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Member Since	01/23/2008
Last Online	09/04/2008
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About Myself:

My writings began as short little stories. But then I began to experiment my writing style into the world of poems. And ever since then I haven't been able to stop writing poems. For me poems are more fun to write and they are alot more challenging.

I basically write about anything that seems relevant to me at the time. Most of my poetry is about me in a way. Every thought that I include in my poems is usually a thought I personally feel or have felt in the past.

Lastly, I really do not write anything on the mellow or happy side. Almost everything I write could be associated with depression or sadness. So, if you're a person who likes things to be upbeat and sugarcoated....then nothing I write is for you. And if you don't like what I write just save me the time and don't comment. Because most importantly, I don't write these poems to later see who thinks I did a good job or who thinks I fucked up. I write them for myself.

Also if you're like me in any way as far as disliking the world we live in as of now then take a look at some of these websites......

www.greenpeace.org
www.crisis.org
www.planetsave.com
www.worldvision.org
www.maketradefair.com

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Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Sep 3, 2008	Where I Belong	Poetry	50
Aug 30, 2008	A Long Time Ago	Poetry	88
Aug 26, 2008	Will We Meet Again?	Poetry	98
Aug 23, 2008	It All Seems A Million Miles Away	Poetry	70
Aug 19, 2008	Dedication	Poetry	99
Aug 18, 2008	Hoping The Sun Doesn't Rise	Poetry	292
Aug 16, 2008	Losing Everything	Poetry	92
Aug 13, 2008	Ignorance You Have Chosen	Poetry	95
Aug 11, 2008	Painful Words	Poetry	122
Aug 5, 2008	The Flowers Have Died	Poetry	95
Aug 2, 2008	Never Again	Poetry	133
Jul 29, 2008	From My Shadow, You Are Free	Poetry	164
Jul 26, 2008	My Empty Castle	Poetry	131
Jul 24, 2008	Ghosts of Ruin	Poetry	114
Jul 23, 2008	Fading From Sight	Poetry	183
Jul 21, 2008	Wall of Hate	Poetry	115
Jul 16, 2008	I'm Only Locked In Place	Poetry	113
Jul 14, 2008	Sailing Away	Poetry	130
Jul 12, 2008	Sun and the Moon	Poetry	121
Jul 10, 2008	Bullet Proof Vest	Poetry	147

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Comments

Total number of comments: 946

Title article: Wisdom Is For The Birds
Date: 2008-09-04 19:21:34

you definitely got your message across with ease....and the story itself was written well.

Title article: ever hear that good things come in threes?
Date: 2008-09-04 19:15:29

acid days.....haha yea that's so funny...eh not really. drugs are disgusting just like the poeple who use them.
but i really liked your first poem and they do seem to be carrying heavy depth. "Nuclear Winter" that was a very beautiful two words.

Title article: BREAKING through the SuRfAcE
Date: 2008-09-04 18:55:34

this was a very cool poem....and the content within was just as good. it had a very nice flow to it as well. i'm glad i clicked on this!!

Title article: IT'S HARD
Date: 2008-09-04 18:50:53

i think this was really good...because i felt that you were really putting something out there...it was simple but yet you were able to draw very complex emotions from it...well, i was able to at least. so that makes this a great piece in my mind. oh and don't mind these other idiots who say that it wasn't good enough. it was.

Title article: Vast Fear
Date: 2008-09-04 18:46:46

i liked how you described running away from yourself...it was done differently than i have ever read before.....and Harmattan, maybe it would be a deep shame to you....but it's very real and people do feel like running away sometimes...i'm definitely one of them....so don't say that you can't comprehend it when it is indeed a real feeling.

Title article: Those Hills
Date: 2008-09-04 18:42:26

i really thought this was an amazing poem!! i enjoyed the first stanza greatly and i keep reading it over and over..this will be one to drop into the favorites.

Title article: Bad Religion
Date: 2008-09-04 18:29:07

i really liked this. it was an interesting read for me and i really thought you proved what you needed to well...i can remember when i was younger going to my grandparent's church and thinking some of the same thoughts you jotted down in this...it always felt so uncomfortable to me. anyway, good read.

Title article: For as you judge, you will be judged
Date: 2008-09-03 19:15:18

i think you did a good job painting this scene...which made it alot easier for me to understand where you were heading with this....but yea, having that kind of relationship seems to be the best way to go. who gives a shit about what anyone else thinks!

Title article: Hearts Cry Out
Date: 2008-09-03 19:10:59

i wouldn't say this was all over the place, but the flow did seem a little out of focus....but i still loved the poem...this had some intense thought put into it.
it shows.

Title article: Bonnie
Date: 2008-09-03 19:02:52

ugh...yea that last comment was by me....i don't know why it does that.

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Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) Indiana	Created On: 09/04/2008 18:41:18 Hey, man. What's up? You got some more kickass poems up in that strange noggin of yours? Cough 'em up, I need my fix. Hurry ... I'm ... jonesing ... like ... a ... smiley face
Amie Kerlin (lemon)	Created On: 07/23/2008 16:10:47 Sooooooooooooo... just stopping by to give you a friendly poke.
Amie Kerlin (lemon)	Created On: 07/12/2008 21:35:53 Of course we get along A couple of those last poems were from awhile ago, but yeah, I definitely have the darker side in me that I don't let come out and play that often. I've got a few more up my sleeve that I'm debating whether or not to post. I LOVE your stuff though. You have no problem just putting your emotions out there.
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 07/09/2008 08:20:51 good news. bubble and her personalties got deleted! it will be a cold day in hell for those cruel bastards. cheers! Feedback from Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom): really?? well that's great news. i was getting very irritated with the many annoying personalities she had.
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) tied up a gagged in some bloke's basement	Created On: 07/06/2008 15:49:18 You better, or I'll have to create a second profile and bash all of your existing poems because I'm cool and not a loser. Ha! Feedback from Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom): haha yea i know i feel left out on the whole multiple profile thing. but i guess i'll just be lame and stay with one.
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) a wasteland	Created On: 06/06/2008 10:34:56 a zombie was here (keep on writing awesome poems!) Feedback from Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom): well i think this is the first zombie to sign my book haha. but i'll try to keep giving you good poems to read.
Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)	Created On: 05/23/2008 07:50:25 Ai Shite Imasu.
Billy (Vango)	Created On: 04/23/2008 08:46:57 Your poems are probably the only poems I can tolerate. Feedback from Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom): Haha well i guess that's a good thing, right?
Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)	Created On: 04/21/2008 14:28:51 Edited By Jutta Motrin (CELL) On: 04/21/2008 14:29:39 You are too kind (heh). I like your poetry, now that I've delved into it a little bit more; it's so thought-provoking; it's excellent, really! Cell... I like it because of how intricate all of the words used to describe a cell's composition are... if that makes any sense, at all (???). And your screen name (resistanceisfreedom) tells me you have idealistic views, and are in many senses a liberal... that is very cool. Many happinesses! Yo. Feedback from Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom): hmmm interesting. i never thought of cell that way. thank you for your appreciation for my poems! i'm glad you enjoy them. yes, i do have idealistic views for sure. i'm glad you can accept me for that. Much happiness right back!
Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)	Created On: 04/18/2008 07:37:04 CELL WAS HERE.

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