The Beast and the Wicked Witch

tale as old as time true as it can be She turn...

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Nate Stanford (nick711)
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Last Online 08/21/2008
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Website/Blog: myspace.com/wichita_witch_doctor
About Myself: My name is Nick, I live in Chicago Illinois. I love to write Adventure and Horror stories, but sometimes delve in to poetry, humor, and romance. Comment on my work and I will comment on yours. I would prefer if you were brutally honest with me.

Stories


Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
Apr 16, 2008A DreamerPoetry 127
Apr 16, 2008And EverPoetry 104
Mar 13, 2008ApologyPoetry 282
Apr 19, 2008Avery McCoy- Chapter 10- The Flashback (Part 2)Adventure 129
Mar 15, 2008Avery McCoy- Chapter 1: The HuntAdventure 195
Mar 15, 2008Avery McCoy- Chapter 2: The MessageAdventure 148
Mar 16, 2008Avery McCoy- Chapter 3- The Coffee ShopAdventure 150
Mar 17, 2008Avery McCoy- Chapter 4- The TemptressAdventure 144
Mar 18, 2008Avery McCoy- Chapter 5- The TrainAdventure 186
Mar 25, 2008Avery McCoy- Chapter 6- The BastardAdventure 127
Apr 1, 2008Avery McCoy- Chapter 7- The AcquaintanceAdventure 114
Apr 2, 2008Avery McCoy- Chapter 8- The Flashback (Part 1)Adventure 126
Apr 10, 2008Avery McCoy- Chapter 9- The StingAdventure 127
May 8, 2008Beneath the Oak TreePoetry 137
May 12, 2008Bleeding Out the PastPoetry 153
Apr 13, 2008BombPoetry 144
May 14, 2008Civil WarMiscellaneous Stories 152
Apr 22, 2008El SpectroPoetry 105
May 11, 2008Friday NightMiscellaneous Stories 155
Jun 2, 2008Grey Tidings, Chapter 1Horror 75
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Comments

Total number of comments: 158

Title article: HENPECKED HUSBAND
Date: 2008-08-21 09:23:17

I didn't particularly like it but I do applaud the rhyme scheme, it gave it a humorous demeanor.

Title article: the disquiet fall
Date: 2008-08-21 09:19:07

I loved the intricate style weaved into this piece. A little difficult to follow, but enjoyable anyway.

Title article: The Undertakers- Part 1- Murderers
Date: 2008-08-21 09:08:55

actually i wrote and finished the two parts to the story, this one is fifteen chapters and the last one is only seven. ill post it up when i get the chance.

Title article: bottled UP
Date: 2008-08-20 21:30:27

I don't know for sure if this came from insight or not but it truly seemed as though it did. I read this poem once or twice, loving the park where "the tears came cascading". The excellent format of the story only added to its power. 
 
Keep up the incredible work.

Title article: The Dragon
Date: 2008-08-20 21:26:33

A really sweet but disturbing story.  
 
Surely you can't mean that true love is never possible. But I understand that it can rarely be served in such a careless and perfect manner

Title article: in your eyes *short*
Date: 2008-08-20 21:20:26

I'm not quite sure what to interpret from this one. 
 
Maybe about someone who thinks her friends are falsely commenting on her? (is that it?) 
 
Regardless, it had some rhythm in it and flowed relatively well. Short, but sweet.

Title article: I want to wait for you, but should I
Date: 2008-08-20 21:17:50

Alot of characteristics of writing potential emanate from this poem. I especially liked the turn in the mood, later in the story when she gets new hope, and hopefully she can learn something, maybe learn to guard her heart a little better. A little bit of spelling errors distracted me, but no biggie. Very good for a first poem. 
 
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Title article: SECOND SEX.
Date: 2008-08-20 20:42:12

This is an angle I didn't expect from you, but I really liked it. Not very graphic, which I respect, but at the same time it was very passionate, the scene you painted made it seem like hushed affection, almost unrequited. Thats just my take on it. 
 
Keep it up.

Title article: I'm Losing my Mind
Date: 2008-07-15 15:02:36

I thought it was pretty good. It seemed at parts you were trying too hard to make the words rhyme and it sounded almost staccato.

Title article: Wiggedy Wack
Date: 2008-07-14 14:43:01

I thought it was terrific.

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Nunyo Bidness (cookingWine)

 Created On: 05/11/2008 19:37:38
It is good that you comment people frequently. There should be more of that.
I have tried to find your stories, and I found one and read/feedbacked it. If you could give me a list of which are stories, that would be awesome.
I liked the tone.
Hope you keep commenting others and helping them out, it's a good thing.
Hanna McCormack (extinct kiddo)

Chi-Townn
 Created On: 03/13/2008 19:07:43
hey thurr,
your stories and poems are great.
keep writing!
Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)

 Created On: 03/12/2008 14:17:22
Edited By Jutta Motrin (CELL) On: 05/21/2008 11:16:27

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