Triple the Trouble, Chapter 1

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About Myself: I'm a 30-something living in North Carolina. I write for fun, and am looking for some critiques.

My literary heros include Stephen King, Dean Koontz, John Saul, and E.A. Poe. If you are looking for a really good short story, check out Dean Koontz's "Kittens" from his book Strange Highways. Also, check out Raymond Carver's "Little Things" (aka "Popular Mechanics"). And, if you can find it, a short called "The Old Black Hat" by Gary Raisor. Classic.

Also, for reading material, I enjoy comic books. Not only the Spider-Man, Batman, X-Men variety, but also Calvin and Hobbes, Zits, and Non-Sequitor. Some good reading right there, I tell you.

Stories


Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
Jul 11, 2008Thoughts from a LoserPoetry 217
Jul 7, 2008DeathPoetry 173
Jun 17, 2008Sweet PerfumePoetry 208
Jun 16, 2008May Before NovemberPoetry 140
Jun 14, 2008One Night at Denny'sHumor 226
Jun 14, 2008House of PainPoetry 149
Jun 12, 2008Old Habits Die HardMiscellaneous Stories 297
Feb 16, 2008FulfilledHorror 521

Comments

Title article: Blind
Date: 2008-07-11 12:31:14

I really enjoyed this poem. It brings around some great thoughts that I'm sure many people can relate to. Faith is, unfortunately, something that not everybody understands.

Title article: Stalker Shopping
Date: 2008-07-11 12:26:34

I usually don't dig humor stories, cause they're usually dumb, but this one was worth it. The only thing I would suggest would be to spend a little more time stalking the girl. Hide behind aisles, peek around corners, etc. Over all, though, it was a hilarious story.

Title article: Pulled Apart
Date: 2008-07-10 15:09:15

Wouldn't you know, I just don't dig it. I understand the meaning of what your saying, and I like that. In other words, the topic and mood are good. However, I didn't think the poem flowed very well at all, and the rhyming words didn't really rhyme. 
I hate to be the one to rain on your barbecue, but those are things that I take seriously.

Title article: Death to Amatayo
Date: 2008-07-10 15:02:12

Ok, so, I liked the way the words were on both sides, and I thought that the way it was written was very good, but I'm just not understanding Amatayo's split personality thing. Maybe I'm ignernt. So be it.

Title article: Driving Ms. Daisy
Date: 2008-07-10 14:46:54

This story has offended my values. 
 
Ok, seriously though. I can believe that he found a 77-year-old woman attractive. There are quite a few attractive older women out there. The thing that I'm having a problem with- and I'm suprised that it wasn't addressed yet- is that he was banging his grandma. That's just plain disturbing. The sex scenes were well written, as was everything else in the story. 
I like the title, too. "Driving Ms. Daisy". Dual meanings rock.

Title article: Frantic, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-07-08 17:56:09

This is a great piece of fiction! However, elenalda is right: you need to be a little more clear, especially when the point of view changes from one person to another. That's tough to do, especially when it's told from a first person narration. You have your work cut out for you, but so far so good.

Title article: The Letter
Date: 2008-07-08 17:46:41

That was one of the saddest stories I've ever read. I'm scared that I may be turning into that person, too. I've been spending a lot of time on my laptop lately, and quite a bit of that time is on this site. Maybe I should... you know... stop rating stories.

Title article: Unconscious Revenge
Date: 2008-07-08 17:21:29

Not bad. 
I have a confession: I daydream of getting revenge on one of my exes like that. Grudges should wear off, but sometimes they don't. Some pain doesn't die so easily, I guess.

Title article: M-T Barrel Bar
Date: 2008-07-08 16:25:02

This story is an example of Murphy's Law at work. 
Have you ever read "An Occurrence at Owl Creek Bridge" by Ambrose Bierce? Same basic ending. 
Not a horrible story.

Title article: The Gift
Date: 2008-07-08 16:05:13

I thought the story was great. I'm also not sure I understand the relationship between losing the cross and the conversation with the homeless man, but the story itself felt genuine somehow. 
I liked the part about the only reward for being in the mall ws the plethora of erect nipples. That was hilarious.

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07/14/2008 17:09:50Re:Movies So Stupid They Make You LaughOff-Topic4175
07/12/2008 20:00:59Re:IrritatingOff-Topic155
07/12/2008 19:25:28IrritatingOff-Topic155
07/10/2008 13:20:39Re:Let's clear the airOff-Topic2135
07/08/2008 13:31:48Re:Does anyone write in long hand anymore?Off-Topic1188
07/07/2008 17:37:21Re:whoa, hold the phone!Off-Topic353
07/06/2008 17:26:48Re:Ideas To Improve StoriesvilleOff-Topic1853
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Nathan Weaver (onyxdragon)

missouri
 Created On: 10/01/2008 15:42:06
FYI, I finally finished and posted the second chapter to "The Fall of Babylon."
Max Booth III (Chainsaw Enema)

 Created On: 07/12/2008 12:18:59
Dude, that hand is beyond weird looking

Amie Kerlin (lemon)

in the orchard
 Created On: 07/09/2008 21:03:17
hey, I just wanted to stop by and let you know that I enjoy your work. keep it coming =]

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