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About Myself:

Life for me has been very hard lately. My father has had health problems for a couple of years now. 2 years ago he was diagnosed with Diabetes, but still had other ailments. A couple of months ago he was diagnosed with Lupis AND fibromyalgia. His doctor believes all three were caused by his 3 tours of Vietnam and his exposure to Agent Orange. Grandma came to visit in early september, but caught pneumonia which in turn caused her Rheumatoid Arthritis knee to turn septic. She had to have surgery to remove as much infection from her knee as they could. She has had a hospital bed in my living room since Sept 13. After 2 month of rehab, at least she stopped using the bedside commode. I have 2 60+ ill people i have to take care of, cleaning, cooking, shopping while trying to maintain an 8 acre farm while living on next to nothing since no one can work. So if i am not too sympathetic with some of the more depressed people, forgive me.

Stories

Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Jan 6, 2009	The Island of Rambam	Adventure	54
Dec 31, 2008	Another Room Upstairs	Adventure	79
Dec 24, 2008	Upstairs Looking for Truth	Adventure	299
Oct 14, 2008	What I Will, Want, and Wish	Miscellaneous Stories	121
Oct 4, 2008	Bar Love	Poetry	139
Oct 4, 2008	Simplest of Instructions	Poetry	136
Oct 1, 2008	Looking	Poetry	152
Oct 1, 2008	Autumn Comes Again	Poetry	170
Sep 26, 2008	Two Flowers	Romance	351
Sep 23, 2008	Two poems about today	Poetry	132
Sep 21, 2008	Before the Show	Miscellaneous Stories	111
Sep 4, 2008	Gabriel Visits	Science Fiction	398
Sep 3, 2008	Hearts Cry Out	Poetry	140
Aug 28, 2008	Nothing Compared	Poetry	149
Aug 27, 2008	2 Poems of Her	Poetry	148
Aug 25, 2008	Lighthouse	Romance	232
Aug 18, 2008	Going Up	Humor	196
Jul 16, 2008	The Wolf	Science Fiction	289
Jul 10, 2008	A View	Poetry	196
Jul 8, 2008	Shepherd	Science Fiction	171

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Comments

Total number of comments: 260

Title article: Into Theirs-new edited version
Date: 2009-01-06 19:27:43

a little repetitive but still conveys good imagery. The third from last line is a little foggy to me but i still get your meaning from the rest of the poem, which is very clear to me.

Title article: JULIA'S UNCERTAINTY.
Date: 2009-01-06 19:22:34

can't help but think he left one prison only to wake up in another.

Title article: JULIA'S UNCERTAINTY.
Date: 2009-01-06 19:21:37

"Daring dreams no mortal dared dream before." Going to be a lonely life for ?

Title article: Delete 'n Recycle
Date: 2009-01-06 19:13:25

Poetry is about knowing the subject you wish to explain, or expand upon. Wonderfully done.

Title article: A Free Man
Date: 2009-01-06 19:07:25

One of the best shorts i have had the pleasure of reading. Thank you for sharing.

Title article: Devil Wind (song)
Date: 2009-01-06 18:50:24

Excellent. I don't know if too many have posted a song. Short and great stuff.

Title article: Wishful Thinking, Chapter 6
Date: 2009-01-06 17:50:06

"Marks whirled around" gives me a mental image of him twirling.
"Marks turned from Groves" gives me the mental image of what i think you want.
To me it makes him flamboyant, which i do not think you want him to be. Otherwise great little page turner here.

Title article: Lost For Words
Date: 2009-01-03 11:58:48

I'm cursed, or blessed i guess, to have eyes that can spy both sides. Alfred is right, this poem is vague and only has a pretense of direction.
However,
I am a huge E.E. Cummings fan, so i can see the vagueness as purposeful, with the intent of making the reader understand the mechanics of freezing up trying to talk to a woman, and using so very few words to convey the feeling.

Both are write and wrong and in the end, it's all just a matter of opinion.

Title article: Why the Water Shimmers
Date: 2009-01-03 11:54:09

Confused me a little at first because of her emotional state. First she wanted to escape-which to me means unhappy- then 2 short, 1 long sentence later shes is radiant. Seems a little too fast for me, but it is only my opinion. Everything else is great, wonderful imagery in those first 3 paragraphs, and the usage of the phantom.

Title article: They Came From The Sky
Date: 2009-01-03 11:46:29

I liked the poem, but not the ending. Maybe i was expecting an alien assault or a meteor shower and that clouded it for me. This is blank verse huh? i like it. Good word use, very visual.

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Name	Entry
Max Booth III (Chainsaw Enema)	Created On: 07/08/2008 12:11:03 what about them?
Max Booth III (Chainsaw Enema)	Created On: 07/07/2008 19:14:54 Edited By Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) On: 07/07/2008 19:21:17 She blew my mind, made me become the bad guy, she mad me silly, then i went crazy?
Max Booth III (Chainsaw Enema)	Created On: 07/06/2008 20:09:22 the dictionary? jeeze, why couldnt you get a useful book, like Reading the Dictionary For Dummies?