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The first thing Pamela noticed when she opened her...

(my old writing, I wonder if there are visible...

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Member Since	03/12/2008
Last Online	01/07/2009
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Website/Blog:	myspace.com/wichita_witch_doctor
About Myself:	I'm a teenager who lives in Northern Chicago, and I love writing. Sometimes I'll write something every day, or sometimes I'll write once a month. It fluctuates. I write poems and little adventure stories, and I dabble in dramas :)

Stories

Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Apr 3, 2008	Here and Back Again	Poetry	245
Apr 2, 2008	Avery McCoy- Chapter 8- The Flashback (Part 1)	Adventure	184
Apr 1, 2008	Avery McCoy- Chapter 7- The Acquaintance	Adventure	154
Mar 25, 2008	Avery McCoy- Chapter 6- The Bastard	Adventure	164
Mar 25, 2008	My Love.	Poetry	272
Mar 24, 2008	Tomorrow	Poetry	206
Mar 18, 2008	The Politician	Poetry	223
Mar 18, 2008	Avery McCoy- Chapter 5- The Train	Adventure	236
Mar 17, 2008	The Fool	Poetry	186
Mar 17, 2008	Avery McCoy- Chapter 4- The Temptress	Adventure	195
Mar 16, 2008	The Criminal	Poetry	220
Mar 16, 2008	Avery McCoy- Chapter 3- The Coffee Shop	Adventure	184
Mar 15, 2008	Avery McCoy- Chapter 2: The Message	Adventure	187
Mar 15, 2008	Avery McCoy- Chapter 1: The Hunt	Adventure	241
Mar 13, 2008	Apology	Poetry	326
Mar 12, 2008	Heroes	Poetry	290
Mar 12, 2008	Only Human	Poetry	475

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Comments

Total number of comments: 219

Title article: Vagabond
Date: 2008-12-24 09:53:31

Damn.

What a poem, very descriptive and dramatic. Maybe all of our lives are adventures, and we're all just a different person trying to find a different thing. But who knows if we'll find what we're looking for.

Whether I interpreted it right or wrong, it was done very well.

Keep writing :)

Title article: TRUE LOVE
Date: 2008-12-24 09:46:46

I really don't understand why the artistic way to view love is as something very evil and malignant. Because its really a magical thing.

Either way, the words here were very well placed, and it kept me going with rhythm.

Title article: An Unwelcome Encounter
Date: 2008-12-21 21:28:14

I don't think it was unspoken, necessarily. I mean, it was entertaining, and even though there wasn't much character development, I was able to feel sorry for the lonely reverend, and grasp the awkwardness of the situation, that it was totally unexpected. Either way, I really enjoyed this, finished or not.

Title article: Light of Day
Date: 2008-12-21 20:10:47

Morbid but beautiful.

I really like your poetry.

Title article: no more
Date: 2008-12-20 10:40:52

Wow I really liked this :)

You have an excellent gift for description.

Title article: Look at you
Date: 2008-12-19 18:38:22

Haha. I noticed that jipper made a spelling error when he was talking about your spelling errors.

Honestly, I didn't let those bother me, I thought it was a lovely piece, and a very insightful one at that.

Nice work, keep it up.

Title article: Smooth
Date: 2008-12-19 18:26:16

Wow I really liked this :)

Great imagery you had in there, I could really imagine myself being there...

Wait, is wonderment a word?

Title article: Commodity
Date: 2008-12-18 18:08:16

Haha wow I can't believe I'm just reading your great poems now. Are you new? Lol.

But I really loved this one, and it is ridiculous how people misuse the word love for silly materialistic desires. Well done.

Title article: TERRORISM– FREEDOM FROM FEAR
Date: 2008-12-18 18:03:06

Yeah, I completely agree with resistancefreedom.

Pure evil is something that truly exists and does exist in few people. People "identified" as terrorists just because they are Islamic are the oppressed people, the terrorists aren't oppressed or misunderstood, and the politicians aren't the people who are pushing the terrorists to do what they do.

Title article: Translation
Date: 2008-12-18 17:52:54

Wow.

I feel like I've read something like this before...maybe it was just the first line that caught my eye there but this was really a fantastic poem.
Love shouldn't be about what people look like, it should be about being beautiful on the inside. It seems like such a cheesy little saying but the way you portrayed it here, you made it seem like the most brilliant thing in the world.
Bravo.

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Paula (hey_hey_paula)

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Lori Branson (lorislittlesecret)

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Guestbook

Name	Entry
Nunyo Bidness (cookingWine)	Created On: 05/11/2008 21:37:38 It is good that you comment people frequently. There should be more of that. I have tried to find your stories, and I found one and read/feedbacked it. If you could give me a list of which are stories, that would be awesome. I liked the tone. Hope you keep commenting others and helping them out, it's a good thing.
Ha Tran (extinct kiddo) Chi-Townn	Created On: 03/13/2008 21:07:43 hey thurr, your stories and poems are great. keep writing!
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