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Nate Stanford (nick711)
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Website/Blog: myspace.com/wichita_witch_doctor
About Myself: I'm a teenager who lives in Northern Chicago, and I love writing. Sometimes I'll write something every day, or sometimes I'll write once a month. It fluctuates. I write poems and little adventure stories, and I dabble in dramas :)

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DateTitleCategoryHits
Aug 25, 2008The Day We Became Men, Chapter 5Miscellaneous Stories 102
Oct 1, 2008The Day We Became Men, Chapter 6Miscellaneous Stories 75
Mar 17, 2008The FoolPoetry 186
May 5, 2008The Hills of Mundo BellezaPoetry 157
May 18, 2008The New JordansHumor 389
Mar 18, 2008The PoliticianPoetry 223
Jun 14, 2008The Seen and the UnseenHorror 157
Apr 28, 2008The Simple, yet Dramatic Occurences of a Lead PencilPoetry 172
May 16, 2008The Undertakers- Part 1- MurderersHorror 195
Sep 23, 2008The Undertakers- Part 2- FuneralsHorror 139
Aug 20, 2008The Ungrateful WavesPoetry 216
Mar 24, 2008TomorrowPoetry 206
Apr 18, 2008Tricky Old WomenHumor 280
May 11, 2008UnrequitedPoetry 175
Nov 9, 2008UntitledPoetry 114
Apr 30, 2008Vera LanePoetry 221
Dec 24, 2008With Great Power, Chapter 1Adventure 48
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Total number of comments: 219

Title article: Vagabond
Date: 2008-12-24 09:53:31

Damn. 
 
What a poem, very descriptive and dramatic. Maybe all of our lives are adventures, and we're all just a different person trying to find a different thing. But who knows if we'll find what we're looking for. 
 
Whether I interpreted it right or wrong, it was done very well. 
 
Keep writing :)

Title article: TRUE LOVE
Date: 2008-12-24 09:46:46

I really don't understand why the artistic way to view love is as something very evil and malignant. Because its really a magical thing. 
 
Either way, the words here were very well placed, and it kept me going with rhythm.

Title article: An Unwelcome Encounter
Date: 2008-12-21 21:28:14

I don't think it was unspoken, necessarily. I mean, it was entertaining, and even though there wasn't much character development, I was able to feel sorry for the lonely reverend, and grasp the awkwardness of the situation, that it was totally unexpected. Either way, I really enjoyed this, finished or not.

Title article: Light of Day
Date: 2008-12-21 20:10:47

Morbid but beautiful. 
 
I really like your poetry.

Title article: no more
Date: 2008-12-20 10:40:52

Wow I really liked this :) 
 
You have an excellent gift for description.

Title article: Look at you
Date: 2008-12-19 18:38:22

Haha. I noticed that jipper made a spelling error when he was talking about your spelling errors. 
 
Honestly, I didn't let those bother me, I thought it was a lovely piece, and a very insightful one at that. 
 
Nice work, keep it up.

Title article: Smooth
Date: 2008-12-19 18:26:16

Wow I really liked this :) 
 
Great imagery you had in there, I could really imagine myself being there... 
 
Wait, is wonderment a word?

Title article: Commodity
Date: 2008-12-18 18:08:16

Haha wow I can't believe I'm just reading your great poems now. Are you new? Lol. 
 
But I really loved this one, and it is ridiculous how people misuse the word love for silly materialistic desires. Well done.

Title article: TERRORISM– FREEDOM FROM FEAR
Date: 2008-12-18 18:03:06

Yeah, I completely agree with resistancefreedom. 
 
Pure evil is something that truly exists and does exist in few people. People "identified" as terrorists just because they are Islamic are the oppressed people, the terrorists aren't oppressed or misunderstood, and the politicians aren't the people who are pushing the terrorists to do what they do.

Title article: Translation
Date: 2008-12-18 17:52:54

Wow. 
 
I feel like I've read something like this before...maybe it was just the first line that caught my eye there but this was really a fantastic poem. 
Love shouldn't be about what people look like, it should be about being beautiful on the inside. It seems like such a cheesy little saying but the way you portrayed it here, you made it seem like the most brilliant thing in the world. 
Bravo.

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Nunyo Bidness (cookingWine)

Created On: 05/11/2008 21:37:38

It is good that you comment people frequently. There should be more of that.
I have tried to find your stories, and I found one and read/feedbacked it. If you could give me a list of which are stories, that would be awesome.
I liked the tone.
Hope you keep commenting others and helping them out, it's a good thing.

Ha Tran (extinct kiddo)

Chi-Townn
Created On: 03/13/2008 21:07:43

hey thurr,
your stories and poems are great.
keep writing!


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Created On: 03/12/2008 16:17:22
Edited By Jutta Motrin (CELL) On: 05/21/2008 13:16:27



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