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WHAT KIND OF GOD? By Jon Stalk...

IF THE SUN DIDN'T RISE BY JON STALK...

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Member Since	03/12/2008
Last Online	08/31/2008
Connections	14
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Website/Blog:	myspace.com/wichita_witch_doctor
About Myself:	hello. my name is nick, but my pen name is Nate Stanford. so you can call me that. goodnight.

Stories

Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Aug 25, 2008	The Day We Became Men, Chapter 5	Miscellaneous Stories	32
Aug 23, 2008	The Day We Became Men, Chapter 4	Miscellaneous Stories	48
Aug 21, 2008	The Day We Became Men, Chapter 3	Miscellaneous Stories	56
Aug 20, 2008	The Ungrateful Waves	Poetry	77
Jul 14, 2008	The Day We Became Men, Chapter 2	Miscellaneous Stories	72
Jul 11, 2008	The Day We Became Men, Chapter 1	Miscellaneous Stories	96
Jun 14, 2008	The Seen and the Unseen	Horror	100
Jun 5, 2008	Snowman	Poetry	110
Jun 2, 2008	Grey Tidings, Chapter 1	Horror	84
May 19, 2008	Help You Sleep at Night	Poetry	119
May 18, 2008	The New Jordans	Humor	235
May 16, 2008	The Undertakers- Part 1- Murderers	Horror	126
May 14, 2008	Civil War	Miscellaneous Stories	157
May 12, 2008	I am my Crucifix	Poetry	132
May 12, 2008	Bleeding Out the Past	Poetry	161
May 11, 2008	Unrequited	Poetry	124
May 11, 2008	Friday Night	Miscellaneous Stories	168
May 8, 2008	Beneath the Oak Tree	Poetry	142
May 5, 2008	Split Seconds and Poison Emotions	Miscellaneous Stories	153
May 5, 2008	The Hills of Mundo Belleza	Poetry	116

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Comments

Title article: HE LOVED GRETA GARBO.
Date: 2008-08-24 17:25:01

I was expecting that he wanted to kill Greta Garbo. But I guess I was wrong.

A very well told story, I know that everybody has dreams and wonders about things that are either impossible or wrong.

Title article: A Date with Priya
Date: 2008-08-24 17:21:35

I really loved the setting here. Seldom do I read stories set in India but this was one of the fine few I have read.

It was wonderful how you weaved the Romeo and Juliet into the plot.

Keep it up!

Title article: A Truth Recognized
Date: 2008-08-24 17:12:41

Really nice job there.

The rhyming and message were both so beautiful together.

Personally, I'm not a very religious person, but I was still able to enjoy it thoroughly.

Title article: WO(W)NDERFUL WIFE
Date: 2008-08-24 16:58:46

I can't really see what you're trying to convey here...

Title article: UNCLE Limp
Date: 2008-08-23 15:25:16

These poems are ridiculous. I can't stand them.

I applaud you for confidently putting a glossary into your poetry, there were a few words you can't expect readers to understand. Also, I have to give you some credit for finding that many words rhyming with "imp"

Still, I didn't enjoy it one bit.

Title article: Thoughts of a Soldier
Date: 2008-08-23 15:04:13

Masterpiece!

I love everything about it, especially the last line, which topped off the poem with such an impact. I am surprised I haven't read any of you're work before but I will make sure to now.

Title article: Hoping The Sun Doesn't Rise
Date: 2008-08-23 14:59:51

Flawless poem. I noticed the change of content with your writing in this one but only made it more powerful.

Keep it up.

Title article: Cleansing
Date: 2008-08-23 13:22:19

I really like this story, it was very thrilling and very descriptive.

I have to wonder, however.

Have you ever seen the television show "Death Note"? I've seen a few episodes and the idea is very similar.

Title article: My Present
Date: 2008-08-23 10:01:30

Very sweet.

The last stanza in a poem will generally characterize the entire poem as a whole. To me the last line made it seem like a 20th Anniversary Hallmark card.

Other than that little bit, it was terrific.

Title article: HENPECKED HUSBAND
Date: 2008-08-21 09:23:17

I didn't particularly like it but I do applaud the rhyme scheme, it gave it a humorous demeanor.

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05/22/2008 20:33:52	Re:For all you horror movie fans out there...	Off-Topic	1322
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Connection

Nate Stanford (nick711)'s connections

Dipankar Dasgupta (d.dasgupta)

Paula (hey_hey_paula)

Matt (midnighthowl15)

Gwyn (Darkness.of.Mystery)

Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)

retrocious.[/sneh] (hxc inc.)

Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)

Lori Branson (lorislittlesecret)

Nichelle (stripes_paper.cut)

Billy (Vango)

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Guestbook

Name	Entry
Nunyo Bidness (cookingWine)	Created On: 05/11/2008 19:37:38 It is good that you comment people frequently. There should be more of that. I have tried to find your stories, and I found one and read/feedbacked it. If you could give me a list of which are stories, that would be awesome. I liked the tone. Hope you keep commenting others and helping them out, it's a good thing.
Hanna McCormack (extinct kiddo) Chi-Townn	Created On: 03/13/2008 19:07:43 hey thurr, your stories and poems are great. keep writing!
Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)	Created On: 03/12/2008 14:17:22 Edited By Jutta Motrin (CELL) On: 05/21/2008 11:16:27 [Notice: Last Edit by Site Moderator]