Dominate the House

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Invasion©- chapter 1

The morning sun had begun its rise in the far...
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About Myself: I write short stories of the strange and twisted. Sometimes horror, sometimes sci-fi or whatever strikes my imigination. Used to write quite a bit when I was younger, then life sort of pushed it in the closet and now I am writing once again.

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Total number of comments: 40

Title article: Like Him
Date: 2008-06-10 14:08:11
Like Him
Fairly well written. Toward the end I felt you changed characters. Didn't know who was wanting what. From what I can understand the basis of this poem is revenge, I can't have him so you who are like him I will dump and possibly get some satisfation. Try working on the wording at the end to make it more clear. 
Keep on writing!

Title article: Parapraxis
Date: 2008-06-10 14:01:26
Parapraxis
Hmmmm. This may be just my opinion but the character seems to be out of sync. She is so against Rob's musings about human nature and then turns into a fanatical killing machine. I loved the ending, but maybe if there was a little more provocation on Rob's part, so that the main character is really defending herself, it would be more believable. There were a few grammatical errors that a good edit could fix. All in all a great hook that kept me reading. But I was disappointed in the way the main character responded in the end. 
Keep on writing!

Title article: 50 yrs and still waiting (ch.1)
Date: 2008-05-18 15:11:08
50 Years and still waiting
I feel that you have a story here and you have a good imigination for characters. But the style of writing is very confusing. When you bring hunter in I'm don't know if it's the story of the old lady or just another character. Need some sort of flow or explanation here between Layla and her friend talking about the old lady and when Hunter somes in. Also the dialogue is hard to follow, it needs to be separated by paragraphs when each character speaks. I didn't know who was saying what half the time. Forgive me for being so harsh, but sometimes an author feels as though the reader can read between the lines and think as the author does. Sadly, in most cases, this is not so. Your descriptive abilities are very good. I got a real feel for the stinky bus and the old lady with the cat. 
Keep on writing! 
 
Sincerely, 
IGW

Title article: Adam's Apple
Date: 2008-05-18 14:51:06
Adam's Apple
HaHa! I like how you left the faces off the artwork. Good artwork. Funny prose "no longer a Gates". But leaves a lot to be desired. Prose was choppy. I liked it though, brought a chuckle to my mouth. 
 
Good job. 
IGW

Title article: Cabin
Date: 2008-05-16 14:22:28
cabin
very well written. Got my curiosity up throughout the whole story and a big letdown at the end. Will this story be continued? I hope so, I want to know what Jake's running from.

Title article: I Can See Clearly
Date: 2008-05-11 07:55:45
I Can See Clearly
Good thoughts on the interaction of people. We truly never know the other person, do we? People tend to hold at least one aspect of their pysche from others. Nicely written. 
 
Good job. 
Sincerely, 
IGW

Title article: Super Short Scenes, Chapter 5
Date: 2008-04-14 09:55:31
twisted fairy tales
Funny! I especially like the Sno White one. #389...Hilarious! 
Good job! Keep on writing! 
 
Sincerely, 
futurewriter

Title article: The Padded Room
Date: 2008-04-13 13:21:55
The Padded Room
Very well-written pyschological tale of twisted fate. Loved it! Madness in its finest hour. Loved the setting and atmosphere. Well done. Excellent dialogue. Keep up the good work! 
 
futurewriter

Title article: The Church- Part 7- The Beginning of the End
Date: 2008-04-05 19:40:12
The Church-Part 7
Great! Got it really steamrolling along now. A few gramatical erros, but who cares, I really like that you have an emotional continuance between 'normal' people and the Zombies are really secondary. 
 
Keep on Writing! 
Sincerely, 
futurewriter

Title article: The Church- Part 6- Let the Battle commence
Date: 2008-04-03 12:17:53

Ha! Good old Wayne. Hopefully he will gnaw on the Reverend.........just a thought. Loved it. Once again, very good suspenseful chapter. Spelling error: knifes.....don't know if you meant knives of singular knife. No problem, It didn't detract from the story at all. 
 
Keep on Writing!! 
Sincerely, 
IGW

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