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Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom)
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About Myself: My writings began as short little stories. But then I began to experiment my writing style into the world of poems. And ever since then I haven't been able to stop writing poems. For me, poems are more fun to write and they are alot more challenging.

I basically write about anything that seems relevant to me at the time. Most of my poetry is about me in a way. Every thought that I include in my poems is usually a thought I personally feel or have felt in the past. What I write basically is me trying to get incomplete or unfocused thoughts out into the open, a weird way for me to mend. Music is a huge love of mine. Most of my writing comes into existance when i'm listening to it.

"No matter what happens now, you shouldn't be afraid. Because I know today has been the most perfect day I've ever seen." -Radiohead


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DateTitleCategoryHits
Sep 30, 2008There You ArePoetry 183
Sep 28, 2008A Subway CarPoetry 210
Sep 22, 2008Ashes (Reconstructed)Poetry 280
Sep 20, 2008Bleeding SeaPoetry 206
Sep 16, 2008A Twilight SkyPoetry 493
Sep 13, 2008A New BeginningPoetry 220
Sep 11, 2008To My RecognitionPoetry 193
Sep 8, 2008House of CardsPoetry 179
Sep 6, 2008Through Open EyesPoetry 276
Sep 3, 2008Where I BelongPoetry 230
Aug 30, 2008A Long Time AgoPoetry 223
Aug 26, 2008Will We Meet Again?Poetry 191
Aug 23, 2008It All Seems A Million Miles AwayPoetry 164
Aug 19, 2008DedicationPoetry 211
Aug 18, 2008Hoping The Sun Doesn't RisePoetry 420
Aug 16, 2008Losing EverythingPoetry 283
Aug 13, 2008Ignorance You Have ChosenPoetry 175
Aug 11, 2008Painful WordsPoetry 255
Aug 5, 2008The Flowers Have DiedPoetry 175
Aug 2, 2008Never AgainPoetry 227

Comments

Total number of comments: 1443

Title article: Ashes to Ashes
Date: 2009-01-07 19:33:03

it definitely conveyed its meaning without confusion....but i didn't care for the same ending rhyme, as well as the repitition of some lines.

Title article: JULIA'S NIGHT OUT.
Date: 2009-01-07 19:26:26

to be honest i actually didn't notice this was part two until about halfway down...i guess the bar scene threw me off...but again you have made Julia a very interesting character. i hope you continue onward...and hopefully Greg won't discriminate her like her father.

Title article: Angel of Music
Date: 2009-01-06 14:24:11

well i love the title...but as for the poem, it didn't have a distinct rhyming scheme but it still flowed along a very nice pace. i can easily see how this could be a simple love poem...but i also thought this could be simply one's love for music itself..."he" could be the metaphor for music.

Title article: To Whom It May Concern
Date: 2009-01-05 17:19:27

i thought this was pretty good....easily understood and pulled at the heart in so little words.

Title article: A Dance in the Rain
Date: 2009-01-05 17:12:49

i just read a story similiar to this one...but i must say this one felt more tangible. i love the way you implemented the rain in this story...really gave it a damp, cold effect. and i also thought it was great how you made the lost love talk to her...because even though someone has passed you can still see them and hear them talk in your mind...you don't just forget those things. overall, i thought you did a nice job. and i really hope you contine to write.

Title article: Life needs just a bit of Joy...
Date: 2009-01-05 17:05:46

haha well it appears as though ziggy got a bit comment happy. but that's okay we all get like that from time to time....and now a better story to comment! usually these kinds of stories bore me but this one did not. you wrote effectively enough to consume me the whole way. and i did like how joy meant his wife, not as in joy=happiness.

Title article: HOW DARE YOU
Date: 2009-01-05 16:42:48

this had a nice comedic tone to it...gave you a nice feeling unlike so many other poems on here. but yea i liked it. makes you think what a dog is really thinking when you are giving it a command. and manonuts...yea i think he should be removed...you should see the obscene comment he left on my newest poem.

Title article: Her Words Are Flowers
Date: 2009-01-05 16:38:03

To Allmine, well i appreciate your honesty but really the poems i write really aren't to or about a specific "her"  
they are more directed at an effigy of love or an effigy of myself...so sometimes when it sounds like i'm referencing to a "her" i could be talking to myself...yea it's hard for me to describe. 
but to manonuts....i will not send you any message whatsoever...and don't call me dawg...do not act as if you are know me and we are friends. i would never go that low as to engage in conversation with you. from what you have said, you sound like a filthy pig. and don't ever comment my poems again.

Title article: End of Days
Date: 2009-01-03 16:47:16

the flow was good and some of the lines i enjoyed but overall i didn't care for it...the presentation and the language...my kind of subject. just not my kind of presentation.

Title article: Riot in the moonlight
Date: 2009-01-03 16:36:16

i hate to regurgitate, but this plot was very similiar to that of Twilight....how the girl wants to be transformed while the vampire tries to withdraw from the request....but i thought this was decent....maybe you can continue onwards? and yes, you write very well considering english is not your mother language....i barely noticed the words missing here or there. oh and very nice picture you chose as well :]

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Max Booth III (Chainsaw Enema)

Indiana
Created On: 09/04/2008 20:41:18

Hey, man. What's up?

You got some more kickass poems up in that strange noggin of yours? Cough 'em up, I need my fix. Hurry ... I'm ... jonesing ... like ... a ... smiley face
Feedback from Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom): yea i know....i haven't been able to write anything recently...my mind is kinda bogged down at the moment. but i am trying to put some more pieces together. right now they are all incomplete, but i'll finish them up. i keep wanting to post things but then end up deleting them because i think they're shit.

Amie Kerlin (lemon)

Created On: 07/23/2008 18:10:47

Sooooooooooooo...

just stopping by to give you a friendly poke.

Amie Kerlin (lemon)

Created On: 07/12/2008 23:35:53

Of course we get along A couple of those last poems were from awhile ago, but yeah, I definitely have the darker side in me that I don't let come out and play that often. I've got a few more up my sleeve that I'm debating whether or not to post. I LOVE your stuff though. You have no problem just putting your emotions out there.

Max Booth III (Chainsaw Enema)

Created On: 07/09/2008 10:20:51

good news. bubble and her personalties got deleted! it will be a cold day in hell for those cruel bastards.

cheers!
Feedback from Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom): really?? well that's great news. i was getting very irritated with the many annoying personalities she had.

Max Booth III (Chainsaw Enema)

tied up a gagged in some bloke's basement
Created On: 07/06/2008 17:49:18

You better, or I'll have to create a second profile and bash all of your existing poems because I'm cool and not a loser. Ha!
Feedback from Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom): haha yea i know i feel left out on the whole multiple profile thing. but i guess i'll just be lame and stay with one.

Max Booth III (Chainsaw Enema)

a wasteland
Created On: 06/06/2008 12:34:56

a zombie was here


(keep on writing awesome poems!)
Feedback from Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom): well i think this is the first zombie to sign my book haha. but i'll try to keep giving you good poems to read.

Jutta Motrin (CELL)
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Created On: 05/23/2008 09:50:25

Ai Shite Imasu.

Billy (Vango)

Created On: 04/23/2008 10:46:57

Your poems are probably the only poems I can tolerate.
Feedback from Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom): Haha well i guess that's a good thing, right?

Jutta Motrin (CELL)
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Created On: 04/21/2008 16:28:51
Edited By Jutta Motrin (CELL) On: 04/21/2008 16:29:39


You are too kind (heh).

I like your poetry, now that I've delved into it a little bit more; it's so thought-provoking; it's excellent, really!

Cell... I like it because of how intricate all of the words used to describe a cell's composition are... if that makes any sense, at all (???). And your screen name (resistanceisfreedom) tells me you have idealistic views, and are in many senses a liberal... that is very cool.

Many happinesses!

Yo.
Feedback from Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom): hmmm interesting. i never thought of cell that way. thank you for your appreciation for my poems! i'm glad you enjoy them. yes, i do have idealistic views for sure. i'm glad you can accept me for that. Much happiness right back!

Jutta Motrin (CELL)
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Created On: 04/18/2008 09:37:04

CELL WAS HERE.



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