somewhere in the sense of time	Created On: 03/08/2008 12:54:58 Hi yer Cody, I juss realized I hadn't signed yer guestbook yet, so that's what's goin' on right now. Nice book, love what yer've done with the place. It's Sorrowful sure, but it rhymes. 'Anna

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