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Member Since	03/12/2008
Last Online	01/07/2009
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Website/Blog:	myspace.com/wichita_witch_doctor
About Myself:	I'm a teenager who lives in Northern Chicago, and I love writing. Sometimes I'll write something every day, or sometimes I'll write once a month. It fluctuates. I write poems and little adventure stories, and I dabble in dramas :)

Stories

Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Dec 24, 2008	With Great Power, Chapter 1	Adventure	48
Dec 21, 2008	Last Words	Poetry	73
Dec 15, 2008	Reform-Conform	Poetry	125
Nov 25, 2008	Simple House, Chapter 2	Mystery	54
Nov 23, 2008	Simple House, Chapter 1	Mystery	81
Nov 9, 2008	Untitled	Poetry	114
Oct 2, 2008	Eyes Open	Poetry	123
Oct 1, 2008	The Day We Became Men, Chapter 6	Miscellaneous Stories	75
Sep 23, 2008	The Undertakers- Part 2- Funerals	Horror	139
Sep 18, 2008	And Here I Am	Poetry	144
Aug 25, 2008	The Day We Became Men, Chapter 5	Miscellaneous Stories	102
Aug 23, 2008	The Day We Became Men, Chapter 4	Miscellaneous Stories	137
Aug 21, 2008	The Day We Became Men, Chapter 3	Miscellaneous Stories	123
Aug 20, 2008	The Ungrateful Waves	Poetry	216
Jul 14, 2008	The Day We Became Men, Chapter 2	Miscellaneous Stories	133
Jul 11, 2008	The Day We Became Men, Chapter 1	Miscellaneous Stories	168
Jun 14, 2008	The Seen and the Unseen	Horror	157
Jun 5, 2008	Snowman	Poetry	177
Jun 2, 2008	Grey Tidings, Chapter 1	Horror	146
May 19, 2008	Help You Sleep at Night	Poetry	189

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Comments

Title article: A Toothy Tale
Date: 2008-08-24 22:50:43

This was one of the funniest stories I have read in so long. You made the characters seem so real. It was an ingenious and original idea!

I can't wait for more.

Title article: Postcard
Date: 2008-08-24 22:18:37

This is an incredible portrait of a broken soul being looked upon by an outsiders point of view, an outsider who recognized the inner beauty in this person.

Truly an incredible and highly descriptive work, done with a great feel and style.

Good work!

Title article: Total Forgivness
Date: 2008-08-24 17:31:51

OH!

You're talking about God...

Disregard my previous comment.

Great poem.

Title article: Total Forgivness
Date: 2008-08-24 17:31:04

A very good poem, could be lyrics to a love song.

Seemed a little bit clingy to me, however.

Title article: HE LOVED GRETA GARBO.
Date: 2008-08-24 17:25:01

I was expecting that he wanted to kill Greta Garbo. But I guess I was wrong.

A very well told story, I know that everybody has dreams and wonders about things that are either impossible or wrong.

Title article: A Date with Priya
Date: 2008-08-24 17:21:35

I really loved the setting here. Seldom do I read stories set in India but this was one of the fine few I have read.

It was wonderful how you weaved the Romeo and Juliet into the plot.

Keep it up!

Title article: Thoughts of a Soldier
Date: 2008-08-23 15:04:13

Masterpiece!

I love everything about it, especially the last line, which topped off the poem with such an impact. I am surprised I haven't read any of you're work before but I will make sure to now.

Title article: Hoping The Sun Doesn't Rise
Date: 2008-08-23 14:59:51

Flawless poem. I noticed the change of content with your writing in this one but only made it more powerful.

Keep it up.

Title article: Cleansing
Date: 2008-08-23 13:22:19

I really like this story, it was very thrilling and very descriptive.

I have to wonder, however.

Have you ever seen the television show "Death Note"? I've seen a few episodes and the idea is very similar.

Title article: My Present
Date: 2008-08-23 10:01:30

Very sweet.

The last stanza in a poem will generally characterize the entire poem as a whole. To me the last line made it seem like a 20th Anniversary Hallmark card.

Other than that little bit, it was terrific.

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Guestbook

Name	Entry
Nunyo Bidness (cookingWine)	Created On: 05/11/2008 21:37:38 It is good that you comment people frequently. There should be more of that. I have tried to find your stories, and I found one and read/feedbacked it. If you could give me a list of which are stories, that would be awesome. I liked the tone. Hope you keep commenting others and helping them out, it's a good thing.
Ha Tran (extinct kiddo) Chi-Townn	Created On: 03/13/2008 21:07:43 hey thurr, your stories and poems are great. keep writing!
Yahaira Nunez (Pez) This e-mail address is being protected from spam bots, you need JavaScript enabled to view it	Created On: 03/12/2008 16:17:22 Edited By Jutta Motrin (CELL) On: 05/21/2008 13:16:27 [Notice: Last Edit by Site Moderator]