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john mccuaig (celtic1888)
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About Myself: Born 1968, engineering Manager, love Horror stories esp. zombie and "end of the world". Born in Glasgow but now live in London, kids have gone so just my good lady and I. We also just got two puppy dalmations- now they are real horrors! The Church is the first thing I have written since school.

Stories


Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
Dec 17, 2008Going OutHorror 147
Sep 20, 2008The Church- Part 12- Sylvies Flat, Chapter 12Horror 173
Sep 14, 2008The Church Part 11- A little trip, Chapter 11Horror 174
Sep 13, 2008Behind Blue Eyes- Chapter Two, Chapter 2Mystery 179
Aug 10, 2008The Church Part 10- The Sickness, Chapter 10Horror 214
Jul 29, 2008E.M.P, Chapter 1Science Fiction 190
Jul 14, 2008Behind Blue Eyes, Chapter 1Mystery 263
Jul 14, 2008The Church Part 9- Working Together, Chapter 9Horror 211
May 2, 2008The Church- Part 8- We must try for peaceHorror 258
Apr 8, 2008The Master Plan- Part 1Science Fiction 230
Apr 5, 2008The Church- Part 7- The Beginning of the EndHorror 267
Mar 30, 2008The Church- Part 6- Let the Battle commenceHorror 293
Mar 27, 2008The Life of a FlowerMiscellaneous Stories 292
Mar 24, 2008If I could turn back timeMiscellaneous Stories 407
Mar 20, 2008The Church- Part 5- Meeting of MindsHorror 303
Mar 19, 2008The Last MinuteMiscellaneous Stories 466
Mar 18, 2008Hastings HospitalMystery 367
Mar 12, 2008The Church- Part 4- The ReturnHorror 354
Feb 23, 2008The Church- Part 3- The Search BeginsHorror 350
Feb 16, 2008The Church- Part 2- The Order of thingsHorror 357
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Title article: Horror Shoppe in Athens, Chapter 3
Date: 2008-09-13 13:46:19
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Good to see the personal danger but the actual killing scene was basically nowhere to be seen. Still interesting but needs a bit more of the mc facing the danger. Keep going, looking forward to the next one.

Title article: Horror Shoppe in Athens, Chapter 2
Date: 2008-09-13 11:37:39
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As sebcoco says you could do with it being a bit more personal. Perhaps the radio should warn him of dangers to himself or make him try to prevent the accidents. You need to insert some elememts of danger. Even so i still enjoyed this and will look out for chapter 3. John.

Title article: Horror shoppe in Athens Texas, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-09-13 11:26:44
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Nice work, looking forward to chapter two. As already stated could do with a little work on the structure so it reads a bit more easilly but still fun to read.

Title article: The Church- Part 8- We must try for peace
Date: 2008-05-02 09:33:46
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Sorry its taken so long for this part to come out but i have been very busy. This part is probably a bit slow but i think its needed to set the scene for the rest of the story.

Title article: Christmas of the Dead
Date: 2008-04-12 10:55:17
Well done
Cracking story, well paced, very enjoyable.

Title article: darkness
Date: 2008-04-06 07:08:27
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Its a lot better now you have edited it, well done.

Title article: The Mirror
Date: 2008-04-06 06:57:30
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Interesting story, fun to read. Bit confused in places but still worth the read.

Title article: Again! AGAIN!!
Date: 2008-04-06 05:04:58
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Sorry but I didnt understand this at all, maybe worth a comment from the author to explain a bit?

Title article: War is Hell
Date: 2008-04-06 01:51:46
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Pretty hard to read due to the grammar but fairly enjoyable anyway. With a good edit I am sure it will be far better. Good effort

Title article: Writer's Block (story is currently offline)
Date: 2008-04-06 01:38:15
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Well done, would like to read the full version when you have done it.

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Max Booth III (Chainsaw Enema)

 Created On: 07/10/2008 11:57:53
dude, the Church fucking rules!
Christian Wright (FRANTIC)

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 Created On: 04/11/2008 14:41:21
Love your stories mate.Got to say hastings hospital and the church are my favourite.Not quite sure about your football team choice but you cant be perfect.

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