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john mccuaig (celtic1888)
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About Myself: Born 1968, engineering Manager, love Horror stories esp. zombie and "end of the world". Born in Glasgow but now live in London, kids have gone so just my good lady and I. We also just got two puppy dalmations- now they are real horrors! The Church is the first thing I have written since school.

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Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
Sep 20, 2008The Church- Part 12- Sylvies Flat, Chapter 12Horror 66
Sep 14, 2008The Church Part 11- A little trip, Chapter 11Horror 89
Sep 13, 2008Behind Blue Eyes- Chapter Two, Chapter 2Mystery 84
Aug 10, 2008The Church Part 10- The Sickness, Chapter 10Horror 148
Jul 29, 2008E.M.P, Chapter 1Science Fiction 138
Jul 14, 2008Behind Blue Eyes, Chapter 1Mystery 205
Jul 14, 2008The Church Part 9- Working Together, Chapter 9Horror 148
May 2, 2008The Church- Part 8- We must try for peaceHorror 207
Apr 8, 2008The Master Plan- Part 1Science Fiction 191
Apr 5, 2008The Church- Part 7- The Beginning of the EndHorror 212
Mar 30, 2008The Church- Part 6- Let the Battle commenceHorror 236
Mar 27, 2008The Life of a FlowerMiscellaneous Stories 230
Mar 24, 2008If I could turn back timeMiscellaneous Stories 330
Mar 20, 2008The Church- Part 5- Meeting of MindsHorror 252
Mar 19, 2008The Last MinuteMiscellaneous Stories 419
Mar 18, 2008Hastings HospitalMystery 321
Mar 12, 2008The Church- Part 4- The ReturnHorror 292
Feb 23, 2008The Church- Part 3- The Search BeginsHorror 291
Feb 16, 2008The Church- Part 2- The Order of thingsHorror 302
Feb 15, 2008JulieHorror 391
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Title article: finishing the job
Date: 2008-03-30 06:47:11
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Good quick story but needed some more info about the killer, why did he kill her parents and why did he wait 15years to kill her?

Title article: darkness
Date: 2008-03-30 06:12:54
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Quite hard to read due to the missing spaces but seems a decent enough start. Dont understand "writers bloke-help?", are you asking for some help with the rest of the story?

Title article: The Life of a Flower
Date: 2008-03-28 12:32:30
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thanks a lot, wasnt sure if It would be appreciated, John

Title article: White Clay Creek
Date: 2008-03-28 04:44:44
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Good story but it seemed to fall away slightly at the end. It felt a bit muddled but still fun to read and even although i know nothing of your civil war that was explained quite well. Well done.

Title article: The King's Shilling
Date: 2008-03-27 06:26:21
Well done
Good story, easy read. Quite long but it kept me interested. Liked the ending.

Title article: The Life of a Flower
Date: 2008-03-27 05:57:58
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I tried to make the 4 seasons like the 4 stages of life- child, young adult, middle aged and old age. I dont think it has worked at all but didnt now how to change it so decided just to post it to get some comments. Depending on the comments i may pull it and try again.

Title article: Speed Bump
Date: 2008-03-27 04:10:10
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Nice easy read

Title article: Better run through the jungle
Date: 2008-03-27 04:00:43
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Good story. I liked the bit about his child comforting him from his nightmares. Maybe could have done with a bit more about what happened to him instead of all just about his reactions/feelings which i felt was slightly long but thats just my view. 
Well done.

Title article: CYCLONE CHARLIE
Date: 2008-03-26 17:08:23
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A little bit vague for me too, I didnt really understand what was the idea behind it. A bit of a tidy up and edit and Im sure it would be good.

Title article: The Church- Part 5- Meeting of Minds
Date: 2008-03-26 11:04:41
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Thanks for your kind comments, doing No6 at the moment, should be done over the weekend. I am glad they are being enjoyed, John

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Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)

 Created On: 07/10/2008 09:57:53
dude, the Church fucking rules!
Christian Wright (The 13th)

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 Created On: 04/11/2008 12:41:21
Love your stories mate.Got to say hastings hospital and the church are my favourite.Not quite sure about your football team choice but you cant be perfect.

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