The Adventures Of Pugswallow, Chapter 1

Pugswallow sat in a mud puddle popping bubbles and...

Elijah

The distant door closed shut behind him with a click....

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About Myself: Alright, what can i say about me?
I have every book i have ever read, even my child hood books, which i used to stay up all night reading with a flashlight under the covers. I made choices that lead me to Parting for the 4th of July on Route 101(on the beach) in Oregon, to debauchery standing at the end of Route 1 in Key west for Fantasy Fest. Also my 25 B-day, what a way to celebrate turning a 1/4 of a century. I'm 30 now living in the Midwest(guess where)taking care of my Grandfathers farm,(every building he built with his hands) I've been a waiter, bartender, construction worker, and lately a poker player, all while keeping books and pages of thoughts, ideas, concepts, snippets of conversations, and I'm starting to combine them into stories for all to enjoy.

Stories


Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
Oct 14, 2008What I Will, Want, and WishMiscellaneous Stories 101
Oct 4, 2008Bar LovePoetry 108
Oct 4, 2008Simplest of InstructionsPoetry 108
Oct 1, 2008LookingPoetry 124
Oct 1, 2008Autumn Comes AgainPoetry 151
Sep 26, 2008Two FlowersRomance 300
Sep 23, 2008Two poems about todayPoetry 105
Sep 21, 2008Before the ShowMiscellaneous Stories 93
Sep 4, 2008Gabriel VisitsScience Fiction 373
Sep 3, 2008Hearts Cry OutPoetry 120
Aug 28, 2008Nothing ComparedPoetry 131
Aug 27, 20082 Poems of HerPoetry 129
Aug 25, 2008LighthouseRomance 215
Aug 18, 2008Going UpHumor 174
Jul 16, 2008The WolfScience Fiction 247
Jul 10, 2008A ViewPoetry 175
Jul 8, 2008ShepherdScience Fiction 147
Jul 6, 2008VicesPoetry 155
Jul 4, 2008Birth of the White BuffaloRomance 433
Jul 1, 2008A Strange Dirty DoughnutHumor 258
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Title article: Coffee Stains, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-06-11 21:22:02

reads like your trying to cram as much about Dylan as you can in as little time as possible. Are you practicing for condensing books for Readers digest?  
 
 
 
Love to laugh, it makes you younger wiser and funner to be around, yes funner

Title article: One In The Same
Date: 2008-06-10 01:41:30

More people have died in the name of God than souls saved. Just like more people are made poor by money than made comfortable. It all boils down to people using people for selfish reasons.

Title article: Diary of a Fat Girl
Date: 2008-06-09 20:08:52

Great story. Loved how you kept both sides of the story together with the diary.

Title article: The Execution
Date: 2008-06-09 19:06:23

Just an idea i got for a large story and this is an intro i was pondering so any response and critic is wanted and welcome. 
Thanks

Title article: "FLOWER"S"
Date: 2008-06-08 13:57:35

Short emotional piece, gripping. 
sometimes short and simple is the best.

Title article: THE FALL OF ABRIA, Chapter 5
Date: 2008-06-08 12:54:00

Please don't use caps all through, hard to find sentence endings. Be a little more descriptive of non humans and work on the flow of the talking and story in general. To me was a little visually choppy.

Title article: Make Profits not Ethics
Date: 2008-06-08 12:47:22

I completely agree that ethics can't exist in a pure capitalism market, but is that what we truly want? More Enrons? Corporate greed is causing all of humanity to hurt. Why must health insurers make SO much on the ill? Why must Big Oil (U.S. OPEC, Other oil producers) Make Billions while the whole planet suffers? 
A few thousand in comfort while billions suffer? Life is unfair only because we let it.

Title article: What Would You Know
Date: 2008-06-07 16:04:53

I bet Sara's fun at a party, like the life or the center or somthing crazy like from inside the out. I bet Sara can see all the colors in a white wall.

Title article: Faulty Steps
Date: 2008-06-07 16:00:35

"Laughing" The only thing we really know about -death- is that we all have to face it (him/her-whatever) 
everything else is to comfort the living 
 
Thanks for the comments

Title article: Quickened
Date: 2008-06-06 17:52:38

Elegant. Gliding words, good use of syllables

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Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)

Created On: 07/08/2008 10:11:03

what about them?

Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)

Created On: 07/07/2008 17:14:54
Edited By Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) On: 07/07/2008 17:21:17


She blew my mind, made me become the bad guy, she mad me silly, then i went crazy?

Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)

Created On: 07/06/2008 18:09:22

the dictionary? jeeze, why couldnt you get a useful book, like Reading the Dictionary For Dummies?

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