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Nate Stanford (nick711)
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Website/Blog: myspace.com/wichita_witch_doctor
About Myself: I'm a teenager who lives in Northern Chicago, and I love writing. Sometimes I'll write something every day, or sometimes I'll write once a month. It fluctuates. I write poems and little adventure stories, and I dabble in dramas :)

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DateTitleCategoryHits
May 11, 2008Friday NightMiscellaneous Stories 221
Jun 2, 2008Grey Tidings, Chapter 1Horror 146
May 19, 2008Help You Sleep at NightPoetry 189
Apr 3, 2008Here and Back AgainPoetry 245
Mar 12, 2008HeroesPoetry 290
May 12, 2008I am my CrucifixPoetry 182
Dec 21, 2008Last WordsPoetry 73
Apr 24, 2008MoonstruckPoetry 190
Mar 25, 2008My Love.Poetry 272
Mar 12, 2008Only HumanPoetry 475
Dec 15, 2008Reform-ConformPoetry 125
Nov 23, 2008Simple House, Chapter 1Mystery 81
Nov 25, 2008Simple House, Chapter 2Mystery 54
Jun 5, 2008SnowmanPoetry 177
May 5, 2008Split Seconds and Poison EmotionsMiscellaneous Stories 196
Mar 16, 2008The CriminalPoetry 220
Jul 11, 2008The Day We Became Men, Chapter 1Miscellaneous Stories 168
Jul 14, 2008The Day We Became Men, Chapter 2Miscellaneous Stories 133
Aug 21, 2008The Day We Became Men, Chapter 3Miscellaneous Stories 123
Aug 23, 2008The Day We Became Men, Chapter 4Miscellaneous Stories 137

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Total number of comments: 219

Title article: Vagabond
Date: 2008-12-24 09:53:31

Damn. 
 
What a poem, very descriptive and dramatic. Maybe all of our lives are adventures, and we're all just a different person trying to find a different thing. But who knows if we'll find what we're looking for. 
 
Whether I interpreted it right or wrong, it was done very well. 
 
Keep writing :)

Title article: TRUE LOVE
Date: 2008-12-24 09:46:46

I really don't understand why the artistic way to view love is as something very evil and malignant. Because its really a magical thing. 
 
Either way, the words here were very well placed, and it kept me going with rhythm.

Title article: An Unwelcome Encounter
Date: 2008-12-21 21:28:14

I don't think it was unspoken, necessarily. I mean, it was entertaining, and even though there wasn't much character development, I was able to feel sorry for the lonely reverend, and grasp the awkwardness of the situation, that it was totally unexpected. Either way, I really enjoyed this, finished or not.

Title article: Light of Day
Date: 2008-12-21 20:10:47

Morbid but beautiful. 
 
I really like your poetry.

Title article: no more
Date: 2008-12-20 10:40:52

Wow I really liked this :) 
 
You have an excellent gift for description.

Title article: Look at you
Date: 2008-12-19 18:38:22

Haha. I noticed that jipper made a spelling error when he was talking about your spelling errors. 
 
Honestly, I didn't let those bother me, I thought it was a lovely piece, and a very insightful one at that. 
 
Nice work, keep it up.

Title article: Smooth
Date: 2008-12-19 18:26:16

Wow I really liked this :) 
 
Great imagery you had in there, I could really imagine myself being there... 
 
Wait, is wonderment a word?

Title article: Commodity
Date: 2008-12-18 18:08:16

Haha wow I can't believe I'm just reading your great poems now. Are you new? Lol. 
 
But I really loved this one, and it is ridiculous how people misuse the word love for silly materialistic desires. Well done.

Title article: TERRORISM– FREEDOM FROM FEAR
Date: 2008-12-18 18:03:06

Yeah, I completely agree with resistancefreedom. 
 
Pure evil is something that truly exists and does exist in few people. People "identified" as terrorists just because they are Islamic are the oppressed people, the terrorists aren't oppressed or misunderstood, and the politicians aren't the people who are pushing the terrorists to do what they do.

Title article: Translation
Date: 2008-12-18 17:52:54

Wow. 
 
I feel like I've read something like this before...maybe it was just the first line that caught my eye there but this was really a fantastic poem. 
Love shouldn't be about what people look like, it should be about being beautiful on the inside. It seems like such a cheesy little saying but the way you portrayed it here, you made it seem like the most brilliant thing in the world. 
Bravo.

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Nunyo Bidness (cookingWine)

Created On: 05/11/2008 21:37:38

It is good that you comment people frequently. There should be more of that.
I have tried to find your stories, and I found one and read/feedbacked it. If you could give me a list of which are stories, that would be awesome.
I liked the tone.
Hope you keep commenting others and helping them out, it's a good thing.

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Chi-Townn
Created On: 03/13/2008 21:07:43

hey thurr,
your stories and poems are great.
keep writing!


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Created On: 03/12/2008 16:17:22
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