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Joseph Galea (darknstormy)
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DateTitleCategoryHits
Oct 9, 2008Mystery AvengerMiscellaneous Stories 76
Mar 25, 2008Santa SmithMiscellaneous Stories 151
Feb 18, 2008Sin of OmissionMiscellaneous Stories 217
Feb 8, 2008Chance EncounterRomance 329
Feb 8, 2008The Crows of Kille ManjaroMystery 310
Feb 7, 2008PigeonsMiscellaneous Stories 257
Feb 5, 2008Presents from the PastMiscellaneous Stories 189
Feb 3, 2008BirthdayMiscellaneous Stories 274
Jan 22, 2008Christmas HealingRomance 257
Jan 13, 2008ChinookMiscellaneous Stories 302
Dec 1, 2007Oleander EveningsRomance 498
Dec 1, 2007The Rebirth of Monty PrikleworthHumor 411

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Title article: Chinook
Date: 2008-03-17 05:54:52
Thanks
Tarhead, Bomber - thanks for the positive comments.

Title article: Sin of Omission
Date: 2008-02-26 07:36:21
Thanks
Thanks for the comments. I like endings which leave the reader thinking. In reality, nobody killed anyone. Just that somebody did nothing - hence the title of the story.

Title article: THE SHOWDOWN
Date: 2008-02-11 04:07:39
Nice
Although I knew half way through who the other gunman was, I still enjoyed it. Well written. Nice last sentence.

Title article: Memoirs of a Broken Heart
Date: 2008-02-09 06:35:47

Nice twist in the end. Good and funny.

Title article: Chance Encounter
Date: 2008-02-09 05:37:21
Thanks
Thanks for your comment. Very helpful.

Title article: Chance Encounter
Date: 2008-02-09 05:35:11
Thanks
Thanks for your comment. I liked that ending too but I've been told my endings are often morbid - but I like a nice twist.

Title article: Chance Encounter
Date: 2008-02-08 09:34:07
Comments appreciated
I could not decide on an ending for this. Your comments on which you prefer will be appreciated. 
Thanks.

Title article: Pigeons
Date: 2008-02-08 06:47:33
Thanks
Many thanks for the feedback guys. Always appreciated. 
Cheers.

Title article: Help me.
Date: 2008-02-07 06:06:24
Two cents worth!
One should be constructive in giving criticism - not rude. Constructive criticism is important if one is to improve one's writing skills. I also see no harm in being a 'grammar policeman' - or a 'spelling policeman' for that matter. There is nothing worse than sloppy grammar and poor spelling to spoil (at least for me) what could be a good story. 
Having said that, I'm glad that most agree that the original posting does not really qualify as a 'short story.'

Title article: Metamorphosis
Date: 2008-02-06 06:02:19

Short and sweet.

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