Layers of Innocence

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Echoes of the previous Life.

(my old writing, I wonder if there are visible...
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Amie Kerlin (lemon)
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About Myself: I write random things that come to me when I least expect them.
I'm not a dark person, but for whatever reason a lot of my writing is dark. Leave me comments so that I can improve-- If we don't get criticized, we can't grow. :)

Stories


Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
Sep 15, 2008The WaitressMiscellaneous Stories 1339
Mar 7, 2008Diary of a Fat GirlHumor 1028
Oct 12, 2008When I Think of YouMiscellaneous Stories 646
Mar 7, 2008Broken GlassMiscellaneous Stories 626
Aug 25, 2008Lemon: a HaikuPoetry 510
Jul 11, 2008The Reluctant LoverMiscellaneous Stories 506
Aug 6, 2008The Story of a Survivor, Chapter 1Miscellaneous Stories 470
May 23, 2008The Three WomenMiscellaneous Stories 464
Mar 10, 2008Confessions in the produce aisleMiscellaneous Stories 432
May 21, 2008Blood on the TileHorror 429
Oct 27, 2008The Wine Wins AgainPoetry 389
Jul 3, 2008The ArticleMiscellaneous Stories 372
Jun 29, 2008Don't put me in the same boxPoetry 369
Jul 21, 2008All Liquid DietMiscellaneous Stories 368
Mar 10, 2008A Mothers Rant about life part 1Humor 352
Jun 28, 2008Unwanted PraisePoetry 349
Jul 30, 2008Stranded at SeaMiscellaneous Stories 347
Jul 26, 2008The Mexican Lasagna IncidentHumor 345
Aug 3, 2008Walking Along the ShorePoetry 334
Oct 22, 2008Affair's EndPoetry 314
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Books

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Lemon Juice and PoetryAug 2, 2008

Comments

Total number of comments: 990

Title article: How Many Ways
Date: 2008-12-29 10:17:23

this was kind of intense eh? i think theres a lot of emotion in this poem.. even some desperation exposed.  
Great job.. this one almost makes me want to cry. :*(

Title article: Untitled Haikus
Date: 2008-12-29 10:15:10

interesting. haikus remain a mystery to me. i tried one once and it was a total wash lol-- i think mine made people physically ill it was so bad :P 
 
 
anyway these had a lot of emotion... i'd like to see a couple of these expanded into longer poems so that it draws on the emotion some more.  
 
nice job :)

Title article: The Christmas Gift
Date: 2008-12-13 13:18:53

this was a nice story. it had a lot of warmth to it with the descriptions of the family closeness. i hope you win the million (hehe!)

Title article: Snapshot, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-12-13 13:14:59

This is a really great story. there is a lot of different things going on at once, but they all fit.  
 
leave it to me to find a few spelling/ grammar errors. 
 
beanie weanies... weenies please lol.  
 
and pornos.. no apostrophe. you're just showing that its plural.  
 
these obviously were just little things and they certainly dont detract from the story itself.  
 
Can't wait to read the next chapter!

Title article: Heartaches On Paper
Date: 2008-11-17 22:12:20

Thanks for summing up my entire last month for me. good insight to a depressive state.

Title article: Santa's Little Helper, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-11-17 19:23:41

It's cute! I think this would be great for a five year old. I know my kids loved the personal stories that had their name in it. kudos to you for investing time into your childs life like that. not many daddies do. =]

Title article: THIS ADULT MAY CONTAIN STORY CONTENT
Date: 2008-11-17 19:19:35

made me laugh. nice bit of silliness :)

Title article: REDEMPTION
Date: 2008-11-17 19:16:52

this was great. i like the way you pour out your soul in this poem. Veterans day holds a special place in my heart since many in my family have served in different branches of the US armed forces. Thank you for writing this.

Title article: Eternal Dilemma
Date: 2008-11-17 19:13:37

Wonderful. this was written very well. great imagery, good flow, and perfect rhyming without seeming forced. its going into my favorites for all of those reasons. =]

Title article: A Healed Heart
Date: 2008-11-17 19:10:52

i liked this. it has a nice flow and the imagery was good. reminds me of wedding vows for some reason.. i dont know lol. Great job though good expression and imagery. keep it coming =]

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Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 12/18/2008 12:45:36
We're supposed to get snow and freezing rain tonight. Hooray!

I totally had the chance to pick up a Wii on black friday but I just had to go with the 360. It's just too tasty! Though Nintendo did tempt me.......

Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 12/16/2008 19:45:33
Hey we've got snow over here so don't expect any sympathy from me. Damn fruit.

So what kind of systems you got in your house Kerlin?
Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 12/16/2008 14:21:17
Oh yeah? I suck balls at it. I rock on easy mode but that fourth button kills my flow. Stupid plastic guitar with its pretty buttons and daunting size.

Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 11/03/2008 08:19:58
Ha! Sounds like YOU were having a good time. I had to wait 20 minutes in the drive thru (while nervously looking at my hotel) but the food was fresh and I didn't miss any calls. I was going to mail some of it out to California but then I remembered that you owe me mail. Mail me some old rotting food and I will return the favor.

Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 11/01/2008 23:44:12
Ramen should be packaged everywhere and givin with everything. Because its just that good.

I just ate some greasy McDonalds. It wasn't as gross as usual.

Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 11/01/2008 21:52:20
Agreed. Some things just shouldn't be packaged and sold. Like ranch.

Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 10/30/2008 18:04:28
You ever try the Camo 40's? Fucking nasty! I was poor one night and promised myself I would never be that poor again.

Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 10/30/2008 13:56:41
Hey I was handling that parked car like a pro.

Dan and I tried making a crude version of a white russian. We used vodka, chocolate, coffee flavor, and milk. We called it the Red Moose. Definitely a one or two drink deal. Afterwards you're too bloated to even get drunk. Not exactly the best drink. But a good one off starter!
Max Booth III (Chainsaw Enema)

 Created On: 10/29/2008 14:09:16
No it is not a bad thing. Entertaining the folks around here is what we strive for, and it looks like we've done our part.

No but really, I catch you on my lawn again, I'm calling the cops. Goddamn hoodlums...

What are you stuck on with the story? Dude/lady gets stockholm, dressses up as a lemon, and robs some shit. Simple.

Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 10/28/2008 16:16:08
Oh I'm a fancy drinker. Love that box stuff. You know you do too lemon! And I'm not talking about wine.

Actually I am.
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