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About Myself: Life for me has been very hard lately. My father has had health problems for a couple of years now. 2 years ago he was diagnosed with Diabetes, but still had other ailments. A couple of months ago he was diagnosed with Lupis AND fibromyalgia. His doctor believes all three were caused by his 3 tours of Vietnam and his exposure to Agent Orange. Grandma came to visit in early september, but caught pneumonia which in turn caused her Rheumatoid Arthritis knee to turn septic. She had to have surgery to remove as much infection from her knee as they could. She has had a hospital bed in my living room since Sept 13. After 2 month of rehab, at least she stopped using the bedside commode. I have 2 60+ ill people i have to take care of, cleaning, cooking, shopping while trying to maintain an 8 acre farm while living on next to nothing since no one can work. So if i am not too sympathetic with some of the more depressed people, forgive me.

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Oct 4, 2008Simplest of InstructionsPoetry 136
Oct 1, 2008LookingPoetry 152
Oct 1, 2008Autumn Comes AgainPoetry 170
Sep 26, 2008Two FlowersRomance 351
Sep 23, 2008Two poems about todayPoetry 132
Sep 21, 2008Before the ShowMiscellaneous Stories 111
Sep 4, 2008Gabriel VisitsScience Fiction 398
Sep 3, 2008Hearts Cry OutPoetry 140
Aug 28, 2008Nothing ComparedPoetry 149
Aug 27, 20082 Poems of HerPoetry 148
Aug 25, 2008LighthouseRomance 232
Aug 18, 2008Going UpHumor 196
Jul 16, 2008The WolfScience Fiction 289
Jul 10, 2008A ViewPoetry 196
Jul 8, 2008ShepherdScience Fiction 171
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Title article: The enraged mind
Date: 2008-06-11 21:36:12

death violence murder guns blah blah. sorry, i watch local news so this isn't my cup of tea. Nice lines, descriptive.

Title article: Coffee Stains, Chapter 2
Date: 2008-06-11 21:29:10

I see great lines next to choppy lines. stories not bad when it gets to it. Punctuation? well i don't keep my english book right next to me, but then maybe i should.

Title article: Coffee Stains, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-06-11 21:22:02

reads like your trying to cram as much about Dylan as you can in as little time as possible. Are you practicing for condensing books for Readers digest?  
 
 
 
Love to laugh, it makes you younger wiser and funner to be around, yes funner

Title article: One In The Same
Date: 2008-06-10 01:41:30

More people have died in the name of God than souls saved. Just like more people are made poor by money than made comfortable. It all boils down to people using people for selfish reasons.

Title article: Diary of a Fat Girl
Date: 2008-06-09 20:08:52

Great story. Loved how you kept both sides of the story together with the diary.

Title article: The Execution
Date: 2008-06-09 19:06:23

Just an idea i got for a large story and this is an intro i was pondering so any response and critic is wanted and welcome. 
Thanks

Title article: "FLOWER"S"
Date: 2008-06-08 13:57:35

Short emotional piece, gripping. 
sometimes short and simple is the best.

Title article: THE FALL OF ABRIA, Chapter 5
Date: 2008-06-08 12:54:00

Please don't use caps all through, hard to find sentence endings. Be a little more descriptive of non humans and work on the flow of the talking and story in general. To me was a little visually choppy.

Title article: Make Profits not Ethics
Date: 2008-06-08 12:47:22

I completely agree that ethics can't exist in a pure capitalism market, but is that what we truly want? More Enrons? Corporate greed is causing all of humanity to hurt. Why must health insurers make SO much on the ill? Why must Big Oil (U.S. OPEC, Other oil producers) Make Billions while the whole planet suffers? 
A few thousand in comfort while billions suffer? Life is unfair only because we let it.

Title article: What Would You Know
Date: 2008-06-07 16:04:53

I bet Sara's fun at a party, like the life or the center or somthing crazy like from inside the out. I bet Sara can see all the colors in a white wall.

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Max Booth III (Chainsaw Enema)

Created On: 07/08/2008 12:11:03

what about them?

Max Booth III (Chainsaw Enema)

Created On: 07/07/2008 19:14:54
Edited By Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) On: 07/07/2008 19:21:17


She blew my mind, made me become the bad guy, she mad me silly, then i went crazy?

Max Booth III (Chainsaw Enema)

Created On: 07/06/2008 20:09:22

the dictionary? jeeze, why couldnt you get a useful book, like Reading the Dictionary For Dummies?

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