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(Author's note: It's the first chapter to an attempt...

It was her screaming, “Oh my god Jim!”...

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Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Jan 3, 2009	YOUNG NICK	Miscellaneous Stories	55
Nov 26, 2008	STEVE'S GIRLS	Miscellaneous Stories	69
Oct 29, 2008	SOMETIMES IT PAYS TO BE FIRST	Miscellaneous Stories	113
Sep 30, 2008	A WALK IN THE PARK	Miscellaneous Stories	180
Mar 26, 2008	CYCLONE CHARLIE	Miscellaneous Stories	289
Feb 3, 2008	"HAPPY ANNIVERSARY LOVE"	Miscellaneous Stories	345
Jan 11, 2008	THE BIGGER THE BETTER	Miscellaneous Stories	335

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Total number of comments: 68

Title article: Delete 'n Recycle
Date: 2009-01-07 00:45:31

The first job of a writer, and in particular a poet, is to tell a story. You have that talent in abundance. I have just found your work on this site and will be looking for more. Keep 'em coming.

Title article: Traveling
Date: 2009-01-07 00:36:45

A nice poem. Liked the rhythym and the rhyming to tell a lovely story.
It is a very good illustration of how we can use our imagination to do things we are maybe not physically capable of. Well done!

Title article: Hope
Date: 2009-01-01 22:11:31

If this xxxxx ever comes back, please give him the big heave ho.He has hurt you far too much. Don't give him another chance.

Now please tell me this is not a personal experience. Just a ficticious poem, albiet a lovely one.

Title article: Our World Our Future...
Date: 2009-01-01 22:02:13

I liked this a lot. It seems like a lot to hope for, but it also makes a lot of sense. If only we all would embrace your ideals, then just maybe there is some hope for the future. Please let this poem be prophetic.
Well done!!

Title article: They Came From The Sky
Date: 2008-12-31 19:18:03

A well written, prophetic piece. I usually prefer my poetry to rhyme(a little old fashioned I know), but this one got me. Good job.

Title article: Foreign Currency
Date: 2008-12-31 19:08:40

An interesting and well written story. I liked the way you portrayed the young girl's fear and revulsion.
Have to say though, it was an effort to read it. A larger font would have made it so much easier. I'm afraid some will pass it up for that reason, which is a pity. It's a good story.

Title article: Seconds
Date: 2008-12-30 17:17:19

My mistake. That should have been prerogative.

Title article: Seconds
Date: 2008-12-30 17:08:39

This is a very good piece.I guess we could pick a few things that could be changed to make it even better, but that's not my perogative.
I do agree though that with some professional editing it could well be publishable. Write on.

Title article: Sherman
Date: 2008-12-27 18:15:54

Congratulations! A lovely story, beautifully told. Your seasonal descriptions were wonderful. Touchingly evocative and thoughtful with just enough sentiment, without being maudlin.
Had me hooked from the first sentence. As one of this sites more senior members, it was nice to see some sympathy for the little OLD horse. As Phil said, keep writing these stories, please.

Title article: Erotic Tranquility
Date: 2008-12-26 02:53:34

Well done. An interesting look at a young man's sexual fantasies. Just one of the many trials we face as we approach "maturity". I'm not ashamed to say that I can relate. Keep it up.(no pun intended}

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