Elijah

The distant door closed shut behind him with a click....

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DateTitleCategoryHits
Oct 29, 2008SOMETIMES IT PAYS TO BE FIRSTMiscellaneous Stories 86
Sep 30, 2008A WALK IN THE PARKMiscellaneous Stories 158
Mar 26, 2008CYCLONE CHARLIEMiscellaneous Stories 265
Feb 3, 2008"HAPPY ANNIVERSARY LOVE"Miscellaneous Stories 323
Jan 11, 2008THE BIGGER THE BETTERMiscellaneous Stories 307

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Title article: the marble
Date: 2008-10-03 05:03:50

Couldn't agree more. Wonderful, evocative descriptions that make the story come to life. "A smile that carved it's way into her dough skin........." Wow. Great writing. Well done.

Title article: Why, Daddy?
Date: 2008-09-30 03:13:22

Wonderful. One of the best pieces of writing I have read on this site. You have a talent for getting the atmosphere just right. Not too poignant or sentimental. Like I said, just right. Well done. Give us more.

Title article: Light Bringer
Date: 2008-09-24 05:18:33

very evocative writing.Did the lightbringer epitomise all mankind or am I putting my own construction on your story? Whatever, it was a thought provoking piece of work. 
Hate to nit pick but I hope you meant disdain, not distain. Well done.

Title article: You Can't Get There From Here
Date: 2008-09-24 02:44:35

well written story.If this is an actual happening, then I sympathise with the despatchers. 
Made me smile and entertained me at the same time.You have a good style and good use of words. 
Good job.

Title article: She Said
Date: 2008-09-22 05:00:14

Liked the format and the rhyme. 
Good story too. I guess a lot of us could relate to this situation. And yeah, would be good set to a tune.

Title article: Acorns Don't Fall Far
Date: 2008-09-22 04:53:00

This is good.Well written and constructed. Love the way he was pulled back into shape and the wink was beautiful. What chance have those boys got?

Title article: shyness and love
Date: 2008-04-02 03:53:18

If that really is a true story, then I say remember you're still only 18. Heaps of time. 
Think positive, think beautiful and that's how you will be perceived. Good luck. 
Looking back, I see this was published on April Ist. 
Have you sucked us all in??

Title article: my baby
Date: 2008-03-31 01:32:54

A lovely vignette. To condense a mother's feelings for her child, from birth to adulthood in so few words is very clever. 
Well done Kasey.

Title article: Broken and bleeding re edited
Date: 2008-03-29 05:27:05

I agree with Dirk, except I would say forget the last TWO sentences. Good yarn otherwise. Simple spelling mistakes and missing words are distracting. 
Keep writing Billy.

Title article: Speed Bump
Date: 2008-03-28 00:32:46

Well written, thoughtful, entertaining. 
You have a real talent man. More please!

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