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Member Since	01/23/2008
Last Online	09/06/2008
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About Myself:

My writings began as short little stories. But then I began to experiment my writing style into the world of poems. And ever since then I haven't been able to stop writing poems. For me poems are more fun to write and they are alot more challenging.

I basically write about anything that seems relevant to me at the time. Most of my poetry is about me in a way. Every thought that I include in my poems is usually a thought I personally feel or have felt in the past.

Lastly, I really do not write anything on the mellow or happy side. Almost everything I write could be associated with depression or sadness. So, if you're a person who likes things to be upbeat and sugarcoated....then nothing I write is for you. And if you don't like what I write just save me the time and don't comment. Because most importantly, I don't write these poems to later see who thinks I did a good job or who thinks I fucked up. I write them for myself.

Also if you're like me in any way as far as disliking the world we live in as of now then take a look at some of these websites......

www.greenpeace.org
www.crisis.org
www.planetsave.com
www.worldvision.org
www.maketradefair.com

Stories

Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Sep 6, 2008	Through Open Eyes	Poetry	64
Sep 3, 2008	Where I Belong	Poetry	62
Aug 30, 2008	A Long Time Ago	Poetry	93
Aug 26, 2008	Will We Meet Again?	Poetry	105
Aug 23, 2008	It All Seems A Million Miles Away	Poetry	71
Aug 19, 2008	Dedication	Poetry	101
Aug 18, 2008	Hoping The Sun Doesn't Rise	Poetry	297
Aug 16, 2008	Losing Everything	Poetry	95
Aug 13, 2008	Ignorance You Have Chosen	Poetry	96
Aug 11, 2008	Painful Words	Poetry	126
Aug 5, 2008	The Flowers Have Died	Poetry	104
Aug 2, 2008	Never Again	Poetry	139
Jul 29, 2008	From My Shadow, You Are Free	Poetry	166
Jul 26, 2008	My Empty Castle	Poetry	141
Jul 24, 2008	Ghosts of Ruin	Poetry	115
Jul 23, 2008	Fading From Sight	Poetry	185
Jul 21, 2008	Wall of Hate	Poetry	118
Jul 16, 2008	I'm Only Locked In Place	Poetry	116
Jul 14, 2008	Sailing Away	Poetry	132
Jul 12, 2008	Sun and the Moon	Poetry	122

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Comments

Total number of comments: 961

Title article: Contained
Date: 2008-09-06 21:47:57

this was just way too fast....it ended so abruptly. i think this could be so much better if you stretched it out. go a little bit more into detail with it.
i mean what you have here shows that you have a pretty good story...but i feel that there needs to be more.

Title article: "The Ending and the New Beginning"
Date: 2008-09-06 21:44:00

pretty good story. i liked how you described the chaos that the tornado brought. you did a good job with that.

Title article: The Lighthouse
Date: 2008-09-06 21:39:29

of course i really enjoyed the fact that you created an image of a lighthouse out of text....but i felt like the poem itself was a bit weak. it was good don't get me wrong....but i think the image blocks out the poem.

Title article: is this poetry
Date: 2008-09-06 21:36:08

i thought the flow was pretty good...it seemed to get better as the poem went on. as for the whole poem, i thought it was good, not great, but good. oh, and unlike the others i won't desecrate your opinion concerning jesus. you are entitled to say what you truly feel.

Title article: Through Open Eyes
Date: 2008-09-06 21:17:02

Harmattan, you can simply go fuck yourself.

Title article: Rage
Date: 2008-09-06 18:47:44

i thought this was a great swift message. i liked the fact that it was very short, but you still were able to get its point all the same.

Title article: Claustrophobia
Date: 2008-09-06 17:49:26

i really enjoyed this story....especially the ending, it was very disturbing. but eh, i have a fear of enclosed spaces as well, i absolutely HATE elevators haha. but hopefully i won't end up like Douglas!

Title article: LIKE A CRAZY BIRD.
Date: 2008-09-06 17:34:31

there wasn't much text to this, but i had no problem with figuring out what kind of person Ruby was. you always paint your characters so well.

Title article: Things aren't always as they appear
Date: 2008-09-06 17:30:56

call me out of place...but i just couldn't get into this story. it was boring to me. and i got confused between the characters. i like your pieces usually, i guess this one just didn't appeal to me.

Title article: A Ghetto Story
Date: 2008-09-06 13:57:32

i think this was very powerful in every single aspect. honesty, yea i know has been mentioned twice...but it's really what glimmered here. a story well told for sure.

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Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) Indiana	Created On: 09/04/2008 18:41:18 Hey, man. What's up? You got some more kickass poems up in that strange noggin of yours? Cough 'em up, I need my fix. Hurry ... I'm ... jonesing ... like ... a ... smiley face Feedback from Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom): yea i know....i haven't been able to write anything recently...my mind is kinda bogged down at the moment. but i am trying to put some more pieces together. right now they are all incomplete, but i'll finish them up. i keep wanting to post things but then end up deleting them because i think they're shit.
Amie Kerlin (lemon)	Created On: 07/23/2008 16:10:47 Sooooooooooooo... just stopping by to give you a friendly poke.
Amie Kerlin (lemon)	Created On: 07/12/2008 21:35:53 Of course we get along A couple of those last poems were from awhile ago, but yeah, I definitely have the darker side in me that I don't let come out and play that often. I've got a few more up my sleeve that I'm debating whether or not to post. I LOVE your stuff though. You have no problem just putting your emotions out there.
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 07/09/2008 08:20:51 good news. bubble and her personalties got deleted! it will be a cold day in hell for those cruel bastards. cheers! Feedback from Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom): really?? well that's great news. i was getting very irritated with the many annoying personalities she had.
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) tied up a gagged in some bloke's basement	Created On: 07/06/2008 15:49:18 You better, or I'll have to create a second profile and bash all of your existing poems because I'm cool and not a loser. Ha! Feedback from Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom): haha yea i know i feel left out on the whole multiple profile thing. but i guess i'll just be lame and stay with one.
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) a wasteland	Created On: 06/06/2008 10:34:56 a zombie was here (keep on writing awesome poems!) Feedback from Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom): well i think this is the first zombie to sign my book haha. but i'll try to keep giving you good poems to read.
Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)	Created On: 05/23/2008 07:50:25 Ai Shite Imasu.
Billy (Vango)	Created On: 04/23/2008 08:46:57 Your poems are probably the only poems I can tolerate. Feedback from Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom): Haha well i guess that's a good thing, right?
Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)	Created On: 04/21/2008 14:28:51 Edited By Jutta Motrin (CELL) On: 04/21/2008 14:29:39 You are too kind (heh). I like your poetry, now that I've delved into it a little bit more; it's so thought-provoking; it's excellent, really! Cell... I like it because of how intricate all of the words used to describe a cell's composition are... if that makes any sense, at all (???). And your screen name (resistanceisfreedom) tells me you have idealistic views, and are in many senses a liberal... that is very cool. Many happinesses! Yo. Feedback from Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom): hmmm interesting. i never thought of cell that way. thank you for your appreciation for my poems! i'm glad you enjoy them. yes, i do have idealistic views for sure. i'm glad you can accept me for that. Much happiness right back!
Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)	Created On: 04/18/2008 07:37:04 CELL WAS HERE.

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