Triple the Trouble, Chapter 1

Triple the Trouble A Cynical Chick Flick...

Giuseppe Mahldolvi

Peppe walked each day to a bench located at the...
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Title article: Picture-Perfect
Date: 2008-01-17 23:49:54

Wellwritten, interesting. I liked it.

Title article: Bourbon Legends
Date: 2008-01-13 23:20:49

Great writing Andrew. Wonderful stoyline, got me from start to finish. Loved it!

Title article: Regret
Date: 2008-01-13 16:02:59

Liked the style, but the connection between the start and finish is rather tenuous. Good storyline.

Title article: In the shadows
Date: 2008-01-12 02:32:31

Captured the scariness really well, however I too would like to know what happens next. 
A sequel maybe? please.

Title article: Teeming
Date: 2008-01-08 02:39:12

WOW!!!!

Title article: Satine's Musings On Her Love
Date: 2008-01-04 23:31:23

I like it. thought the metaphores were slightly overdone but worked well anyway. really captured your character.

Title article: In the End
Date: 2008-01-04 02:21:37

this left me a bit confused. was fred a girl friend or counselor?was chris hurting himself just to be noticed or was he really suicidal? 
Don't wish to be too pedantic, but he called "threw" an open window. "sitting on the floor where he stood." good storyline, perhaps a little more editing. well done,.i haven't got that far yet.

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