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Brandon Scott (brandon_scott)
Hits 1937
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Member Since 02/16/2008
Last Online 01/02/2009
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About Myself: I'm a 30-something living in North Carolina. I write for fun, and am looking for some critiques.

My literary heros include Stephen King, Dean Koontz, John Saul, and E.A. Poe. If you are looking for a really good short story, check out Dean Koontz's "Kittens" from his book Strange Highways. Also, check out Raymond Carver's "Little Things" (aka "Popular Mechanics"). And, if you can find it, a short called "The Old Black Hat" by Gary Raisor. Classic.

Also, for reading material, I enjoy comic books. Not only the Spider-Man, Batman, X-Men variety, but also Calvin and Hobbes, Zits, and Non-Sequitor. Some good reading right there, I tell you.

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Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
Jul 11, 2008Thoughts from a LoserPoetry 217
Jul 7, 2008DeathPoetry 173
Jun 17, 2008Sweet PerfumePoetry 208
Jun 16, 2008May Before NovemberPoetry 140
Jun 14, 2008One Night at Denny'sHumor 226
Jun 14, 2008House of PainPoetry 149
Jun 12, 2008Old Habits Die HardMiscellaneous Stories 297
Feb 16, 2008FulfilledHorror 521

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Title article: Behind Blue Eyes, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-07-14 17:46:41

Not being one to normally enjoy a series story, I was going to skip over this one. I'm glad I didn't. This was very well told, and I'm finding myself looking forward to seeing what happens next. Good job.

Title article: Vancouver
Date: 2008-07-14 17:30:47

A poem aboot a place in Canadia, eh? I bet you'd like to punch those of us who make fun of Canadian accents, eh? I'll make this comment worth your time. 
This was written very well, and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. I love the city, and Phil was right when he said it could be any city. The descriptions were great, and I could picture myself standing there looking around. Very well done. Eh? :-)

Title article: HELL'S MONOPOLY, Chapter 0
Date: 2008-07-14 17:23:14

Your writing has improved, young Jake! This has the potential to be an incredibly interesting and frightening series, and I look forward to what lies ahead. Well done!

Title article: The Hecatomb, Chapter 6
Date: 2008-07-14 17:12:21

Once again, you floor me. This was an excellent chapter in a phenomenal series, and that's not a compliment that I give lightly and freely to everybody. As always, this will go into the favorites, and I will wait anxiously for the next chapter.

Title article: This Internal Poison
Date: 2008-07-14 17:02:49

As I was reading it, I thought, "Not another 'I hate me' poem!". However, it turned out to be pretty good. I'm not really fond of the last line, either, and I'll tell you why: "Where this poison I've created just keeps getting fed"... is the poison getting fed, or are you feeding off of the poison? 
 
I just entered that weird phase where, if you say a word too many times, you lose its meaning. The word "fed" is nonsensical to me right now. 
 
Good poem.

Title article: To Whom It May Concern
Date: 2008-07-13 19:58:49

Alfred, I just gained some new respect for you.

Title article: The One
Date: 2008-07-13 19:48:01

You have absolutely done it! I loved this poem, because it says exactly that which we all feel, and you, Amie, know who "we" are. You've put into words what I ashamedly feel so often. This is a favorite. Keep writing!

Title article: A Dark Poetic Tale of Woe
Date: 2008-07-13 19:34:32

This is good. I like poems like this that have the same letter throughout (there's a word for it, but shit if I can remember what it is). I think it takes talent to write a poem in such a manner and have it still make sense at the end. Well done.

Title article: Her Most Loyal Man
Date: 2008-07-13 18:58:48

Wow, that was really good, in a creepy, stalker sort of way. I agree that it's nice to see a non-rhyming poem again. This was well written and flowed well. Keep up the good work.

Title article: To Whom It May Concern
Date: 2008-07-13 18:54:34

I liked it. I think that some very good points were made in this story, and it has a great twist at the end (at first I thought it was a suicide note). I see nothing wrong with this. 
 
As far as Alfred is concerned, he has yet to post a story, which, to me, means that he isn't much of a writer. I don't mind non-writers coming onto this site to read and leave comments; HOWEVER, his comments have often been rude and unnecessary, and not helpful whatsoever. I think everyone should just ignore his comments. If he's not happy with the writing on this site, let's see him do better.

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07/14/2008 17:09:50Re:Movies So Stupid They Make You LaughOff-Topic4175
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07/10/2008 13:20:39Re:Let's clear the airOff-Topic2136
07/08/2008 13:31:48Re:Does anyone write in long hand anymore?Off-Topic1188
07/07/2008 17:37:21Re:whoa, hold the phone!Off-Topic353
07/06/2008 17:26:48Re:Ideas To Improve StoriesvilleOff-Topic1853
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OFFLINE Project 30 (Project 30)
OFFLINE Philip Neale (philneale1952)
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Nathan Weaver (onyxdragon)

missouri
Created On: 10/01/2008 15:42:06

FYI, I finally finished and posted the second chapter to "The Fall of Babylon."

Max Booth III (Chainsaw Enema)

Created On: 07/12/2008 12:18:59

Dude, that hand is beyond weird looking

Amie Kerlin (lemon)

in the orchard
Created On: 07/09/2008 21:03:17

hey, I just wanted to stop by and let you know that I enjoy your work. keep it coming =]

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