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Member Since	01/23/2008
Last Online	10/10/2008
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About Myself:

My writings began as short little stories. But then I began to experiment my writing style into the world of poems. And ever since then I haven't been able to stop writing poems. For me, poems are more fun to write and they are alot more challenging.

I basically write about anything that seems relevant to me at the time. Most of my poetry is about me in a way. Every thought that I include in my poems is usually a thought I personally feel or have felt in the past.

I really do not write anything on the mellow or happy side. So, if you're a person who likes things to be upbeat and sugarcoated....then nothing I write is for you. And if you don't like what I write just save me the time and don't comment. Because most importantly, I don't write these poems to later see who thinks I did a good job or who thinks I fucked up. I write them for myself.

Lastly, some of my poems might even offend you because of the subjects i oppose within them. I personally feel like this country is going in the complete opposite direction of what is right...and I won't call myself an American anymore. I will not be accused for what this country does to itself. And I am surely not proud, and won't protect a flag that stands for nothing it foolishly preaches. Ending on that note, I'll leave you with a poem by one of my favorite poets, Saul Williams.

They say that I am a poet.
I wonder what they would say
If they saw me
From the inside.
I bottle emotions
And place them into the sea
For others to unbottle
On distant shores
I am unsure as to whether
They ever reach and for that matter
As to whether
I ever get my point across
Or my love

-From a true poet, Saul Williams

Stories

Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Mar 16, 2008	Alcohol	Poetry	448
Mar 15, 2008	Solitude	Poetry	190
Mar 15, 2008	Mockery	Poetry	169
Mar 15, 2008	Whore	Poetry	227
Mar 15, 2008	Letting Everything Fall	Poetry	176
Mar 14, 2008	Slave	Poetry	180
Mar 14, 2008	Choices	Poetry	161
Mar 13, 2008	Can't Take This Anymore	Poetry	155
Mar 12, 2008	Beautiful America	Poetry	253
Mar 12, 2008	Sight Seeing	Poetry	218
Mar 11, 2008	Peaceful Apparitions	Poetry	180
Mar 11, 2008	Relief From the Cold	Poetry	173
Mar 9, 2008	Scientist	Poetry	191
Mar 9, 2008	Identity	Poetry	194
Mar 8, 2008	Filling A Void	Poetry	211
Mar 6, 2008	Razorblade	Poetry	237
Mar 5, 2008	Everything Becomes Still	Poetry	195
Mar 4, 2008	Conceited	Poetry	190
Feb 29, 2008	Endless Rain	Poetry	248
Feb 28, 2008	Futile	Poetry	206

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Comments

Total number of comments: 1150

Title article: Her Magic Touch, Chapter 4
Date: 2008-10-08 18:16:57

eh i didn't really care for this chapter....this seems to be getting a little too farfetch'd now for my liking. and it seemed like you didn't know where to go with this chapter.

Title article: Her Magic Touch, Chapter 3
Date: 2008-10-08 18:12:19

odd...very odd...something like this happening in reality i seriously doubt....but i still am entertained..and that's all that matters!!

Title article: Her Magic Touch, Chapter 2
Date: 2008-10-08 18:07:52

hmmm i don't think i've ever read anything as weird as this.
haha but i do like it....and your writing and dialogue...it's very good.

Title article: Her Magic Touch, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-10-08 18:01:47

i'm not one to really enjoy these chapters of writing everybody finds necessary to write every once in awhile...but the title seemed interesting so i gave it a try....and i have to say i really enjoyed this first chapter. you definitely have a talent for writing and it showed clearly in the beginning here.
i do like how i have no idea where this is going to go....well, continuing on!!

Title article: The Surface
Date: 2008-10-08 17:53:26

well whether it relates to you or not, it definitely conveys its message of being immobile emotionally...not having the means to get over something. and i think many people can relate to this. i'm one of them.

Title article: GHOST BABY.
Date: 2008-10-08 17:49:35

a heartfelt poem that was beautifully done. it is cool to me how you are able to write depressing poems, but then you are also able to write very touching pieces as well.

Title article: Agile Enlightenment
Date: 2008-10-08 17:46:50

i agree with Max...i have never read a poem of yours that hasn't required me to think deeply or one that i haven't enjoyed. your poems are always carefully orchestrated.

Title article: The train that forgets to stop at every station
Date: 2008-10-07 18:38:30

yea i commend you on portraying this alcohol addict. i think you did a good job jotting down his thoughts....you made them entertaining to read. and yea, i think it was easy to pick up this person was young and still in school. hopefully this is just fiction, but then again i know my fair share of drug addicts in my own school so it's not impossible for this to be true.

Title article: A Dreamy Morning
Date: 2008-10-07 18:32:14

i have the same opinion on the length as hodders....but wow, i did really like this one...at first, i thought it was going to be this feel good poem about everything beautiful and bright..but it turned out to be different than that. it was living in now..forgetting about all the aspects of life and just being.....which could be such a great thing to feel...but the ending was what i enjoyed most where you pointed out that the description is not the described. very creative and enticing.

Title article: Internet Love
Date: 2008-10-07 18:22:04

i enjoyed this read. even though it didn't have a distinct rhyme to it, i still pulled out a nice easy flow that moved along the lines. and the story it told was interesting as well....but, maybe it could have worked..if the both of you would have portrayed your true self on the web, rather than only showing some truth to the person you were or distorting it. if you distort who you are in a relationship, how do you really expect it to work??

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Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) Indiana	Created On: 09/04/2008 18:41:18 Hey, man. What's up? You got some more kickass poems up in that strange noggin of yours? Cough 'em up, I need my fix. Hurry ... I'm ... jonesing ... like ... a ... smiley face Feedback from Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom): yea i know....i haven't been able to write anything recently...my mind is kinda bogged down at the moment. but i am trying to put some more pieces together. right now they are all incomplete, but i'll finish them up. i keep wanting to post things but then end up deleting them because i think they're shit.
Amie Kerlin (lemon)	Created On: 07/23/2008 16:10:47 Sooooooooooooo... just stopping by to give you a friendly poke.
Amie Kerlin (lemon)	Created On: 07/12/2008 21:35:53 Of course we get along A couple of those last poems were from awhile ago, but yeah, I definitely have the darker side in me that I don't let come out and play that often. I've got a few more up my sleeve that I'm debating whether or not to post. I LOVE your stuff though. You have no problem just putting your emotions out there.
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 07/09/2008 08:20:51 good news. bubble and her personalties got deleted! it will be a cold day in hell for those cruel bastards. cheers! Feedback from Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom): really?? well that's great news. i was getting very irritated with the many annoying personalities she had.
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) tied up a gagged in some bloke's basement	Created On: 07/06/2008 15:49:18 You better, or I'll have to create a second profile and bash all of your existing poems because I'm cool and not a loser. Ha! Feedback from Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom): haha yea i know i feel left out on the whole multiple profile thing. but i guess i'll just be lame and stay with one.
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) a wasteland	Created On: 06/06/2008 10:34:56 a zombie was here (keep on writing awesome poems!) Feedback from Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom): well i think this is the first zombie to sign my book haha. but i'll try to keep giving you good poems to read.
Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)	Created On: 05/23/2008 07:50:25 Ai Shite Imasu.
Billy (Vango)	Created On: 04/23/2008 08:46:57 Your poems are probably the only poems I can tolerate. Feedback from Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom): Haha well i guess that's a good thing, right?
Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)	Created On: 04/21/2008 14:28:51 Edited By Jutta Motrin (CELL) On: 04/21/2008 14:29:39 You are too kind (heh). I like your poetry, now that I've delved into it a little bit more; it's so thought-provoking; it's excellent, really! Cell... I like it because of how intricate all of the words used to describe a cell's composition are... if that makes any sense, at all (???). And your screen name (resistanceisfreedom) tells me you have idealistic views, and are in many senses a liberal... that is very cool. Many happinesses! Yo. Feedback from Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom): hmmm interesting. i never thought of cell that way. thank you for your appreciation for my poems! i'm glad you enjoy them. yes, i do have idealistic views for sure. i'm glad you can accept me for that. Much happiness right back!
Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)	Created On: 04/18/2008 07:37:04 CELL WAS HERE.

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