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Amie Kerlin (lemon)
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About Myself: I write random things that come to me when I least expect them.
I'm not a dark person, but for whatever reason a lot of my writing is dark. Leave me comments so that I can improve-- If we don't get criticized, we can't grow. :)

Stories


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DateTitleCategoryHits
Oct 27, 2008The Wine Wins AgainPoetry 389
Oct 22, 2008Affair's EndPoetry 314
Oct 12, 2008When I Think of YouMiscellaneous Stories 646
Sep 15, 2008The WaitressMiscellaneous Stories 1339
Aug 29, 2008A Lover's GardenPoetry 238
Aug 25, 2008Lemon: a HaikuPoetry 510
Aug 12, 2008The Story of a Survivor, Chapter 3Miscellaneous Stories 231
Aug 10, 2008The Story of a Survivor, Chapter 2Miscellaneous Stories 277
Aug 6, 2008The Story of a Survivor, Chapter 1Miscellaneous Stories 470
Aug 3, 2008Walking Along the ShorePoetry 334
Jul 30, 2008Stranded at SeaMiscellaneous Stories 347
Jul 26, 2008The Mexican Lasagna IncidentHumor 345
Jul 21, 2008All Liquid DietMiscellaneous Stories 368
Jul 20, 2008The PastPoetry 218
Jul 20, 2008Once AgainPoetry 222
Jul 16, 2008On The MendPoetry 215
Jul 13, 2008This Internal PoisonPoetry 297
Jul 13, 2008The OnePoetry 296
Jul 12, 2008A Bad DayPoetry 263
Jul 11, 2008The Reluctant LoverMiscellaneous Stories 506
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Books

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Lemon Juice and PoetryAug 2, 2008

Comments

Title article: Songs From A Fender Bender
Date: 2008-10-12 11:43:16

I really liked these. I have to admit i've already taken the 'magical journey' to the site and listened to some of your stuff. not bad sir tarhead, not bad at all. =]

Title article: Advancing world
Date: 2008-10-12 11:33:04

This made me smile. At first I didnt know where you were going, but by the second stanza I caught on and thought it was great. The flow was off to me in a few places, but not bad enough to make it bad, actually i dont even know why i mentioned it lol. 
 
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Title article: I think I love you robot, Chapter 2
Date: 2008-10-12 11:28:47

oh wow, you WERE running a parallel. this was really sad. I liked it a lot though, you did a great job describing the anguish the woman felt. i also thought you did well with the way you DID give the robot an emotion.. regret. So really he was feeling emotion, he was just unable to express it. going into my favorites.

Title article: I think i love you Robot, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-10-12 11:23:56

This was actually pretty interesting. I dont know if you were puposely drawing a parallel between the robots lack of emotion and some girlfriends/boyfriends lack of emotion in relationships. if that even made sense lol. Anyway, I liked it and i'm off to part 2 =]

Title article: Palin Fever
Date: 2008-10-11 17:25:45

You are so damn random Jason. but hey, its alright. it keeps us on our toes. now i have to add cartoon characters to my list of things to keep away from you. haha. Great conversation piece.

Title article: At My Funeral
Date: 2008-10-11 17:20:34

Interesting lol. I would chose to be dressed as a clown for my 'grave clothes' so that people will freak out and have nightmares after the open casket viewing.  
 
ah too bad i wouldnt be able to see it. 0.o

Title article: Dank Pasta
Date: 2008-10-11 17:14:51

I thought this was actually pretty funny. I dont know how many times I've added an ingredient into an almost finished recipe only to realize the package was a)expired b)from a questionable brand or c)something thats been in my fridge too long, but i'm convincing myself it should be fine. BUT rather than still eating it, I THROW IT AWAY lol. believe me, once you've been in the hospital for seven days from severe dehydration and food poisoning... you dont risk things involving your stomach lol

Title article: Love In Vein
Date: 2008-09-27 21:48:08

This was very good. i dont think i've read any of your stuff before, but this was very well written and you did great with the dialog.  
 
i like how the guy didnt REALLY want to turn even though he loves her.  
nice touch with the poem at the end. i really liked it. =]

Title article: Blue Sky
Date: 2008-09-27 21:36:19

The imagery in this poem was really very good. i could 'see' this poem very clearly in my minds eye.  
 
very, very nice job! Keep these coming. 
 
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Title article: The Mechanical Beast
Date: 2008-09-27 21:33:01

Good job.. I liked the way you related mechanics (cold, without feeling) to a person. I thought this was done very well and with no wasted words.  
 
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Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 12/18/2008 12:45:36
We're supposed to get snow and freezing rain tonight. Hooray!

I totally had the chance to pick up a Wii on black friday but I just had to go with the 360. It's just too tasty! Though Nintendo did tempt me.......

Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 12/16/2008 19:45:33
Hey we've got snow over here so don't expect any sympathy from me. Damn fruit.

So what kind of systems you got in your house Kerlin?
Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 12/16/2008 14:21:17
Oh yeah? I suck balls at it. I rock on easy mode but that fourth button kills my flow. Stupid plastic guitar with its pretty buttons and daunting size.

Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 11/03/2008 08:19:58
Ha! Sounds like YOU were having a good time. I had to wait 20 minutes in the drive thru (while nervously looking at my hotel) but the food was fresh and I didn't miss any calls. I was going to mail some of it out to California but then I remembered that you owe me mail. Mail me some old rotting food and I will return the favor.

Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 11/01/2008 23:44:12
Ramen should be packaged everywhere and givin with everything. Because its just that good.

I just ate some greasy McDonalds. It wasn't as gross as usual.

Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 11/01/2008 21:52:20
Agreed. Some things just shouldn't be packaged and sold. Like ranch.

Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 10/30/2008 18:04:28
You ever try the Camo 40's? Fucking nasty! I was poor one night and promised myself I would never be that poor again.

Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 10/30/2008 13:56:41
Hey I was handling that parked car like a pro.

Dan and I tried making a crude version of a white russian. We used vodka, chocolate, coffee flavor, and milk. We called it the Red Moose. Definitely a one or two drink deal. Afterwards you're too bloated to even get drunk. Not exactly the best drink. But a good one off starter!
Max Booth III (Chainsaw Enema)

 Created On: 10/29/2008 14:09:16
No it is not a bad thing. Entertaining the folks around here is what we strive for, and it looks like we've done our part.

No but really, I catch you on my lawn again, I'm calling the cops. Goddamn hoodlums...

What are you stuck on with the story? Dude/lady gets stockholm, dressses up as a lemon, and robs some shit. Simple.

Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 10/28/2008 16:16:08
Oh I'm a fancy drinker. Love that box stuff. You know you do too lemon! And I'm not talking about wine.

Actually I am.
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